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Posted: 13 years ago
Oh no!! What did Maya do to Manyata?? You ae killing me with suspense!! Please update!! As fast as you can, loved it!

Simran :D...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Hey friends this is very short

So sorry for it

Chapter 20

Uday whispered in his breath "princess.."

The body was covered in blood and the face was almost dripped in blood and covered by her hairs.he slowly walked to her in utter shock,disbelieve.

First in the life time his hands got shivered,his eyes got moistened ,it only got tears once when he lost his mother and his beloved one but now it seems he lost her again.

Her blue dress was turned in red blood,he never got afraid on seeing blood,he was a royal.

Royalty and braveness runs in his veins,but today he felt afraid of turning her.

When he turned her,he got a shock on seeing the face with blood stains on it.

Vijay banna who was almost num on the view was on the verge of breaking down.

Uday:(nearly breakness in his voice)ye.. princess nahi.. hai

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Outside the club

Manyata was on the road side "ab ye uday kahan gaya,uss waiter ne toh kaha tha woh yahin hai aur mujhe bulaya hai,ye halkat veda bhi na"

She was wlking and searching him "uday..uday..kahan par ho tum,dekho pareshan mat karo mujhe jaldi aao warna accha nahi hoga ,haan nahi toh"

****-----****

Vijay run towards him.

All of them joined them and were equally shocked to see the body.she was the same girl with whom uday was dancing but there she was in pink and now she was in the same dress as of manyata.

Vb:uday banna ye toh..

Uday:toh manyata kahan hai?

He run towards the exit searching for her

Uday screamed out "MANYATA…..MANYATA……."

"UDAY…"

He turned to look over her.

she was smiling and was walking towards him when a silver car speeded towards her.

She was walking to him.uday sighed a breath of relief on seeing her safe but just another moment

"PRINCESS…."
the car speeded from the road in front of his eyes

But manyata was still standing there covering her face with her palms on it,the car run from there but unharmed her.

He run to her and took her into his embrass.

She was scared in that moment,she hugged him and holded him tightly.every-one reached there,but she was not willing to leave him.those fraction of seconds she couldn't forget as her life was on the verge of extinction.

Uday's hand was covered with blood of thatdead girl.when she noticed it she looked at him with questioning eyes.

J:thank god jiji u r alright (sobbing)humme laga wo ladki uss kamre mein aap ..woh..woh ..aap ho

M:(still holding uday's hand)ladki?
uday wanted them to stop but before that shivangi narrated her the whole incident

Manyata was now scared even more ,she holded uday's hand more firmly

Uday:hum gaadi nikalte hain.

But still she was holding his hands,he understood that she needs his support.

****------****

They all reached the mahal.already this news were in the ears of all the elders

When they entered komal hugged manyata.

It was decided that jaigarh family would stay in this mahal.

This matter was serious as the murder occurred in their joined hotel and even they hav to sought out the media and answer all of their questions.

Even shivangi and neel stayed there tonight.

****-------****

Maya was in her room raising toast for her victory

Maya:awww…poor manyata tumhe lag raha hai tum bach gayi,na na na……never mein tumhe itni aasaani se nahi maarungi.pehle tumhe til til tadpaongi,tumhare wo haal karungi ki tum apne saaye par bhi bharosa karna chod dogi.

She moved towards the picture of uday hanging on the wall.

Maya:uday baby aaj tumhare pyaar ne mujhse kya kya karwa diya.woh ladki kya samjhti thi tumhare saath jabardasti dance kaise kar sakti hai wo..no no never ……uski saza meine usse de di,aur tumhe aane wale waqt ki jhalak bhi dikha di usme haina..

****-----****

Uday:aane wala waqt toh hum decide karenge,wo jo koi bhi hai.bas ab nahi bachega

****--------****

M:pata nahi j aanewala waqt aur kya dikhayega

J:sab thik ho jaayega jiji..

Vb:hope so..

Sh:ab ye baatein yahin khatam karte hain

Vb:humme kal ke baare mein sochna hai

M:kal?

Unnati:haan manyata kal dada ne decide kiya hain ki kal ki press conference wo akele handle karenge

Vb:oh c'mon unnati,sab jante hain uday is just perfect wo sab handle kar lega

M:bas wo apna khayaal rakhe,….

Sorry friends I know this was very short update

But my dad is at home so I hav to be with him and would be unable to write more

So I don't know when I will get time to update maybe next weekend I will try to make it soon

I know this was not upto mark but plz like and do comment

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Posted: 13 years ago
lovely..maya a lady akash..lolz..keep it up..thanku for pm..
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Posted: 13 years ago
Nice update. Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
Short & sweet update. Thank god she's not Manyata.
Thanks for the PM.
Pls Try to update soon. I'll be waiting for next part.😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
👏👏thanks.aesome...fatastic...👏👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
Loved it! no need of sorry!
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Posted: 13 years ago
love it n thnx fr pm :)

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Posted: 13 years ago
Loved it dear... Thanks for this update... Please update next part soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
this part was fab im glad that it was not manyata oh god this maya seems to be crazy really cant wait for the next part update soon and thanks for the pm

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