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Posted: 13 years ago
Wow nice update.cont soon yaar.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Amazing Update
FInally Majnu will get a reality check after the press conference get rid of him asap... luved Manveer scene... dont like Giriraj always telling Uday things
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hi dear that's not fair...u left a cliffhanger for us!!!please update soon...I want to see manyata in action...thanks for this update...
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Posted: 13 years ago
that was awesome just loved it... hmm wonder how manyata is going to punish akash update soon and thanks for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
WOW!👏 Manyata full on against that Akash😆, and Uday enjoying this😳 and Giri uncle in chaos😲, and J positive😛, this is so much that we all wanna see in DEK, but sigh, I guess this beautiful ff compensated for the stupid serial. Loved it, continue soon dear, and thanks for the PM.
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Chapter 17

Uday an unnati were on their way to devgarh palace

Unnati:dada humme bohot bura lag raha hai

Uday:kis baat ke liye choti

Unnati:dada wo aaj manyata aur aakash ke relationship ki announcement

Uday:c'mon choti tum hi kehti ho na humme sach ko accept karna chahiye

Unnati:dada yeh baat aap keh rahe hain?

Uday:nahi choti yeh baat aaj tum apni aankho se dekhna

They both entered the palace

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there were gatherings of all the press of various channels and newspapers.

They all ran to udayveer and showered their bundle of questions

"yuvraaj udayveer aap aaj ke confesion ke bare mein kya kehna chahenge"

"kya aap isse sehmat hain"

"aap ke aur rajkumari ke roke ka kya anjaam hoga"

"devgarh aur jaigarh ke rishton ka kya end ho jaayega"

Rajmata ,komal,brijraj ,vijay and jay all were present in the hall .there were no hope left in brijraj's eyes while komal's eyes got moistened but she handled herself.there was no reaction on rajmata's face.

The questions were still going on at last uday said "aaj ki press conference rajkumari manyata ne rakhwayi hai toh jawab wahi dengi"

At this manayta,who was climbing down the stairs answered "aur hum yahan hai"

There was a pride on her face,all the reporters run towards her,they again started their chant

"rajkumari manyata kya yeh sach hai ke aapne yuvraaj udayveer singh se rishta tod diya hai"

"kya aap aakash se pyaar karti hai"

"aapke pariwaar waalon ne aap par kaise dabaav daala"

"aakash ke bare mein aapke batane par unka reaction kaisa tha"

"kya unhone aapko torture karne ki koshish ki"

Manyata had enough of it she wanted to shout on them to stop this,but then she remembered uday's words.she have to control her anger and smiled

M:hum aapke saare sawaalon ke jawab jaroor denge par aakash ke saath

All the family members were shocked but uday had a smirked on his face.

Suddenly at that moment aaksh entered the palace

A:mein yahaan hoon moniya

Seeing him manyata's blood boiled she clenched her fist she was about to burst when her gaze fell on uday. She looked at him,he signaled her with his eyes assuring her that he is with her and she should go on.

She stumbled herself and gave a fake smile to aakash "mein tumhara hi intezaar kar rahi thi aakash"

Aakash walked to her "ab tumhe apne pariwaar se darne ki koi zaroorat nahi hai moniya"

M:of course aakash ,tum jante ho mein duniya mein kisi se nahi darti

(she turned to the press) ab aap puch sakte hain

Re1:rajkumariji kya mr.aakash ne jo kaha who sab sach hai

A:bilkul sach hai

M:aakash ruko…aap logo ko kya lagta hai aakash itna gira hua,jhoota ,dhokebaaz makkar aur chalbaaz hai.bataiye*indirectly cursing him*

A:ye tum kya keh rahi ho moniya

M:kya keh rahi hu aakash,mein toh bas tumhe defend kar rahi hoon….cont plz

Re2: Rajkumari ji kya aapki family iss decision se khush nahi hai?

M:meri family mere har decision par khush hai,

Re3:toh phir mr.aakash ne kaha tha ke aapki family iss rishte se khush nahi hai

M:arre ab shocked toh har koi hota hai,aakash ko samjhane mein problem ho gayi hogi

Re4:aapne mr.aakash ko phone par ro ro kar bataya ke

M:ek min aapse kisne kaha ke hum roye the

Re4:je wo

M:hum rajkumari manyata ,devgarh ki yuvrani royengi?

Uday was just smiling at this he knew what was going to happened now

Re5:wo aapne aakash ko aakhiri baar phone par kaha tha?

Manyata to herself "go on this was what I wanted" she made a confused look

M:aakash ke paas mera number kab aaya…..i mean mera cell phone toh change ho gaya hai (she showed it to everyone and aakash was looking worried)ek minute shayad meine hi aaksh ko number diya hoga haina?

A:(stammering)h..aa…n …haan …haan tumne diya tha

M:aur shayad meine tumhe kal phone kiya tha right?

A:right.

M:toh phir aaksh show them ur caller list

A:hmm what?

M:arrey baba they should not doubt on u na ,show them when I called u

Aaksh was now so worried, everyone was confused with manyata's behavior,but uday was still calm

M:(with calm and cool tone)c'mon aakash show them when I called u.mein toh tumse roz baat karti hu na.ek bhi din mera phone na aaye toh tum pareshaan ho jaate ho.let me show them

She snatched his phone with a smile on her face.she opened the caller page

M:aakash isme toh mera koi caller history nahi hai infact mera number bhi saved nahi hai

There were gossiping going on in between the press

M:koi baat nahi aaksh ab inn logon ko shak ho raha hoga ke mera call tumhe aaya bhi tha ke nahi,right?

Re1:mr aakash aap jis ladki se pyaar karte hain uska number tak nahi hai,koi call bhi nahi aaya aur aapne toh kaha tha kal hi call aaya tha.

A:wo moniya ka number delete ho gaya hoga

M:koi baat nahi aaksh let us clarify them.hum abhi sim card company se tumhare phone records mangwate hain.

Now he was hell worried and sweating heavily,manyata ordered to bring the records of last one month.

A:moniya ye tum..rehne do yaar inhe yakeen ho gaya hoga.

M:nahi aaksh ab toh inhe sabut dikhane hi padenge

The records arrived in meanwhile.manyata took them and acted as if finding something.

M:aakash isme toh kahin bhi mera number nahi hai

Now the press was getting hyper

Re3:mr.aaksh yaani aapne sab jhoot kaha tha

A:nahi wo..wo..

Re2:aapki toh rajkumari ji se kabhi baat hi nahi hui?

A:moniya tum kuch kaho

Manyata just whispered in his ears "tumhara sach sabke saamne hai,ya toh tum khud kabool kar lo ya mein uss din club waala incident sab ko sunao" now she there was anger burning in her eyes

A:yeh sab sach hai,moniya mujhse pyaar nahi karti.uska mujhse koi wasta nahi hain

Meine ab tak jo kuch bhi kaha sab jhoot tha

There was a sigh of relief on every one's face and a smile of victory on manayata's and uday's face

M:ab hum kahenge..aap sabko kisi anjaan insaan ne aakar kuch bhi keh diya aur aapne yakeen bhi kar liya.humara pariwaar iss desh ka izzat daar priwaar hai aur aap logon ne kya kuch nahi chap diya..ek baar bhi sach jaanne ki koshish nahi ki ya koi sabot dhundhne ki koshish bhi nahi ki.

Hum chahte toh ye kissa kab ka khatm kar sakte the par hum chahte the ye khud kaboole aur sabooton ke saath aap logon ko hum sach se wakkif karaye.

All the reporters were guilty at their action and lowered their heads

A:moniya mein sach mein tumse..

M:inspector sahib..

Police entered in and uday pointed in aaksh's direction

A:moniya ye sab ..

M:hum tumpar humare pariwaar ke maan sammaan ko chot pahuchane ke liye maan haani ka daawa karte hain.i hope ye legal hai aur press ko isse koi problem nahi hogi

Not a single person raised their voice due to guilt.

M:inspector sahib le jaaiye isse.

She joined her hands to the press "khamma ghani" and all the press left from there.

Police moved forward and arrested aakash.

They were taking him when uday said "oye majnu,"

Aakash stopped walking but didn't turned to face him

Uday:I hope tumhe tumhara sabak mil gaya hoga

And he smirked at him.police arrested and took him .at the gates of mahal the press were questioning aakash on his fault.

In mahal all were proud of manyata,

rajmata blessed manyata

Ds:aaj aapne sabit kar diya ke aap humari poti hain

,uday was about to leave when manyata shouted his name "uday"

She run to him and hugged him tightly

Uday was too happy he returned her hug with equal happiness

M:thank you,thank you ,thank you so much uday. Agar aaj tum nahi hote na toh saara syappa hi ho jaana tha,haan nahi toh

Uday:hum aapke saath humesha se hain princess

There was smile on unnati's face

J was feeling satisfying

Vijay bhai was also happy

J:wow jiji humme toh nahi bhul gayi na aap

Manyata and uday both separated apart

M:nahi meri pyaari j..

Vb:kamaal kar diya m bhai

Unnati:I TELL U

M:abhi kaha ,wo kehte hain na picture abhi baaki hai mere dost

Vb:matlab?

M:vijay bhai uss aakash ko saza manyata ne di hai,moniya ki saza toh abhi baaki hai

Vb:evil evil evil m bhai

And every one laughed

M:uday mujhe abhi police station jaana hai,tum chaloge na mere saath

Uday:of course princess

They took their leave but j vijay and unnati joined them in separate cars

When they reached the police station aakash was in the prisonwhen he saw manyata his face got lightened up "mujhe pata tha moniya tum jaroor aaogi"

M:open the cell

The constable did so,she entered with uv

A:moniya mein tumse

But before he can complete manyata slapped him

A:moniya ye..

Again she slapped him on next side of his face

M:ye mere pariwaar ko badnaam karne ke liya

She again hit him

M:ye hum sab ko pareshan karne ke liya

She again hit him

M:ye mere aasoon ke liya

She cont hitting him until his face was red then uday stopped her

Uday:princess rehne do,aba age ka kaam police karegi

When they were moving out of the police station aaksh screamed loudly

A:moniya tum sirf mujhse pyaar karti ho warna uday se shaadi ke liya inkaar kyu karti

He repeatedly shouted this that even the press outside the heard him

They were gathered there manyata knewed this can led where,so before anyone can question her

M:hum jaante hain aap sab yahi jaana chahte hain ke humare aur yuvraj udayveer ki sagaai ka kya hua(she holded uday's hand and sighed)

M:par hum aap sabko ye bata de ki ye shaadi cancel nahi hui hai sirf postponed hui hai

Uday' face glowed with happiness even manyata smiled at him,all were very happy at this news accept one.

When maya heard it on tv she broked even bit pieces of her house in anger and screamed "manyata ,iss baar tum bach gayi.but mein mein wo daav khelongi ke tumhare farishte bhi tumhe bacha nahi paayenge"

So guys hows this

I hope u liked it,I gave my best to write this one

Plz do hit like and comment

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Posted: 13 years ago
👏👏thanks...awesome...superb...well done...👏👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
Jazz that was an awesome piece of work👏, what a comeback by Manyata, and so happy to see the pride in Udays eyes for Manyata.😃 And Manju ki to pungi hi baj gayi 🤣. Loved it.
Edited by chitra_rao - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
SUPERB UPDATE!! Do continue soon n thanks for the pm:D
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Posted: 13 years ago
Sorry...sorry...sorry, I'm really very sorry for not replaying you. The part was so beautiful. Just amezing. I couldn't control my laugher when manayta trapped akash in front of press and specially when she slaped him in jail.:-):-):-):-D:-D:-D. Thanks for the pm and update soon.

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