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Posted: 13 years ago
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loved it
update soon
thnks for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
#32
wow that was awesome oops first meeting was with a slap hope manyata finds out that uday was only after her so she can give her bracelet back thinking if that slap will keep on remind uday of manyata and lol it had to end der hope akash doesn't get to propose to manyata update soon and thanks for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesome...awesome... N awesome.Lovd it.waiting for ur next update.continue soon.n thanks for the pm.
Edited by princessnia - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Amazing n0w letx c how uday reactx update s0on
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Loved the update!! Continue soon n thanks for the pm!!:)
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Hey guys here the next part

Chapter 3

'how dare she?who is she?what did she think of herself?...i was just trying to return her belonging to her…and she just…',these thoughts were running in his mind,

The stream of anger can be clearly seen in his eyes.manyata got scared by his look,she was about to run from that very sight of him when….he grabbed her by her waist.

He was showered by her colourful words "kutte kamine halket vede ,chod mujhe….jaane de…jane de mujhe warna tere liye accha nahi hoga,haan nahi toh"

he was shocked to here those words from her and his anger raised.

she struggle hard to get free but all in vain.the more she struggle,the closer he pulled her and bought her closer…and closer….they were just inches apart.

Manyata's eyelashes met and closed by this close proximity.she stopped struggling,by realizing the fact that is was just waste of her energy.

Uday's anger was rising but….when she closed her eyes a soft wind blowed across them which blew away his anger.he stared at her frightened face,he was amazed by her natural beauty.

He caressed her lips with his thumb finger and leaned in to kiss those rosy lips of her.

Manyata could feel his warm breath on her lips ,she knew that what shall going to happened.she shutted her eyes more strongly and her lips shivered coz of his warm breath on her.

He noticed the fear on her face and the contant shivering of her

A smile crossed his face and he leaned towards her ears and whispered

"not every person is alike.some are intended to help,think before your action"

And loosened his grip on her.she opened her eyes and looked in his

He saw deep in her eyes and thought 'why does her eyes seems so similar?'

She jerked and moved apart from him.she run from him as fast as she could.

He shouted from back "OH,MISS.HAAN NAHI TOH……..LITSEN………."

But she didn't stoped and a bus came from behind,she got into it and went to her way leaving him behind.

Uday:why it seems that I again lost someone beloved,some part of me again got lost

Uday entered in his room,he walked to the mirror and stared his reflection.then he slipped his one hand in his left pocket and removed the same bracelet with M on it.he holded it in his one hand and and stared himself in the mirror.

He touched the same spot on his cheecks where she slammed her hand,his eyes got closed and a small smile formed on his face.

"dada"

A voice bought him back to the senses,he turned to respond,his younger sister who entered in his room when he was engrossed in his feelings.

Unnati:dada,are u ok? . she had called him number of times.

Uday:of course choti,what would happen to me

Unnati:I was calling for u from when,is every thing alright dada?

Uday:yeah chutki,every th………..

Unnati:wow,dada that is so pretty.

Unnati pointed towards the bracelet in his hand

Unnati:is that for me……..but my name doesn't start with M

Uday:(looking at the bracelet)kisi amanat hai chutki.

He gives his signature smirk and again his hand reached to his face remembering the event.unnati looks at him.

Unnati:dada kuch toh hai,I don't know what but kuch toh hua hai.aap kitne alag behave kar rahe ho dada,and aap apne gaalon ko kyu nihaar rahe ho,did again some hot chik gave u a kiss?(waiting for him to answer)

Uday:hot chik toh nahi par natural beauty toh thi,aur kiss toh nahi par thappad toh de hi diya ussne(while giving a smirk)

Unnati was shocked at his answer.

Unnati:WAT!!! SHE SLAPPED U

Uday:sshhh choti.itna chillane ki jaroorat nahi hai

Unnati: (controlling her self)she slapped u….who?why?what did u do?

Uday:bas …choti itne sawaal ek saath….waise I don't know her,but she was intereting, aur rahi baat punishment ki toh wo toh hum use zaroor denge

Unnati:are u sure dada k aap use saza de paaoge

Uday:koi shak

She turned him towards the mirror and points at his reflection

Unnati:I couldn't see any complaint in your eyes

And she walks towards the door to leave

Unnati:dada hum usse zaroor milna chahenge and leaves the room.

Uday looks at himself and whispers "milna toh hum bhi use zaroor chahenge".

friends abhi shayad direct sunday or Monday there wil be next part coz I m going to a wedding

jaana pakka nahi hai,par agar mom ne force kiya toh jaana hi padega

read this part and don't forget to hit the like button and comment ,plz plz plz

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Fantabls part and thanx,,,,,,,,,,,,,,update fast :):):)
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Posted: 13 years ago
#38
Awesom part yaar.n thanks for the pm.
Edited by princessnia - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#39
Gr8 Part
Uday got slapped Manyata swearing at him is hillarious
Cont Soon Thx for the PM
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Posted: 13 years ago
#40
lovely!!!!!! bus jaldee sey uday ko pataa cha jaaye k woh manyata hai :)

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