FF:-ENTWINED SOULS{maaneet)ch-18 page-37 Oct9/11 - Page 13

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Posted: 12 years ago

love the way Maan and his dad care for Geet

superb update
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Posted: 12 years ago
LOVED IT
Abhimanyu and Maan are just AMAZING
poor little Geet!
gosh Maan and his smart ideas xD
cont soon
thanks for the pm!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Maan, my sweet little hero!!! please be there with Geet always...
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update...maan simple statement solved his dad problem...
d father son duo is too sweet...
maan is nt only in love but some hw i feel more than possessive nor say rather obbsses kind of... i mean it is turning out to be like dat only...chal let see hw u shape up ur story...
gud luck 4 dat ...want to see more of maan n geet cute scenes...
do continue..
thanx 4 pm..
chao
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update good that maan hit that brij continue soon
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maan & his dad such amazing
& caring toward geet
i hope she okay
superb update
love it
cont soonnn
ty 4 pm
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awesome ... superb ...

thnx 4  d pm ...

continue soon ...
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Amazing update, i loved the way maanand his dad took care of him.
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nice update..
omg tht handa n brij are so cruel..
luved maan n his dad's concern for geet...
continue soon 

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Posted: 12 years ago
 
 
Chapter-12
The Home coming
 
 
Maan and daadi paced restlessly outside the corridor in hospital Geet has been extremely weak and unconscious
 
Maan was extremely tensed he kept on asking doctors and nurses how is she did she opened her eyes but she was still unconscious
 
Daadi kept on consoling him wiping his tears but nothing helped
 
It was only after few hours that doctors took a sigh of relief and made daadi and maan aware that she was fine
 
Savitri devi –sab thik hai na doctor saab
 
Doctor-nothing to worry ma'am she is completely out of danger but
                She is very weak and needs proper care no exertion at all
 
Maan just interrupted in between
I will take care of her doctor but can i please meet her once
 
Daadi and doctor just smiled
 
Yes you can Maan but only for 5 mins
 
Maan just jumped in utter joy as he made a dash towards the ward were Geet was lying
 
Daadi just smiled and said Maan beta use jyada pareshan matt karna hum abhi aate hai discharge ki formalities puri kar ke
 
Maan just turned and nodded with a huge smile
 
Just the news that she is fine brought the smile back on his face
 
Geet was lying at the bed her body was still weak
She was now awake but unable to open her eyes
 
Maan just came and sat beside her silently and held her hand
Tears just welled up in his eyes to see his Geet in that condition
Geet he gently whispered so that she doesn't get startled
 
Geet felt his presence beside her and his gentle whisper just made her smile a bit but it was barely noticeable
 
Seeing her not respond Maan decided to leave
But the moment he got up Geet held his hand
Her grip was not hard but was strong enough to make him stop
 
She tried t o open her eyes again a blurred vision appeared in front of her eyes Maan she whispered again as her vision became clearer
 
Maan just held her hand I am here Geet
Don't worry just take rest
Hmm she murmured words barely came out of her mouth
She was too weak But still she mumbled it pains maan I can't sleep
 
Shh geet just try he said as he slipped beside her into the bed and held her in his embrace
Hmm she murmured again relaxing herself in his embrace soon her eyes closed as she slipped into a deep slumber
 
Maan relaxed after seeing that Geet has finally fallen asleep
He himself closed his eyes and within seconds even he was sleeping
 
Dadi came back after completing the discharge formalities
 
And found the two sweet hearts sleeping contently in each other's embrace 
 
Her heart just filled up with joy and she moved ahead and placed a kiss on both of their heads
 
She clicked their picture and just sent it to Abhi through her Phone
 
He immediately called
Ma is she fine now
Haan beta
And the devil is finally at peace too
Abhi Maan is not a devil
Kitna pareshan tha pata hai kuch khaya bhi nahi unhon ne aur abhi unki aankh lagi hai jab doctors ne unhe Geet se milne ki permission de di uske baad
Abhi just smiled
Ma geet ke discharge
Ho gaya hai Abhi humne sari formalities puri kar di hai par doctors ne aaj raat geet ko hospital mein hi rakhne ko kaha hai...par Abhi hum kal Geet ko kaha le jayengey
Abhimanyu just held the papers in his hand and Firmly said Her Handa haveli Ma
Aap phikar na kare humne sab thik kar diya hai
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
Next day
Handa Haveli
 
Maan just kept on holding to his geet as he now didn't wanted to leave her side for a moment
He really didn't liked the idea of bringing Geet back here
But it was for her mom that he yet again agreed
His father has promised him that this time no one will be able to touch her and what he has decided for Geet and him will definitely make him happy
Maan was little apprehensive but he knows if his father has promised then everything will be fine
 
Abhimanyu and Maan entered the haveli along with Geet
Geet was in Maan's arms as she was too weak to walk
 
Abhimanyu just signalled Maan to make her rest
Maan just nodded and walked towards the first room he saw
The room was locked from outside Maan just frowned a bit
He called up the maid and asked her for the keys of the room
The maid really was scared but this room was not to be opened
But Maan's stern look really left no option infront of her
 
As soon as the doors opened Maan got in and made geet comfortably lie on the bed he gently tucked the blanket around her and turned to examine the room
The room was really big and beautiful with red and white combination
The room had heart shaped pillows and couches
And a huge window which from were the beautiful lake can be seen
 
 
He really wondered whose room was it and why was it locked
But he was brought out of his reverie with the most obnoxious voice
In the world
Brij was standing right behind him
Maan just clenched his fist tight as he saw Brij looking towards Geet
Maan just pushed him aside and came between him and Geet
 
What are you doing here Brij roared as he felt Maan shielding Geet
None of  ur business Maan retorted
Really
But she is mine business brij said with an evil laughter as he pointed towards Geet
 
Maan just lost all his control and jumped on brij and punched him real hard but this time brij punched him back with equal intensity
 
The commotion brought Abhimanyu and Mr handa in the bedroom too
They dragged brij and maan away from each other
I will kill her Brij howled yet again
Maan tried real hard to get out of his father's grasp so that he can kick him again
Brij kept on ranting you can't protect her Maan after all she is here alone with us at the end of day
I will kill her the moment you step out of this house
Maan became worried really worried that was true she was living here alone with them
Mr Handa smiled along with brij this time
But his happiness was short lived as
Abhimanyu just cut him out
No Brij you can't
Because she is still going to stay here but not you and ur dad
Mr Handa just shot a look at Abhimanyu
What nonsense are you saying Mr Khurrana
 
It's not nonsense Mr Handa this haveli now belongs to me and I have transferred it in both Maan's and Geet name
 
With that he threw the paper on his face
Mr Handa checked the paper nervously
Yes he has mortgaged the home for money
But never in his dream did he thought to lose it all
Abhimanyu smiled seeing the tensed expression on his face
Brij just asked Mr handa is it true dad Kuldeep Handa just nodded
Maan's eyes twinkled he was so proud of his father
 
Mr Handa u and ur son i give u 1 hour petteack ur bags and leave immediately then warna i would have to throw u out Abhimanyu said in a stern voice
 
Mr handa just gritted his teeth and walked out
Maan just added aaj ke baad yahan matt dikna warna
Acha nahi hoga
 
 
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