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Posted: 13 years ago
👏👏thanks...fabulous...awesome...👏👏
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that was so fab loved manveer scene and their plan of going out is really good now i really cant wait for the next part update soon and thanks for the pm
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that was gr8!!!!!!!!!!😛😃
luved manveer in this part!!!!!!!!!!👏
very cute!!!!!!!!!!!!😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
it was awesome really nice please update as soon as possible please u rock
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey it is very very much nice and instring,,,,,,, i have read all the chapters,, it so much fantasting,,, i think u should be a riter of DEK,,,, pls pls pls update next chapter soon i m eagerly waiting for it,,,,
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Posted: 13 years ago
Aww that was a great update!! Can't wait for Manyata to realize her feelings!

Simran :D...
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Chapter 19

Unnati was on the phone

Unnati:ji dada,ok.wait a minute dada.

She put the phone on the speaker

Uday:litsen every one j, vijay banna,shivangi and choti..

J:aur jiji ko yaad nahi kiya uday oops sorry to be jijusa..

Every one laughed

Uday:stop j ek din humara bhi aayega j..tab hum tumhe dekh lenge….now get to the point

Unnati:ok ok now serious!!

Vb:toh phir sab ko ICU mein admit karna padega

Now every one again laughed including uday.

Uday:vijay banna now stop it,…where was i?

Vb:at ur house or hotel

J:I TELL U

Uday:vijay banna..

Vb:ok not again promise plz cont

Uday:is manyata there?
unnati:no..dada

Sh:should I call her?

Uday:no,just litsen..after the shopping I will send a car ,let her come in that alone

Vb:ohhh hooo…hum tum ek car mein band ho

Uday:vijay banna…

Vb:sorry my dear uday banna

Unnati:seriously dada alag car mein kyun

Uday:choti its dadisa's order and i..also

J:want to spend some precious time with her,right?

all at once:ooo….

Uday:stop it u all

J:toh phir aaj hum shopping mein jiji ke liye kuch alag dress lenge

Till that time manyata came down the hall way but stopped at the spot to hear them all

Uday on the phone:oh plz j..,manyata tumhare jaisi dresses kabhi nahi pehnegi.

Sh:kyun jiju aap apni club meeting bhool gaye kya?

Uday:of course not sweety but humme yeh bhi pata hai ke uss din manyata ne wo dress tumhare insist karne par pehni thi,warna wo aur waisi dress kabhi nahi.

M(thinking)accha bachu ab mein tujhe batati hu ki manyata cheez kya hai

Uday:accha chalo I will meet u at the club and be careful,media would be there.

Unnati:sure dada!!

They hang up and manyata came there "chalein"

They left for the mall.the shopping was indeed very fun full for them

They had delightful lunch and had fun in the mall.after that it was dawning

J:hey guys hum yeh saari shopping ghar bhijwa dete hain and then we will proceed to the club what say?

Vb:agree

Unnati and shivangi:we too

M:ok guys

Vb:sorry m bhai hum already four hain toh aapko alag car mein aana hoga

M:(thinking)I wanted this vijay bhai

M:fine

They all headed to the club and manyata again entered the mall

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In the club,they were welcomed by the manager

Sh:woo hoo,itna warm welcome

Vb:dear come on there would be more fun

Unnati:come on shivu

They entered the club and had their seats

Sh:ab ye log kaha reh gaye

Unnati:ahem ahem

Vb:yeh log nahi sirf neel kahan reh gaya

Shivangi blushed at this comment

J:intezaar khatam hua look there

J pointed at the entrance .neel and uday entered the club

Uday was looking stunning in black.

Every eye looked over him,he reached them ,even neel joined them

J:not bad ..,shivu very good choice.

They all got introduced to neel

uday's eyes were searching someone

vb(started singing)jaane jaa..dhoondhta fir raha

hoon tujhe..raat din..

mein yahan se wahan

vb:kyun uday banna sahi gaana gaya na

uday:stop it vijay bhai

he leaned over the bar table and had a drink.unnati came towards him

unnati:dada what happened?missing someone

vb:of course unnati,yeh kaisa sawaal hai ab uday ek hi ladki ko toh miss karta hai

uday:come on vijay banna….but ab who ladki kaha hain

vb:I don't know, ho sakta hai dress change kar rahi ho

uday:saari dresses toh ek jaisi hi hoti hai..

unnati:aww…so rude dada

Uday:its not rude choti,it's a fact

unnati:not now dada

unnati was stunned her eyes widened

unnati:look over there!!

Every one looked towards the entrance and even their eyes was shocked

J:oh..my..god..jiji..

Uday,who was smiling on his thoughts just turned to look with the same smile but his smile got vanished his jaws dropped on looking the dazzling view in front of his eyes.

Vb:hum sapna toh nahi dekh rahe haina

J:of course not vijay banna

Manyata entered in the club ,she was stunning in that blue and white dress

Sh:my my is she my same old friend?
neel:is she my same old sis?

Manyata walked to them with pride.

M:hi every one(waving her hand)

J:jiji u look stunning (she run and hugged her)

Sh:really babes,u r so…

Uday:mesmerizing..(almost like hipnotised)

Unnati:ahem ahem..

Uday got back to his senses,

Manyata hadnt paid any attention to uday and headed towards the dance floor with others.

Uday stood there giving a smirk to her "g8 princess"

Unnati(looking towards manyata):she is g8 dada?but what is going in ur mind huh?

Uday:wait and watch choti.

he gulped the drink

He too moved towards the dance floor and extended his hands towards a girl.she was in hot pink.

She took his hand and they both moved on the dance floor,the music changd to a slow track and the girl got really closer to uday.

Watch this soo close proximity between those too,something hurt in manyata's heart.

Tears formed in her eyes,she excused herself an made her way to the corner of the club.

She took the wine and gulped it at once.this all was noticed by vijay bhai and he smiled at it.

The girl really got more close to uday,the tears which was holded by her just over- whelemed through her eyes.

Uday noticed it and left the dance floor.she gulped another glass of wine and extended her hand for next one when a hand caught her fist.

Uday took her to a corner

M:leave me uday

Uday:what is this princess?(concern in the voice)

M:its just a drink,I m just enjoying myself as u r with that chick!!

Uday:so r u jealous?

M:why would i? I said u before I m least interested in u

Uday ran a finger through her face "really?"

M:really.

Uday:ok so hows that one for me tonight?(pointing to another girl)

Manyata gave him a disgusting look "u r such a….such a.."

Uday:such a what princess?

M:huh..

She jerked his hands and was moving away when he again caught her "ok princess I m sorry"

M:sorry for what?go an get all thegirls for u na

Uday:r u sure?

M:uday how can u?

Uday:why not princess afterall u r least interested in me

M:I taught u were my friend

Uday:so m I,but dost apni jagah aur love apni,right na?

M:u r impossible

Uday:for u I m always possible princess

Manyata:go to hell.

Uday:if u would be with me

M:abhi tum uss ladki se flirt kar rahe the and now u r on me

Uday:naa.. I was always on u.but since u said no to me and m finding someone else

M:not now

Uday(leaning closer)aur wo kyun

M:kyunki..kyunki..

Uday:kyunki..

M:kyunki tu mera dost hain,haan nahi toh.aur dost jo kahe wo manana hi padta hai

Uday:kya princess banaya bhi toh sirf dost

M:kya?

Uday:kuch nahi,ab dost hu toh dost ke saath ek dance ho jaaye

M:umm..ok

But then a servet came and bowed his head "yuvraj sa aapke liye phone hai"

Uday:ok hum abhi aate hai

Princess aap enjoy kijiye,I will be back soon

M:come back very soon

Uday just smiled and moved on

Manyata joined the others and was dancing ,after sometime someone came and said something to her and she left the club without informing anyone.

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Uday was on the phone "hello"

"hi baby"

"whose this?"

"tum itni jaldi mujhe kaise bhool sakte ho"
"sorry but humne aapko nahi pehchaana"
"I know there r many dumbs to distract u,isliye meine tumhare liye ek gift tyaar rakha hai"

Suddnly he hears a scream "khooon khoon"
uday gets tensed and confused

"cheekh sunai di,go and see ur gift"

He runs towards the room fromwhere the service boy was screaming even everyone rushed to see what disaster has occurred and where shock to see the room full of bloodstain and the body in the pool of blood.

J and shivangi screamed and unnati hugged uday as she was shivering on getting the view.

Uday and vijay was in the state of shock on seeing it

Uday whispered "princess……"

So sorry guys for the late update

So how was this,hope u all liked it

Sorry if not.i will try to update naxt part as soon

Suggestions are always welcomed

Plz do hit like and comment

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Posted: 13 years ago
manyata got shot??...r u srs?...woww luvd ur update n ur twist👏

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Posted: 13 years ago
interesting update.. do cont soon..
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update as always!! Plzzz continue soon n thanks for the pm:D

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