manveer :an eternal love story (ch 31-pg 92)ended

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Posted: 13 years ago
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guys i m a silent reader but after reading such talented writers in this forums i decided to write my heart out
but i hav made some changes in the story characters as well as in theirbehaviour so if u all doesnt like it so plz inform as i m not a good writer so here is the character sketches
<font color="#cc6633" size="5">character sketches</font>
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udayveer:he is the yuvraaj of jaigarh and the youngest buissness man ,an eligible bachlor,.young handsome hunk ,any girl would die over his one look.he ih manipulative emotions r not in his life as he has tore this page from his life after his beloved one went far away from him,he is a mystery that no one knows and on one can solve</font>
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manyata:she is the most beautiful girl that any man would have.she is intelligent,a princess of devgarh but unknown to her.she is an orphan as known to every one and her too.her life is a mystery to her.she hardly knows about her accept her her name.she is strong lovely charming and can protect herself.
unnati:she is the little sister of our prince udayver.she is sweet and a support to her brotther .she is the reason who has kept a corner of love alive in the heart of her brother
jaynandini:known as j popularly.she is the younger sister of manyata.she has everything a girl dream for accept some one to whom she can share her feelings .she had heard about her sister m but hadnt seen her she often pray that she can meet her(yes in my ff j is good because i believe that she is a strong character and i dont want to break the sisterly bond)
vijay:he is the cousin of the devgarh princesses.he is a fun .he is only one support left in the palace for j.he too is egarly waiting for manyata
maya:she is the in love with uadayveer.her character would be known in the tory further
aakash:(sorry guys but i hav to put him as he is the important part in manveer story)he loves manyata.
rajmata:the queen of devgarh and grandmother of manyata j and vijay
brijraj:father of manyata and j.he is very strict
komal:mother of manyata and j.she is very sweet and caring
giriraj;father of uday and unnati.he only have one aim in life to get uday married with the yuvraani of devgarh so jaigarh could be more powerful
so guys these are the characters of my story i would soon be updating the ff i m just writing it

character sketches - pg 1
prologue-pg 1
chapter 1-pg 2
chapter 2-pg 5
chapter 3-pg 6
chapter 4-pg 8
chapter 5-pg 11
chapter 6-pg 13
<div>chapter 7-pg 17
chapter 8-pg 20
chapter 9-pg 22
chapter 10-pg 24
chapter 11-pg 26
chapter 12-pg28
chapter 13-pg 31
chapter 14-pg 33
chapter 15-pg 36
chapter 16-pg 38
chapter 17-pg 41
chapter 18-pg 43
chapter 19-pg 45
chapter 20-pg 48
chapter 22-pg 55
chapter 23-pg 60
chapter 24-pg 65
chapter 25-pg 68
chapter 26-pg 74
chapter 27-pg 81
chapter 28-pg 84
chapter 29-pg 87
chapter 30-pg 91
chapter 31-pg92(end chapter)
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Sakura24 thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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There are some people like your brother...
but I like Uday's character too he's one of the best
And yeah do continue with this ff it sounds great!!!
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Edited by Cham42195 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Prologue

In the estate of jaigarh a servent ran through the doors with the files "bring that fast u fool.it should be on my desk didn't u know " servent keep those files on the desk.

"now GET LOST " out side the palace the servent comes out hanging his face sadly and says to his companion " arrey yaar uday sir k samne toh sabki haalat kharab ho jaati hai toh mein kya cheez hoon bas poore din kaam kaam ." another one " pata nahi koi insaan itna kaam kaise kar sakta hai yeah kaam bhi aur flirt bhi" .

"kal raat koi nayi rajkumari k saath the "

"par pyaar kisi se nahi. Pyaar naam toh inki jindagi mein hai hi nahi"

"pata nahi inke liye kaun bani hai"

Here in an orphanage in Mumbai, a small girl enters running and shouting "monu di monu diii," gets bump to someone "mo..nu mo..nu di'"said choking "nun is finding u she is very angry she will beat u with that bada wala stick" a girl in her twenties sat on her knees in front of that little girl "maine who sab sachhi mein jaan kar nahi kiya galti se ho gaya ab mein kya karu".a girl enters in the room "toh phir kisne kaha tha tujhe moniya ke tu apni karate ki practice kar kar ke uss table ko tod de"

Moniya turns around to look her very best friend shivangi "main toh bas aise hi '" with a confusion look

Shivangi "pata nahi tera kya hoga "

"haan haan ab mujhe kahin par chupa jaldi se"

"nahi bilkul nahi"

"nahi'.achha toh phir mujhe koi aur raasta doondhna padega"

"kya"

"mujhe kisi ko call karna padega''.pata hai kise" suddenly the little girl says " neel bhaiya ko"

Shivengi opens her mouth in shock "tu'''. Mein tujhe" and runs behind her "tere liye bhi koi aayega tab tujhe dekhungi mein"

"dekh lena haan nahi toh.."

A pair of eyes were looking the running figure of manyata "ofcourse aayega nahi kabse aagaya hai moniya'"

To be continue

Edited by jazzthakur - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Interesting prologue.
Do add me to your pm list if any..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Great pr0logue add me in ur pm list n update s0on
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow the prologue seems to be awesome plz update the first part soon and can u please add me to me ur pm list
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Posted: 13 years ago
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interesting prologue.
Do continue soon
And do PM me when you update next...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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friends i will surely update ASAP but dont know how to send pm
but dont worry i will try to learn how to send it
Edited by jazzthakur - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: jazzthakur

friends i will surely update ASAP but dont know how to send pm
but dont worry i will try to learn how to send it

hey pliz add me in ur pm list please...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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guys add me to ur buddy list for recieving the pm of this ff
Edited by jazzthakur - 13 years ago

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