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Posted: 13 years ago
#21
Luved it!!!! But that Akash part irked me a bit… anyways u r the 1 writing the Ff so u know what your doing and plz plz update soon!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#22
guys i know u r pissed of by this aakash jhaap in this ff
but guys i m not like cvs i know wat i m doing
this is really important to bring manveer together and blossom their love
so have faith in me
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Posted: 13 years ago
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guys i m jus working on the the next part
i m just thinking about their first meeting so i m just writinng it so ,i would just update it ASAP
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Posted: 13 years ago
#24
really awesome loved it so much update soon and thanks for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
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LOVED IT!!! Thanks for the pm!!
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This was really good...Continue soon and Manveer meeting in the next part😳😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
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chapter 2

uday was steaming in anger ,it was reflecting in his eyes,he slammed the door of his room

threw his phone and stared across the window

"dada" a voice caught his attention

U:choti,come in.

Unnati:r u ok dada,I heard u and j

U:come on choti y it would affect me,I don't even bother to listen hear,j sings the same crap always.

Unnati:yeah dada always ….always j says this and u answer me the same (in a angry mood)dada I can see it in ur eyes. U says u don't hav emotions but I can see it dada ,deep in ur heart I can see it.she is still there for u dada

U:SHE ISNT choti SHE ISNT….its only jaigarh

Unnati:u said u hav moved on but u hadn't

Uday just rushes out of the palace .in the room unnati says in her thoughts 'I know dada she is there somewhere waiting for u.world can say u hav moved on ,u can say u hav moved on but I know dada u hadn't,u hadn't,but I also know that she is somwhere'

In her room she was getting ready

Sh:MONIYA u secured 1st place yaar.u hav topped again. And hugs her but seeing the sad face of her friend she understands little for what she is upset for

Sh:moniya mujhe pata hai tu kya soch rahi hai.kal raat ke bare mein na .

M looks up to her with a confused look

Sh:sunn hamesha zindagi alag hoti hai.har koi life mein kuch alag sawaalon ke saath aata hai.kisi ke liye asan toh kisi ek peheli.unn peheliyon ko suljha kar kaise aage badha jaaye ussi ka naam zindagi hai.

Manyata really gets relief.she takes a deep breath and understands what her friend tries to say

M:shivu tujhe pata hai tu hi mere liye ek rahat ki saans hai in sab shamelon mein.haan nahi toh.

and smiles

sh:pata hai ab chal ,jaldi tyaar ho jaa,khatara kabhi bhi aa sakta hai

manyata gets confused ,M:khatara kaisa khatara!!

Shivangi in her mind thinks 'tera wo majnu…who aashique …aakash aaj tujhe propose karne aa raha hai pata nahi use kab samajh aayega k wo aur tu ek nahi hai,tub hi toh abhi kuch samajhti hi nahi'

Her thoughts gets interrupted by moniya 's voice "are kaha kho gayi ,maine pucha kaisa khatra"

Sh:nahi wo kuch nahi mere sources se khabar mili hai ke aaj yaha light ki problem hogi so hum dono jaldi ni nikal jaayenge ok.M gives a assuring look

Haan but use pehle mujhe na kahin jaana hai

Sh:apni purani jagah.pata nahi tujhe waha jaake kya milta hai

M:sukun,haan nahi toh

Uday was driving really hard as those memories has rewinding in his mind,suddenly his car screeched across the road and halt at a point beside

He got out of his car and checked his car engine,he kicked the car with the most angriest ful manner

There at the other side of the road far a bit manyata was nearly exhausted walking for so long,she was really getting irritated when her cell buzzed

M:yaar shivu aa rahi hu ,tu chali ja neel ke saath,mein tujhe direct club mein hi milti hu,address mujhe msg kar dena

Sh:who toh thik hai par tu hai kaha,kuch mila bus ya auto?

M:nahi yaar aage ek bus stop hai bas wahi se bus jaldi mil jaaye,waise bhi iss sadak par koi bhi nahi hai

Sh:ooo,pata hai mujhe aaj subah se strong feelings aa rahi hai

M:tujhe toh roz hi feelings aati hai,ab kaunsi nayi baat hai

Sh:nahi maine filmon mein dekha hai aisi khali sadakon par aksar koi mil jaata hai

M:agar koi chor mere samne aaya na toh bahut pitega mere haathon se

Sh:tu na ,ek dum pagal hai kuch samajhti hi nahi,chal jaane de,mein address msg karti hu,pahunch jaana

She cuts the call.M:pata nahi yeh kya bol rahi thi,jo bhi ho bas mujhe jaldi se bus mil jaaye

As manyata was thinking something, her eyes caught a sight.

At a little distance there was someone just kicking his car in anger,his back was towards her so she was unable to see him,she thought in her mind

"ye kaun pagal hai jo gadi ko aise maar raha hai.ho sakta hai iski gadi kharab ho gayi ho,toh aisa pagalpan karne ki kya jaroorat hai,koi help maang le.ek minute, ye chor bhi toh ho sakta hai,ho sakta hai kisi ki gadi chura raha ho.nahi yaar moniya itne ache kapde toh pehne hai koi chor itne ache kapne pehen thode hi pehenta hai.aise na tu toh kisi ko kuch bhi samajh leti hai"

Her chain of thoughts were broken as the bus passed her and she freaked out running behind it pointing her hands out

"ruko…. Arrey bhai ruko mere liye"

Uday was in a very angry mood, firstly dadisaab called him urgently and then didn't informed him anyting,secondly j and her speech session then choti and now this damm car.He banged his fist on the roof of the car,then suddenly heard something.he was half turned to look when somebody passed him

Not somebody but a girl her hair were open and crossed from his face,his eyes got closed but this action.

She was running behind a bus and shouting pointing out her hands

"ruko …arrey bhai aapne mujhe yehi chod diya.ruko mere liye"

Her voice was a melody to his ears(she was of course our manyata)

A smile formed on his face,she was running like a kid and shouting as if a child is innocently asking for a chocolate.

Then something falled from her bag,uday noticed it.he went forward and picked it up it was a bracelet with a M written on it.he too run behind her

U:wait…hey miss…wait

Manyata heard him she was about to stop and turn when her mind struck with a thought

"no moniya no,why is he behind u,is he a thief or …no just run moniya .he might harm u"

And she run without stopping.uday was surprised that inspite calling her so many times why is she not turning and running like a mad

He increased his pace and almost caught her hand and turned her around.his mind said "u shouldn't have done that uday"

She was so beautiful,a natural beauty,with which he never came across,such a innocent and bubbly face,rosy lips like some angel.he had a urge to kiss it.such a cute little nose,such an innocent eyes which speaks a lot,her eyes reminds him of someone,someone special,someone very close to his heart.

Manyata was struggling her hand to get free from his hold and she succeeded in it.

Uday just touhed her shoulder to turn her when…… she turn and her hand slammed across his face.

Manyata slapped him as hard as she could,she was furious as how any one can hold her hand or touch her.uday was stunned by her sudden action.He stood there and looked her face and slowly anger covered his face

Guys sorry ,I know u want to slap me for this slap given to uday but friends it was important for for them

My heart pricked to add this but I have to

Ok guys plz like and comment it

I will update the further part very soon,It will surely be interesting

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Posted: 13 years ago
#28
loved the update...
thanks for updating so soon..
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Posted: 13 years ago
#29
loved it, update soon,
thanks for pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
#30
very nice...i loved it...and yes SLAP to uday...but its ok...i will not slap u for this...bcz i like it...any girl would do it...so it was interesting and awesome update...update soon...

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