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Posted: 13 years ago
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Just started reading your FF & I must admit that youu are a great writer (:
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nice!! Continue soon n thanks for the pm!!:)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesome update :3 can't wait for uv taking revenge . (:
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome...i loved it...thanks alooottt for the PM dear...and continue soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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thanks to all my friends for liking and commenting on my ff
it really encourage me
i will update ASAP😃😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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chapter -4

"moniya'''.moniya''.."

Akash came to the orphanage with manyata's favorite lilies.he got to know that manyata is not in the orphanage she went to the disc with shivangi.

There manayata reached the disc,someone gave her a punch from back, "ouch"

She turned and smiled in pleading look.

M:sorry,thoda late ho gayi''..sorry shivu''ek pagal se pala pada tha

Sh:ok but ab tujhe late aane ki punishment milegi''(taking a bag out)chal waha ek mall hai,tujhe yeh pehenana hoga aaj

They walked to the washroom in the mall

M: (looking at the dress)tujhe mera size nahi pata kya?...yeh bahut chota dress le aayi hai tu

Sh:natak band kar aur jaldi ready ho jaa

And she pushed her to change,and shivangi went out

Manyata came out and shivangi's mouth was opened in perfect O

She was wearing a white knee length dress and it was sleeveless,with silver high heels and light makeup she was breath-taking.a voice caught their attention

"hey beaytiful,looking gorgeous"

They turned n,there stood a tall,fair and good-looking hunk with a formal attire and shades on.

Both at once:neel'.

Shivangi run and gave him a hug,and moniya admired them with a smile.

Neel: how r u both?

Shivangi started her saga ,manyata smiled and gave an assuring look.

Neel:ok cool shivu dear,come lets go(and they trio leave)

Sh:whispers in m'ears)tu kuch bata rahi thi kisi pagal ke bare mein

Manyata whispered the whole story to her

Sh:god'ek dum filmi meeting,(excitedly)waise dikne mein kaisa tha? Bata na

M: tub hi na waha meri haalat kharab ho gayi thi

Sh:meine tujhse kya pucha ''.dikhne mein kaisa tha

Manyata:thik hi tha,waise uski aankho mein kuch tha(remembering the moment)jab usne mujhe unn ankhon se dekha'tab mere andar ek awaaz si aayi ke nhe maine kahi dekha hai pata nahi aisa kyu''.but

Sh:moniya are u alright

M:yeah why so?aisa kyu poch rahi hai

She pointed towards manyata's eyes which were wet

Sh:moniya ''chal jaane de hum ye sab baad mein decide karenge ok

M:yeah(wiping her tears)

Uday was getting late. He decided to enjoy today in his resto bar.he left his room and drived towards his hotel.paked his car and walked towards the gate and ,as he was approaching a hand caught him,he turned to look there stood a hot chik in red smiling at him

Uday:maya,so nice to see u again

Maya: (tracing her finger through hi face towards his lips) really ,I thought you must have forgotten me

Uday hold her hand

Uday:should i?...BTW u here

"we called her"

His eyes turned to look towards the soure of voice.

Uday:j and vijay banna''

J :yeah ,you said u moved on so we are helping you to move on

Uday: (moving towards her with his smirk)thanx'..j,so caring of u,how can I manage my life without u sweetheart

J:(with a disgusting look)whatever!!

And leaves to move in the club

Maya: (to uday)so chalein darling

Uday was about to answer when a sight caught his attention.two girls were approaching towards the gate of his hotel,they were busy talking some thing.the girl in white was looking breathing taking.her attire were modern but look with same innocence

Uday:miss.haan nahi toh'..(without removing his look)maya you carry on..i would join u'll

She walked in,here he walked towards the bouncer and whispered him some orders

Manyata,shivangi and neel walked to the club and the bouncer stopped them.

Bouncer:sorry sir but today only couple entries are allowed

Neel:what,but..

Boucers:its an order,sir.u cannot walk without a partner

Sh:neel.humara toh thik hai but moniya ka kya

M:don't worry tum log jaao ,mein orphanage chali jaati hoon

Better next time yaar

Neel:no moniya,mein kuch sochta hoon

M:didn't u heard couple entry hai,ab mere liye partner kaha se laaoge tum log.

Sh:chup. Humne kaha na hum kuch sochte hain.neel ab kisko iska parner banaye

"hum hai na"

They turned to look and were shocked to see who was standing in front of them.neel: (almost in whispering tone)yeh toh yuvraj udayveer singh hai.

M: (in shock)WAT!!!

Sh:yeah tujhe nahi pata kya'''.oh haan mein toh bhool gayi tu kaha magazine aur page 3 padhti hai

M thinking "hey bhagwan!yeh halkat veda yeh yuvraj hai"

Uday walked to them with his signature smirk

Uday:hum hai na.hum aapke partner ban jaate hain.afterall apne aaj jo hume gift diya uske liye thank you bhi toh kehna hai

Sh: (in her ears)do u know him?

Manyata:wahi hai bus stop wala

Sh:WAT! Tune isse thappad mara

Uday:I m waiting princess!!

M:firstly I m not any princess ,second(poking his chest with her index finger)mein mar bhi jaaongi par tumhare saath kabhi nahi,haan nahi toh

Uday:soch lo,tumhare dost wait kar rahe hain,agar humare saath nahi toh kiske saath

"mere saath" a hand curled around moniya's waist she turned and another shock covered her face

M: aakash tum!!

So guys how was this plz do hit like tab and comment plzz

Edited by jazzthakur - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#47
Nice update. Hope M goes inside with uday and not Akaash!! Pls pls pls!! :))

Thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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loved ur ff it is awesome and plz cont soon😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey, nice story!
keep writing 😊
and plis add me in ur pm list...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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ARGGHHH...THAT AKASH AGAIN...😡KABAB MAIN HADI KAHIN KA...
loved ur update...awesome...👏i was in total manveer land...😍loved it to the core i hope manayta uday ky sath hi disc main jay...😳
and yes thanks aloot for the PM...loved it...🤗

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