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Chapter 16

Uday:(with pain )princess

Manyata lifted her head,uday saw the streams of tears flowing.he rushed to her and sat with her

M:uday,sach meine aisa kuch nahi kiya

Uday:hum jante hain princess aap aisa kuch nahi kar sakti

M:par uday who aisa kaise kar sakta hai

Uday:princess..uski baton par dyaan mat do(he wiped her tears)

M:uday chalo mein abhi yeh sab clear kar dongi

Uday:princess shant ho jaao

M:kaise shaant ho jaao uday,aaj media ne mere pariwaar ke bare mein kya kya nahi kaha .

Uday:toh itne gusse ka kya karogi

M:uss aakash ke haath pair fracture kar dongi

Uday:tum ek rajkumari ho princess ,moniya nahi

M:toh kya karun shaant baith kar tamasha dekhu

Uday:humne aisa kab kaha

M:toh phir kya karun

Uday:pehle apna gussa shaant karo,'..ab ye socho ke is waqt tum iss problem se kaise bahar niklogi jisse tumhari family ki reputation par koi daag na rahe

Moniya bankar nahi manyata bankar,devgarh ki honewali yuvrani bankar socho princess.

Tumhe usse saza jaroor deni hai manyta aur moniya dono bankar saza dogi par dono naamon se alag ho kar.c'mon princess apne gusse ko dabana sikho waqt aane par hi isse saailab bankar apne dushman par barsana

M:aww''.matlab mujhe kuch aisa karna hoga jisse who apne hi jaal mein khud phas jaaye

Uday:exactly right princess

Manyata smiled and gave a hi-fi to uday

M:mein samajh gayi uday mujhe kya karna hai,ab tu dekhta jaa mein use kaise line pe laati hu,haan nahi toh.

Uday:chalo princess ab hum chalete hain tum se kal hi mulakat hogi

M:aur who bhi ek dhamake ke saath,'..kal jaroor aana uday

Uday:haan nahi toh

When uday was leaving the mahal he saw J was steaming in anger

Uday:j.. kya hua aaj kis par apna kehar barsane jaa rahi ho

J:uss loser aakash par

Uday:kyun j ho sakta hai manyata sach mein uss majnu se pyaar karti ho

J:hum jante hain uday jiji use kabhi pyaar nahi kar sakti

Uday:ho bhi sakta hai ,u don't know J

J:matlab wo eww

Uday just smirked and said "humari pyaari saali J..tumhe manyata ki choice par bharosa nahi hai kya

J:matlab jiji use pasand nahi karti right

Uday:exactly right

J:toh hum use nahi chodenge

Uday:j.. just let manyata handle this matter

J:but..

Uday just circled j "J.. manyata kal ek aisa rocket chodengi ,ki uss aakash k pyaar ki aatish baazi kamaal ki hogi"

Manyata was in her room calling someone

"jee haan kal aap ek press conference arrange kijiye"

"ok maam"

"aur haan aakash ko bhi bulawa bhejiye,aur saare press waalon se kehiyega ki hum apne aur aakash k rishte ka confession kal sab ke saamne denge"

"right maam"

Mean while at maya's house

Maya:so aakash kal tumhari pyaari moniya ne tumhe apne ghar bulaya hai

Aakash:haan maya kal wo sabke saamne mujhse apne pyaar ka ijhaar karegi

Maya:good aur uday humesha humesha ke liye mera ho jaayega

Aakash:mein kal hi usse shaadi ki baat bhi kar lunga

Maya:wow tum toh bohot fast ho yaar

Aakash:banna padt hai kahin wo phir mujhse door na ho jaaye

Maya:all the best

Aakash:thanx maya tumhare madad ke begair aisa nahi hota

Next morning uday was running on his treadmill when his father maharaj giriraj entered furiously

Giri:uday beta,yeh hum kya sun rahe hai

Uday:dad aap itni subah subah itna hyper kyu ho rahe hai,aisa kya hua?(still running)

Giri:khabar hi aisi hai

Uday:wat happen dada?

He walked down from the mill and walked to the eend of the room.giriraj followed him

Giri:uday aap aise kaise shaant ho sakte ho

Uday:ohhfo dad hua kya

Giri:manyata ne press conference bulayi hai

Uday(pouring the juice in the glass)wow dad amazing aapko toh khush hona chahiye ke wo apni jimedaari samajh rahi hai

Giri:unhone press apne aur aakash ki rishte ki announcement karne ke liye bulayi hai

Uday:(still smirking and drinking his juice)at last saari confusion toh dur hogi

Giri:uday humme kuch samajh nahi aa raha hai

Uday:dad just chill,aap itna stress mat lijiye

Giri:aise kaise hath pe hath dhare baithe rahe hum

Uday:kyunki ab ye matter devgarh ki yuvrani handle karengi,koi aam ladki moniya nahi

Giri:ek toh manyata ne shaadi se inkaar kar diya upar se ab ye 'I hope sab theek hi ho..(and hi leaves the room)

Uday:sab theek hi hoga dad,ye baat alg hai ke hum chahte hai ke wo majnu manyata aur moniya dono ke faislon se hokar gujre.aapka pehla imtehaan aaj hai princess.

Lets see app isse kaise handle karti hain..

So guys how was this

I know it was bit boring actually very boring and short

Sorry for this friends,but jitna time milta hai utna I try to update it

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hey buddy that was such an amazing update:)do continue when u hav time..