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Posted: 13 years ago
that was awesome i just loved this part and again vijay bhai was superb hayee loved uday giving a kiss to m on her cheeks... oh god a crazy lover of uday wonder who that is update soon really cant wait and thanks for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
once again...awesum...mindblowing part as usual...loved it to the core...👏
specially uday-maanyata scene😳 and vijay bhai hilarious but to the point answers...😛😆😆
i am sure tht girl is udays 1st love maya...who will try to crete riftes b/n manveer but i really hope tht uday falls in love with her princess...and protect her from tht witch maya🤢

once again, lovely and awesum part👏👏😛
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Posted: 13 years ago

Chapter 13

M:j bas kar tune aaj pura wardrobe khali kar diya hai

J:(shuffling the clothes)jiji,rukiye..

M:j,kuch bolegi ab

J:jiji aap aaj uday ke saath dinner par jaa rahi ho

M:toh?..dinner hi toh hai

J:c'mon jiji'yaha toh koi acchi dress hai hi nahi

Vb:wow wow wow j bhai ye kya hai

J just ignored him and tried to call someone "yeah u both get here fast,and with a total makeover"

M:ab tumne kisse call kiya J

J:just wait and watch jiji

After sometime two girls entered the room

J:(shoutin)K..l..u r so late

K:sorry baby

J:have u both both it

L:yeah we just hav to look and make a call

j:jiji these r my friends k.. l..

k and L:hi..

m:hello

j went and sat on the sofa

J:now enough u too bring it fast

K both a magazine "here u go babes"

J:this is good(then she called someone)

M:j mujhe bataygi yeh kya ho raha hai

J:aapko tyaar kar rahe hai,dinner ke liye

M:god tum log itni mehnat kar rahe ho,can I ask something

J:sure jiji

M:mein khud tyaar hona chahti hu,tum mujhe uski permission dogi

J:but jiji

M:plz..j plz'

J:ok,but jiji be ready on time

M:yeah my little sis 'sure

They left the room

M(herself)so aaj dinner par jaana hai,let see what I have

She moved to the bunch of dress and picks a green one,after that she moves to the dressing table,she got herself ready

In jaigarh palace

Uday was getting ready when unnati entered

Unnati:so dada ,ready for the date?

Uday:don't ask this question to manyata ,she will kill u

Unnati :I know dada

Uday:waise bhi abhi toh humme unhe shaadi ke liye ready karna hai,taaki who acchi maharani ban sake

Unnati:dada aap manyata ko sirf maharani banana chahte hai bas.

Uday:aur kya choti

She went near him and putting his scarf properly spoked

"be careful dada,manyata unn ladkiyon jaisi nahi hai jo aap ke piche bhagti hai,ya jo taaj ko lekar desperate hain,she different dada"

Uday:I know that choti ,who ek behte paani ki tarah hai jisse koi nahi rok sakta,sivaye humare"

He left the room

Unnati(to herself)par aap apne dil ko kaise rokenge dada ,jo manyata ke pyaar mein behne wala hai,jiski shuruwat toh ho chuki hai"

Uday enters the devgarh mahal,he takes every one's blessing.his eyes were finding someone

J:kise dhunde rahe ho uday?

Vb:aaj toh sab wrong question hi puch rahe hain,of course manyata ko dhunde rahi hai uday ki aankhe,I TELL U.

Before uday can reply he was stunned to look '''.manyata

Even though she was not the beautiful in the world but she has that attraction stored in her,and the smile made him fall for her even deeper.

Vb:ahem ahem..

Uday just broked his gaze from her.

Uday(extending his hands)chalein princess

she smiled and gave her hands into his in affirmity.

Uday was driving the car

M:hum kaha jaa rahe hain?

Uday:humare hotel.

They reached the hotel

m:oh teri'.yeh toh wo wala hotel nahi hai

uday:yeh humara sabse best hotel hai princess'ab chalein

they reached the gates when the manager greeted them,and presented manyata with bouquet.he led them to a private cabana

they had a wonderful dinner,uday talked about many things.manyata truly enjoyed his company but soon got bored.

Uday:kya hua princess

M:uday j aur vijay bhai ne kaha that ha ke tum kabhi kisi ko bore nahi hone dete

Uday:so what do want me to do''book ek hotel room to plead u

M:awww'chii..uday,tum bhi na

Uday(laughing out)ok princess come with me

M:where?
uday:stop questioning and come fast.chalo!!

He led her to a rifle shooting point

M:ab kya tum mujhe jaan se maroge,haan nahi toh

Uday:irada kuch aisa hi hai

M:kya?

Uday:just kidding princess'.hum rajwade hain yeh sab humre khoon mein hota hai,lets try this out

He picked up the rifle pointed the aim and SHOOT!

It got the perfect shot

Uday:now its ur turn princess

M:but mujhe nahi aata

Uday:hum hai na,jab tak hum tumhare saath hai tumhe koi problem nahi hogi

He handed her the rifle,and helped her to hold it

He tuck back the strand on her face behind her ears

Uday:aba age dekho,apna dyaan sir fuss nishane par rakho.kabhi apna dyaan apne aim se hatne mat do,just concentrate on ur aim

She followed his instruction

Uday:fix ur aim and now shoot

She did it,just on the perfect spot

M:wow,I hav done it

Uday:(smiles at her)yes u hav done it

She was dancing like a baby and uday was just admiring her

But far from a distance a pair of eyes were looking at them.

He was aakash "thank god meine tumhe time par rok liya"

A girl comes from behind "warna aaj tumhari moniya zinda na bachti"
aakash:who nadaan hai,mujhse pyaar karti hai,mein use leker chala jaaonga maya

Maya smirked at him "better leke jaao,I want my uday back"

They shaked their hands.

Maya(self talk)ek baar manyata uday se door ho jaaye toh uss manyata aur iss majnu ka khel saath mein hi khatam kar dongi.."

So guys I hope u all like this

Today I went little faster

Don't forget to like and comment😊😊

Edited by jazzthakur - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Yeah first one to comment.nice one yaar.n the pics r just awesome.cont soon yaar.now i cant wait.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Amazing Part
Maya and Majnu😡
Cont Soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
Wow
Loved it
The pics were too perfect
Update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice 1 with da pics do continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesum update like always...👏👏
hey just a small reqest i want manyata and uday too fall in slowly and slowly nt like maonash where in first meeting they met, and in second meeting they fell in love...
u getting ...wht i m saying...😉
newys awesum update as usual...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Loved the part <33 hope this Maya Majnu game will be over soon ! :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome m luvin it...gr8 presentation...⭐️

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