FF:A twisted Love:Abhiya Update 18 May pg 149 - Page 25

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Posted: 14 years ago
great update..........loved it...........
bt feel sad for piya............
thnx for pm.........update soon
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res..........
m still in mid way.........but tryin n readin all d parts soon!😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
HEy very very amazing fantabulous update.................so mithz still is a weakness of abhay bt he cn get hold of himself rite.........wow wat dadima did ws veri cruel indeeed.............loving this whole mithz-pia-abhay trio..........plz continuee............
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Originally posted by: Nikita-Sharma

res..........

m still in mid way.........but tryin n readin all d parts soon!😳
thnx for d pm anyways ayesha!
m lovin it😃

Its OK. At least U like what U read right? Theres a lot to get through. Thats why i put an index page on my FF so if new readers crossed by my FF they can directly go through all the parts without going through every page on the thread.😳
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HEy very very amazing fantabulous update.................so mithz still is a weakness of abhay bt he cn get hold of himself rite.........wow wat dadima did ws veri cruel indeeed.............loving this whole mithz-pia-abhay trio..........plz continuee............
Luv,
Sups.!

Yeah I'm just writing whatever pops in my head. Dai Maa is the old lady who raised Maithali as a child. She's a lady with dark powers. I was hoping to make Abhay-Pia-Maithali tell a story of their own. Bring in different flavours to spice the FF. Hopefully they've done it through my storytelling😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
this was awesome. I really njoyed it, even tho i dnt like metz but the scene between her n abhay was amazing.
Thanks 4 the pm sweety, this was a super cool update. Plz continue soon...
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Posted: 14 years ago

:::Pre-Cap News Blast:::

Chand and Haseena were waiting for Abhay to return. He was about to get a whiplash sending him to the next century. Chandeena already knew about all the goings on at the Pandher Qila due to Abhay's link with them. the were far from pleased by the recent events. They were seething with anger. Abhay already knew what he was facing at home. It was so predictable. He wasn't in the mood for the inquisition. His head hurt from all the stress he was under. He hadn't even realized vampires even felt this way until recently. all he'd felt in the past was anger. This was such a mess. Maithali and Pia were both doing his head in.
Chand sneers at Abhay in anger grabbing hold of him by the neck just as Tara follows behind him-What have U done U fool?
Haseena slowly moves towards Taratiltinh her head to once side-She knows Abhay. A human knows what we are. Do U even know what the repercussions are? In all our years never has anyone come close to uncovering our secret. Yet U let this clan down Abhay.
Chand snarls angrily tightening his grip on Abhay-This is not good Abhay! This is so wrong. All wrong. Now U are going to fix this. Fix her.
Tara managed to squeeze a few words-That's going to be tricky! Maithali's back!
Haseena's eyes darken to pitch black as the veins around her eyes expand-She's what? That can't be she's dead. She died in the fire. Abhay saw it with his eyes. We've seen it in his mind.
Abhay's eyes gave everything away. Chand didn't bother probing his mind. Abhay dropped his gaze trying to block the two women out of his head.
Chand tutted repeatedly-NO! Abhay how could this even be? He is damned i tell U. Look at him. Just look at him. He's caught in the crossfire between both women. That is not good. Emotions are for the weak Abhay how many times must i drill this in U.
Haseena got around to Chand-Loosen your hold on him Chand. Poor boy's been through enough. The damage is done now. We have to plan our next move.
Chand was still baffled by the return of Maithali-Did U see her son! Is she back in the flesh? Or is this some illusion?
Haseena got a flashback from Abhay-Hell No! She's inside Pia. Just what we need. Another obstacle. This is not good Abhay.
Chand grimaces letting go completely of Abhay-Its not going to be the end here Haseena. Maithali wants something other than Abhay. Pia is on the cusp of figuring out what we are and with Maithali she will be unstoppable. There's nothing we can do but bide our time.
Tara nodded along-Exactly what we were trying to tell U but as always U attack and ask questions later.
Abhay zoomed up the stairs leaving behind three worried faces downstairs. Haseena though wasn't Abhay's birth mother she treated him as if he were her own flesh and blood. He was more than a son to her even if Abhay thought of her as a nuisance. She was for the first time scared for Abhay's mentality. He wasn't the old Abhay who came to Dehradun. He'd changed his whole attitude all for one girl. He pretended he didn't care for Pia but to her dispair he cared more than he wanted to. Now with Maithali it was a danger to him. They were dangerous.
Edited by matwamango - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
😆 this is gona be awesome. plz continue soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago
do continue soon.
awesome..
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:::News Blast:::

Dobrial's Mansion

Madhoo hugs Misha as she tries to escape up the stairs with her headphones on. Madhoo pats Misha on the back gently giggling. Panchi pops around from the side. Grabbing hold of both Misha and her Mom. Laughing.

Madhoo grins-My baby's back. Missed U so much and look at her she hasn't even a care in the world for her Mom.

Misha moans at her Mom-I was only gone a week. Seriously U people get senti over little things. I thought you'd be glad to see the back of me for a few days anyway. No mess. No screams.

Madoo sulked at Misha for saying such things-Dat no mother thinks like that about her daughters unless she was a nightmare. U maybe a nightmare My child but your mine. I missed having your sweet laughter around and your mischievous ways.

Panchi giggles-She's not liking all this mother daughter moment5 Mom. So how was your trip without me?

Misha teased Panchi-Perfect! We didn't even notice you were gone. How weird is that. No moaning or bossing going on. We were allowed to breathe without U. Come to think of breathing,. Dudes will U cut the cord please my air supply only runs so far. I'm having difficulty breathing with U both holding me so tight.

Panchi lets go as does Madhoo-So U had fun?

Misha told Madhoo and Panchi about her adventures with the gang from the top-There U have it. U missed some spooky experience leaving early with Danish.

Panchi just had her mouth open in shock while Madhoo shuddered-Poor Pia! She'll never forget this trip. Hopefully she's Ok now.

Misha had doubts on that Pia wasn't totally herself since that night-I'm sure she will be. Mom is it Ok if I hang with the boys at the club. Please College starts tomorrow and i want to catch up on some gossip. Trackers been posting pics on some shirtless guy in the club. She's saying he's her new beau. This i got to see.

Panchi was curious-Mom i'll join Mish and co. I need to put my hair down. Danish is ticking me off in the wrong way. He is becoming unbearable to be with. All he cares about these days are the Raichand's. He's always away. We haven't spent one day together over the past 4 days.

Misha teased her sister-I don't blame him if this is how U get. He probably needs a breather. Its not easy hangin out with U trust me i should know.

Panch whacks Misha across the arm playfully-Misha ki bachi. U are supposed to be on my side not Danish's. My own sister.

Misha joked-U have me on your side so long as U don't get in my face sister dear. That means no clinging on to me during dance session. U get a little rowdy without Danish.

Panchi scold Misha-Do not. I only did that once and that too because of U driving me to drink with all your nagging. Is Pia working today?

Misha nods-Yeah. I think we need to keep an eye on her. First day back after that attack.

Madhoo gave her permission-Go enjoy yourselves. After today its back to business. U need to be serious about College Misha or U won't be getting that bike of yours.

Misha gave a half hearted smile-How can i forget. U keep reminding me every so often.

Madhoo admits-I wouldn't have to if you'd knuckle down to study and pass the year.

Misha asked for her father-Where's Dad? Not seen him around. Has he left the country or what?

Panchi finished-He's been a little busy with work. The Raichand's are bringing him problems with getting contracts. Lets just say they are ending up with most of our accounts.

Misha felt bad for her Dad. She knew how hard he worked-Damn Raichand's. They're everywhere. If we don't have problems with the son we get problems from his folks. They've made life in this town difficult. I'm telling U panchi there is something off with that family. Abhay's got Pia round his little finger. She won't hear a bad word about him. Hell she's always day dreaming about him. Kabir i feel sorry for him. he tries so hard but Pia won't look twice at him.

Panchi push's her sister up the stairs to get ready. Misha and Panchi get into their party groove on and head out of the Mansion.

P3 Club

It wasn't busy at the club with tracks playing one after the other full blast. Pia was just glad she wasn't nervous coming back here. Her boss was kind enough to give her some slack. Kabir was a sweetheart dropping her off from the hostel. She was grateful she had good friends she could rely on. Misha had texted her earlier dropping by with Panchi but they were taking their sweet time. Tracker and Angad weren't on speaking terms due to Tracker's hefty flirting session with some man working on the clubs extension. Come to think of it Tracker was making a move on all the new men in the club. Luckily she wasn't drinking heavily like last time. It felt good to be back in Dehradun. She'd had enough of the farmhouse. It drove her mad. Pia wasn't so fanatical about having someone else sharing her head. It got too much. She'd found she was trying to steer clear of thinking it helped but she also knew Abhay was the root of all her woes. She'd never regret having Abhay in her life. He was the only thing that kept her going. He was the most important person or being as she'd now began to think of Abhay as the best creation on the planet for her. Her whole life was now consumed by Abhay alone. She'd wished Abhay wasn't aware of this fact. She wasn't fond of Maithali invading her most treasured memories of Abhay, of her thoughts. It was like Maithali was dissecting Pia's private space one by one criticizing her for being such a wuss. Worse part of it all was Maithali was right. Pia was a wimp because as confident as she was about her life in general, be it based on the academic side of things to friendships Pia excelled at this stuff but with regards to her romantic entanglements and her family life she sucked at this big time. Pia didn't want anyone thinking she was going nuts telling herself to snap out of this rut she'd cased herself in. Why did she keep on drifting off? She thought Maithali wanted full rein of this body but no she wanted to have fun. It sucked to be her right now. Pia cleaed some of the tables and went to get some clean glasses from the back. As she'd got all the way to the kitchen she started getting out the glasses. She heard some noises from behind. Then suddenly somebody touched Pia from behind startling her. It felt like a man's touch. She thought she was followed again by some thugs like the last time so she kicked the person super quick with her heels turning round a little too quick.

Pia gave him a smile-Ha! Got U good. Serves U right for sneaking around like that. She took her shoes of holding it in her hand threatening to hit the man.

The man gave her a wide grin-Hi! I'm Shaurya. I'm dealin with all the extension in the backroom. Getting my company to install new security systems. That was some move. I nearly had the wind knocked down then U can put your shoe down. I'm sorry i scared U.

Pia wasn't sure if she was supposed to give pleasantries-I really got to go. Boss will be wondering where i've got to. I'm sorry about that. I thought U were someone else. Please don't complain over me. I really do apologize for what i did.

Shaurya couldn't believe a girl attacked him and managed to throw him back with so much strength. He gave Pia his deadliest smiles-I'm sure he won't mind if U spared me a few minutes. Give U some time to catch up on the goings on in this place. If you're worried I'll clear it with him. He is after all my brother. And i won't say anything about this. I promise. Now will U please tell me your name?

Pia rolled her eyes mad at herself noticing his clipboard she knew he was telling her the truth-Sorry! Pia. So U are the younger brother. I'm fairly new here. Only worked a few nights then I......Glad to meet U. I'm sorry again for injuring U with my heels.

Shaurya clicked on-Oh you're her right? The one who got attacked by some blokes! I have to commend U for being such a brave girl. Takes guts to get over the past the incident. I'm sure we'll get to be good friends. Wanna be my friend Pia? I'm in short supply of those most of the people i know are work mates, colleagues but i haven't met anyone new around here.

Pia just wanted to get out of here. She wanted the ground to swallow her up. She felt obligated now-I don't know about that seeming as you're the boss's brother. Could get tricky.

Shaurya led on to the positives-Then again with me on your side i could help U. Be the gofer between U and bro Never a bad place to be in right?

Pia smiled at Shaurya extending her hand to him-Ok! We'll shake on it.

Shaurya shook her hands and helped her get what she needed heading out-There U go.

From the bar Shaurya's brother Nikhil gave him a smile-So you've already made a friend have U. Pia don't fall for his sweet talk. He is a tease. Hitting it off with girls is his right hand job after his construction job that's what he enjoys the most.

Shaurya gives Nikhil a fake smile-Very funny. Don't trust a word he say's Pia. I don't have time for girls and he knows that. He's just trying to wind me up. He's already settled down and it's his mission to find me a girl and fast. Isn't that right bro? I don't know why you're trying to put Pia off me? Is this reverse psychology? Or what?

Nikhil shrugged his shoulders-Take it as U want it lil bro. So how are U bearing up Pia?

Pia smiles-Better than i thought. Thanks for being so understanding.

Shaurya mocks-He's never this understanding with us but he's a different person with the ladies. I'm kidding. Yeah he's a great boss is Nikhil he has the right tempo with everyone. That's why i'm not cut out to be in his profession. Bar work is too much for me to handle. I prefer the construction profession. See my own models come to life.

Pia could see the two brothers interaction. They looked like they got on-I better get back to work.

Shaurya added-I was wondering if you'd be my guide for a few days. Not used to this place after a long time. I know the clubs a hot spot for youngsters but with business booming I wanted to spend it with people i'd gel with.

Nikhil grins-See he's already making a bee line for U. Smooth bro real smooth. I'm afraid this ones taken by the guy over there. (Pointing at Abhay at the far back)

Shaurya brushed his hair with his fingers-Oh him at the far back. Is he your boyfriend?

Pia shook her head-No. Its complicated. I don't want to talk about him.

Shaurya notices Pia begins to get a little distant-Well then we won't talk about him.

Pia put the glasses behind in a neat pile. Shaurya noticed the ring. It was very elegant and appeared to be expensive like some antique jewellery. He knew what it was and why he was drawn to Pia. No wonder she'd knocked him over like that before. She wasn't some superhuman but the ring had magical properties that enhanced ones power. Interesting new twist. The girl he was interested in wasn't at all for any romantic entanglements but for the pull. Pia was special no doubt and he knew how important she was. it was foretold a long time ago that a chosen one would be born in an era when magic was almost dead. The girl with a broken soul would bring the old one back. That was all he got. He thought this was just a bedtime story but who knew.

Pia beams as she sees her friends make way-Misha's here! With Panchi. Cool. You'll like her she's the best. And Kabir's got Rosa.

Shaurya watches Misha from afar. He knew he'd seen her before. It was from the Dobrial firm. Arnav had a photo of both his daughters on his desk. It was the smile that drew him to Misha. From the way she was dressed he could tell she wasn't like the other girls he'd been used to dating. Misha wasn't attractive in an obvious way but when she smiled her face lit the room. She was more of a cute kinda way like Pia. She hadn't held his attention for long though as he'd got back to Pia. He liked her smiling again. She looked cute. No Pia wasn't his type either. Actually he was drawn to Pia for her innocence. She was one of those one would want to die for. He didn't know why. Maybe it was the ring. A protection ring was what they'd called it. Maybe it was just her. She had this aura about her that pulled anyone in. These two girls were making him feel protective about them. Weird man completely weird. He hadn't even met Misha yet.

Shaurya quizzed Pia-So this ring on your finger. Its beautiful. Where did U get it from?

Pia got all defensive-I can't tell U that. I don't really know other than its a family heirloom of someone very close to me.

Shaurya tried to get more out of Pia-Would U care to elaborate?

Pia thought she might as well just say it. Maithali didn't even know who was going to find her-It belonged to a rich princess who died and erm it passed down to me coz i look like her.

Abhay stared at Pia with his eyes looking through Pia. Shaurya notices Pia wince-He must be a real a**. Look at him giving U the dirty.

Pia tore her gaze away-Abhay's got a good heart he just doesn't know how to be civil around people.

Shaurya pitched in-U mean those eyeing his girl.

Pia looks away-I'm not his. I'm not anyone's. He won't let me be his.

Misha finally came over with her sister and Rosa-Hey chick! How U doing? Who won't let U be his?

Pia relieved Misha finally arrived-Nobody. So U finally made it then.

Misha wasn't letting Pia off the hook. Misha searched where Pia's eyes led her to-Oh no U don't Pia. Abhay! Pia U were on about Abhay. How many times have i told U to forget about him and move on. He's a class A jerk. He hurts U and U let him. why can't U fall for a nice sensible guy. Abhay's had all the girls in college well he's not getting U. He's not right for U Pia. He gets U down. Fine he's save U a few times doesn't mean U should fall for him. Have some self respect and find someone who will love U back Pia.

Panchi tells Misha to drop it-Don't let him get the better of U Pia. Misha i'm sure Pia's a smart girl she knows what's good for her.

Shaurya liked Mishas spark. He liked her even more now that he'd heard her speak-Hi I'm Shaurya by the way.

Pia saw Shaurya waiting for Pia to speak-Oh sorry! Misha this is Shaurya. He's overseeing the whole site here. His brother is Nikhil. My boss. Panchi is Misha's older sister and Rosa is a friend of mine. I'm sure U will all hit it off.

Misha groans-Oh no the man-eaters coming over here. She's spotted new meat. U are a goner mate.

Shaurya puzzled by all of this-Why who's coming over here?

Panchi smiled back-Oh U will see.

Tracker comes around with Angad with her drink-Hi everyone. So whats the gossip? Who is this man? Never seen U here before.

Shaurya gives Tracker a smile-Shaurya and U are?

Tracker is taken away by the cute dimples-Ruhi but U can call me Tracker.

Shaurya baffled by the new girl-Tracker?

Misha elaborates-She's a man magnet or shall i say she keeps a record of all the hot guys she see's. So far Abhay is on number 1 while the others keep shifting position. She'll have your number within minutes.

Tracker bats her eyelashes at Shaurya-Nice to meet U. Angad let go of me now please.

Shaurya was beginning to see what the girls were on about-Ok nice chatting U. Pia when's your shift over?

Pia checkers her watch-In an hour.

Shaurya grins cheekily-Good. That means we can chill for a few hours.

Pia tells the girls to keep Shaurya company as they all get to know him.

Over to Abhay and Tara they were watching Pia. More like watching the new guy Shaurya. Abhay didn't like this new guy. He was watching how close he was to Pia. Worst of all Pia had given away that she was single. It gave Shaurya free reins to make his move on Pia. By the body language Abhay already knew Shaurya was interested in Pia. Then again he seemed interested in Misha too. He didn't like Pia revealing about the ring. It was an heirloom of Maithali's one that belonged to her mother which Dai Maa had given her with a spell on it. Maithali had a foolproof plan and it was all linked with the ring. He had to know what that entailed. Yeah Abhay observed everything alright. He wasn't happy about this new person at all. Infact he had a good mind to punch his lights out. How dare he want Pia? She belonged with only him. Misha was encouraging Pia to move on. Pia didn't even defend him. Yes Pia was didn't at one point even bother to give him a second thought. For some reason this hurt him. He didn't know how much more he could keep going round in circles. He'd created this mess and didn't know how to get out of it. Chand and Haseena were pi**ed off at him and rightly so. He'd endangered their species. It wouldn't be long until they found them.

Edited by matwamango - 14 years ago

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