manveer :an eternal love story (ch 31-pg 92)ended - Page 2

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Chapter 1

Clashes of sword ,

two kids playing with sword

faces are blurred only their giggles can be heard and the sound of their sword which r clashed

the girl turns around and the little boy hits her with the sword and both starts crying''..

suddenly manyata gets up sweating she gets hyper and turns aroumd to take a sip of water and the glass fells down creating a loud sound in the silent atmosphere and a havoc in her heart.

Shivangi gets up suddenly and goes to manyata,she knows what would had happen on seeing the condition ,manyata usually gets this dream or it can be said a nightmare

"moniya ,dubara wahi sapna dekha kya "

"hmm"and hugs her

"every thing will be fine ,sirf sapna hi tha yaar ,jus chill"

"mujhe hi kyu humesha yehi sapna kaun hain wo dono bacche kyu mujhe hi'.,mere hi sapno mein,who ladka kaun hai,kyun humesha uss ladki ko chot pahuncha kar wo khud hi ro padta hai,aakhir kyun,

"inka jawaab tujhe hi dundhna hoga moniya,yeh teri jindazi ki peheli hai,tujhe hi suljhani hogi"

"mein jaanti hu par'"

"par kya arrey a buss ladke ko chod aur kal ki soch aur mujhe bhi sone de"

"arrey haan kal toh humara final semester ke results lagne wale hai haina"

"hmmm"

They both share a hug and goes to sleep.

In the morning the sun rise with smile birds chirping,a breath of freash air blows

Manyata has jus returned from her daily joggingand wakes her friend up and moves to get freshen up

In the washroom she looks her figure in the mirror and turns slightly revealing her back shoulder and sees a scar below the neck

"exactly there ,there where that boy hitted her,is that me,kya wo mein hi thi,agar haan then who is he"

She turns her face around"kaun ho tum"

In the devgarh palace a car stops and a handsome hunk in white and black comes out of the car with black shades around his eyes.yes he is udayveer singh.

he signals a servent to come fast

"park it"

Servent bows and moves to obey the order

In the servents quarter servents were having their lunch break and talks

"yuvraaj udayveer singh ,kabhi bhi kisi se acche se baat nahi karte pata hai sala ry acchi milti hai par itna rukha bartaav sirf hum naukaron ke saath"

"haan mujhe bhi yehi lagta hai"

"hume toh insaan hi nahi samajhte hain ye log"

"aisa nahi hai" a old man in his fifties says suddenly "aisa bilkul nahi hai"

"kya matlab .aap nahi dekhte who humare saath kaisa rukha bartav karta hai"

"ek machli poore talaab ko ganda karti hai"

"matlab"

"ek samay tha jab yehi yuvraaj udayveer singh ka sabhi se achha bartav tha

Dil ek dum saaf.par humme se hi kisi ke dhoke ne inse inki zindagi cheen li. Tab se inka bharosa kisi par bhi na raha.logon ka dil inke liye khel ho gaya.

Mujhe aaj bhi yaad hai jab ye mujhe mere naam ke baad ji laga ke baat karte the.agar uss manhus mu.."

A voice cuts him off"chalo lunch time khatam ho gaya hai"

Udayveer walks in the devgarh palace with a confident look

"khamma ghani dadi saab"

There settled the family of devgarh.

On the head chair was a lady in her old sixties maharani mrinalini devi.she is the rajmata of devgarh.

opposite to her is her sone maharaj brijraj,beside him is her wife maharani komal devi an sister menka,and there was rajkumari jaynandini and vijay

He moved towards them and bowed to take the blessing

A pleasant smaile crossed every one s face.uday is the apple of every one's eye in devgarh palace.

"aaiye uday beta"

J:ds,uday yahan kaise who toh London mein the na

Komal:haan uday beta aap ka toh project

Uday:haan aunty komal par hume aap sab ki yaadon ne yahan bula liya toh jab aap india laut aaye toh hum kyu nahi

Ds:haan komal uday ko yahan humne hi bulaya tha.kuch project decide karne the

Brijraj:par maa sahib itni jal..

He was cut down by the serious look over rajmata's face

Ds:baithiye uday beta lunch kar lijiye phir hum kaam ki baat karenge

K:unnati kab aa rahi hai?

Uday:who aunty komal actually

"hum aa gaye''.."and a girl runs from the palace door and hugs uday

"dada hum aa gaye"she takes blessing from every one

J:unnati tum bhi ,achha hai ab hume achhi company mil jaaygi

Vijay:shopping mein

And every one laughs on that

Unnati:vijay banna'

V:what,humne toh sach hi kaha tum dono ko shopping ke alawa aata kya hai,I tell u

Ds:ab aap sab bas kijiye ab aap sab settle ho jaaiye,uday beta aap bhi jaaiye .hum aapse kal baat karte hain.

Uday:ji dadisaab

After the lunch got over uday stood and moved towards the hall way when a hand blocked his way.he looked up to see who it was and asmirk covered his face

Uday:so j ,how r u,hope jaggat would be fine

J:jaggat is almost fine,u say about urself uday who was she?

Uday:she?

J:yes she,the one with u a day before

Uday:don't remember

Vijay:u don't remember she was maya .raigarh ki rajkumari .u don't bother to remember her when u had spend a ni..

J:stop it vijay bhai he is always like this .dont remember,we were fools to assume he still remembers something but no,he is emotionless

The smirk over his face got vanished for a while but another one covered it.

Uday:j it don't bother me a bit.i really don't care.i have jus moved on in my life.

He moves from there

Vijay:j bhai we can never understand him ,I tell u.he is one of his kind

In the orphanage,manyata an shivangi got ready,

Sh:oye moniya jaldi kar,warna'.oh shit. She screamed on seeing someone

M:kya hua

Sh:are yeh kaha kaha aa gayi.moniya khabardaar agar tune inhe apni koi bhi cheez di toh lalchi bandariyaan

Two girls were marching towards them with some chezy smile.a tall one with brown rags and hairs were formed in a plait and other one was in green rags with two buns on either side of her head

Sh:ms soni and ms.permenent headphone (manyata coughed on this) I mean ms.chiki ab kya chahiye

Chiki arrey hum kya sirf kuch mangne hi aa sakte hain kya

Sh:je haan

Soni:are tum log toh hume galat samajh rahi ho.hum log toh khush khabari dene aaye the.humari naukari lag gayi hai

Sh:paanchvi baar

M:oh congrats.waise kya aur kaha

Chiki:who mall mein thoda safai ka hai

Sh:toh seedha bolo na jhadu wali ban gayi ho. Manyata gives her a stop-it-now look

Soni:haan thik hain ab tumhari tarah padhe likhe nahi hain na

Sh:toh kisne kaha tha studies chodne,arrre mein toh bhul hi gayi tum logo ko toh nikala gaya tha

Chiki:thik hai hum toh yaha khushi batne aaye the'.aur'''.

Sh:ab kya chahiye

Chiki:tujhse kuch nahi,moniya kya tere sandals mil sakte hain kya.tu toh kahin nahi jaa rahi na

Manyata was about to say ok but shivangi cut it of

Sh:nahi who mere aur neel k saath aaj disc jaa rahi hai

Soni :moniya aur disc(surprizingly)

Sh:kyu nahi jaa sakti kya ab tum log jaao warna mall mein jhadu kaun lagaye ga

They both give her a disgusting look and move from there.

M:kisne kaha mein tum logo ke saath jaa rahi hu ha?

Sh:maine,ab tu chal rahi hai neel ne kaha hai who hum dono ko pick up kar lega ,ab chal tyaari karni hai.

Outside the orphane chiki and soni were moving sadly suddenly a sight caught their attention and they both screamed and run towards it

"aakash"

A:oh hi kaisi ho tum log. He was with his friends.they all had a friendly conversation and left

Aakask's friends "aakash aaj toh tu apni dil ki baat moniya ko bata hi de .kab tak yuhi gate k bahar khada ho kar use dekhta rahega.kal bhi use bhagte hue dekh raha tha"

A:tum log sahi keh rahe ho mein use aaj hi bata dunga.aaj yahan koi nahi hai na .shivangi apne neel k saath jaa rahi hai.nanny bhi funds sanction karwane jaa rahi hai toh accha hai.woh mana bhi nahi karegi.

Guys how was this plz tell me.i know there were now much about manyata and uday but it was important to give the intro of other characters as it will benefit manveer

I promise there will be manveer's first meeting in next part

My vacation has started from yesterday so I hav whole day to think my story

Only writing ka problem hai that I will manage

Plz like and comment it will encourage me to write further

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VERY NICE...I LOVED IT...plz do countinue and take ur time for manveer first meeting...and i loved that dream part of manayta...update soon...and thanks alooott for the PM...

Wow itz awesome ,manyata's dream part wz awesome

it's just awesome.such a good update.cant wait 4 the next part.n thanks 4 the pm sweety continue soon.

Do write more,m waiting thanx fr pm

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