FF Going Forward - KMH-PART-I

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myviewprem

@myviewprem

Sparkler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#1101

friends thanka a lot for reading and liking my ff

i have class exams this week and hance will update the ff only on the weekend

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Arjuhisis

@Arjuhisis

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#1102

Originally posted by: myviewprem

friends thanka a lot for reading and liking my ff

i have class exams this week and hance will update the ff only on the weekend

ok - all the best - will wait till the weekend

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Sanjeeda

@MsSweetheart96

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#1103

this seems a lot lyk the kmh2 story

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arta

@arta

Navigator

Posted: 14 years ago

#1104

all the best for your exams 😊

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mIsHeZ.x

@mIsHeZ.x

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#1105

all the best hun!! :D

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Akshaya

@aksh4IF

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#1106

Hey prem, long time.. caught up wid u again.. good going on the whole.. can't wait to find out RPS's treachery.. but i have a bone to pick wid u

in the scene of arohi arjun's first karvachauth.. i can't connect wid either of them.. she had just found out about raj being arjun's illegit son.. how can she forget that and have tears in her eyes for arjun that he kept fast for her? i dont disagree that she can keep fast.. but how can she act so normal? nothing arjun does would assuage her pain .. her wounds would be rather fresh and she would not be in such a forgiving mood.. it especially starkly stands out that she would have a romantic moment with arjun and have a normal convo regarding Raj.. it just doesnt fit ..i know you r exploring the characters and this seems out of character so i just wanted to let you know that..