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Posted: 9 years ago
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Character:

Brigadier Chandok
Major Prabad Nair
Major Bhargav
Captain Rajveer Singh Shekhawat
Captain Dr. Shalini Singal
Captain Abhimanyu Rai Chauhan
Suriji
Lolita Mam

Late Captain Naveen Singh Ahluwalia

Cadet Naina Singh Ahluwalia
Cadet Alekh Sharma
Cadet Amardeep Huda
Cadet Ali Baig
Cadet Pooja Ghai
Cadet Yadhuvansh Sahni (Yudi)


Here is first part...

Chapter-1


Derr is nowhere a ray of hope...naina is getting depressive ...more n more...in d detention center...vindhyachal...

now dey r coming frm dining hall..after dinner..towards derr respective rooms..

Naina is walking slowly...aalekh comes close to her...n says...naina tu kitne din aise jee payegi..??? na khati hai na peeti hai..apunse teri yeh halat dekha nehi jata...tereko apun kuch kahena chahta hai...
Kya...naina wonders...looks at aalekh...a void look...pain has lost its intensity...

Huda comes close to dem..ha Qaidi..phulan ki halat bigadti ja rahi hai...tu kuch kar..

Tu bhag ja naina...aalekh whispers...
Huda looks at him in shock...wat!!!
Yes dude...!!he is right...!!tum bhag jao naina...

Naina...asks aalekh...don't u know wad is d fate of a absconder...!!!
I know naina...but if u stay here...u wnt be able to live...i know u ...u cant...aalekh says confidently...he turns towards...every body...back to naina...bol kaun kaun apunke sath hai...???

Naina...mera sim card hamesha tere lie free hai...meri network tere sath hai Qaidi...yeh jatt bhi tere sath hai qaidi...mai pahlibaar is baore ke sath hu...ki kaheta...hai...yudie...anything 4 phulan...
But aalekh...do u know wat r u saying...wat will happen to my parents... naina...asks aalekh...knowing dat definitely he has made already a plan..!!

Naina...agar aap bhagi nahi to aap mar jayengi..aapko pahele aapne bareme sochna chahiye..hum hudabhai aur aalekh bhai ke sath hai...aur waise bhi..aapki ammi ko humne jitna jana hai...agar who navin ke haadse ke baad samhaal sakti hai khudko to iss baar bhi kr payenge...aur fir hum hai na aapke sath...hum sab hai...ali confidently puts his hand on naina shoulder to make her confident...aalekh comes close to her..and he patts her shoulder...himmat mat har naina...sab kuch thik ho jayega...

Well dude den I m also wid u guyz..see I can help u guyz...about dese hidden cameras...I can disable dem by d mobile dat avimannyu sir has sent..us...

Oye chakdey phatte...tab to adhi kaam ho hi gaya...pooja yells...
Plz pooja come down...dey are active still now...ali controls her ...yudibhai needs time...

Listen guyz...we now need to make a fullproff plan right now...huda announces...

Yeda hai kya apun teri tarah aalekh curts him midway...ab who...kya bolte hai...dicch..."discuss dude" yudi adds...ha wohich...karenge to pura ka pura plan chaupat ho jayega...kaal suve breakfast ke baad library me jaane ke bahane uske paas bale room me milo...sab...apun chalta hai..ee huda chal...
Aur naina ghabra mat...tere dost hamesha tere sath hai...dis time naina ...dznt be able to control her...heads towards aalekh n hugs him tightly..

a drop of tear rolls down by her chick..thankz guyz she turns to every body..leaving aalekh...


Oye tu chal...aj raat ki recharge tereko changa banayegi..kaal vag daud hai..bohot..pooja pulls naina by holding her hand..towards derr room...
Everybody reachs derr respective rooms...but wid d thought how...???

Lrl music stars in d back ground... Puchona hamse hai kya jindegi...
Humse hamaari hai yeh jindegi...

na pure dhoop hai..na pure chao hai...
Jaise yeh raah hain waise yeh pao hai..

Jaha hai acche hai jaise hai acche hain
samjhao na...batlaoona...

Humein kaise jeena hai
let it be...

ohh left right left...


True frends ...r true companions...in every odds...in evry thing...dey r together...dey r d pride of India...
dey r pride of capt. rajveer ...nothing can defeat dem...nothing can beat dem..dey r born winners...
Dey r back...in derr actual attitude...so ...time for action...!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I hope u guys liked it.. please do comment if you like it

Love
Nikki


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Posted: 9 years ago
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Updated dear... Font color mein issue aa rha tha😡


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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Nikkisha


Updated dear... Font color mein issue aa rha tha😡




It's fine dear.😊 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Mahak Sinha



It's fine dear.😊 😊



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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice dear plz update & pm me
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: rajeeviansonai

Nice dear plz update & pm me


Thanks dear 😛😊

Not able to PM you because you have exceeded the maximum number of PM. Sorry

Edited by Nikkisha - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Chapter - 2


Naina is lying in her bed...her eyes were wide open...her face...describes she has gained some confidence...pooja ..orders her...oye..naina...ab so ja...puri discharge ho jayegi..nahi toh...naina turns her face towards her...n smiles silently...after a while she mutters under her breath "thank u..."

But somehow pooja listens dat n says..oye...chup chap soti hai kya nahi...
Ha ha...soti hu..tu soja..naina assures her...n close her eyes...
A flash...so cadet naina ahh sing...back in mood...naina opens her eyes wid a shock...sir...two drops of tear rolls down...she has lost her mentor...her love...everything...in her life...she has lost d most precious person...raajveer sir...i...love u ...she closes her eyes...

The next morning...every body is silent...taking derr breakfast..but derr minds r working fast...dey finishes it...widout saying a word...they have to be carefull...otherwise...everything will go in vain...so they are collecting power to fight ...from the silence...
They got to go now...
They individually..comes to the prefixed room one by one..aalekh first off all..then ali..n huda...den yudi...and naina pooja together...they are late...caz...they had to dodge...the infirmatory guards...
So wats the plane chief...yudi asks ...breaking the silence..
Here it is...aalekh briefly describes the whole plan...ohh...alekh this is next to impossible...naina almost yells...
The other five replies together we will make d impossible to possible...!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Naina...bites her lower lips for a second...to ponder over...and after a while...answers in a cold confident voice...okk...I m ready...
So we will meet after the dinner...
Yudi its ur responsibility to disable all d cameras till then...okk...
Sure naina...
I m ready...
Hum bhi..ali answers...
Jath hamesha tayaar hai...huda replies...
Mai taiyaar hu...pooja whispers...aalekh patts pooja..
N den says...okk...then at sharp...23:00 hrs...usjagape...
Thik hai...koi shak...??
The rest five replies together noo sir...!!!
Aalekh smiles..n mutters under his breath..."nautanki saala...!!!"

The day passed away very fast...to arrange d every thing...
Ther heartbeats grow faster...The time has came...to prove frenship...prove...themselves..
Sharp 20:00 hrs...
They meat at dining hall...

Cold expression less six faces...start acting when they see bhargav entering...they acts like...they have totally lost ther confidence...broken fully by the torture...left every thing on bhargav...they have totally lost it...the look makes bharav satisfied...he chuckles rudely...n turns back..to get out...huda stiffens his face muscles...sala...kameena...

Oyee...cameras are active...behave normally...pooja warns him...a lil mistake of ours...can destroy everything...thand rakh...!!!
They silently finshes der meal...and faces each other...confidence was glowing from the six faces...

Hahah...!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!bhargav...misses...the scene in the camera...because he was busy wid tom..n jerry...
Now its the time to joke on him...the super six has stars ther action...the time has finally came...to make ther plan a success...
!!!!

They starts performing...derr individual...parts...of misson_escape
Naina is seating on her bed...calmly...pooja was taking round of d room...naina looks at her n says...it will make u throw pujii...hearing her nick name again...she comes close to naina...oye...i will miss u...me too pujii...naina replies...n hugs ...each oderr...real frends...last warm hug...it was giving confidence each oderr...

Naina...hears d bell of 22:00 hrs...everyone as well..
Naina...hav u planned anything...whr will u go...????pooja looks concerned..
First lemme get out of dis pujii...actually...I havnt thought...time will decide...what to do...
{[ ...Hey...!!!!.do u know guyz...GOD was actually listing to her...for d first time...hehehehe...wen she tells dat...god chuckled...naughtily...HE has decided...what to do...wid dis fateless girl...]}

22:50 hrs
Every bothey heads...at d defined position...yudi has disabled all d cameras...pooja has...given...sleaping pills to all d guards...dat she has...dft from infirmatory...
Aalekh has brought some chlorophorm...huda n ali...has cut d all d wires of warning bell...aalekh has also managed...a pistol...from some guard...


Now everybody except aalekh...is heading to the westgate...of det. Center...naina...has reached derr...alreathey...along wid yudi...huad n ali is on derr way... ...pooja...is snaching senses...of all d guards...by d chlorophorm who r coming...in derr way to major bhargav...yah!!!!aalekh n pooja...has d responsibility to take a special care for him...they finds a gurad...entering in d bhargavs room...wid a tray in his hand...and a black tea...was on it...yahhh...they looks at each order...n starts heading towards d door...d guard comes out...and seeing dem...about to start shouting...but in no time...huda...gives his neck a round...arre tu ihaa...ha...maine socha...tumlogon ko jarurat ho sakta hai...jatt ka


Accha kia...huda...pooja grins...aalekh nodds his head,...iska kuch nehi ho sakta hai yaar...!!!! Where is aali , yudi n naina????aalekh is worried...they all r waiting at behind d bush...near d waste gate..huda assures...
Ohh dats fine!!!!!!!!!!!...all done na...????aalekh asks huda...
Ha qaidi ab isko samhal...he indicates towards...bhargav's room...
Apun andar jata hai...agar...2 min me bahar nehi aaya...to tu aana huda...pooja u will take care of d tresspassers...yes sir...!!pooja winks at aalekh...aalekh is about to enter...oyee sun...best of luck...!!!...jatt wishes...
Aalekh enters...wid a cotton peace...in his hand...
They both...keeps...patience...outside...ofter sometime...oyee panjaban...abtak aaya kiu nehi apna qaidi...thik to haina...tu rukh...yha...huda gets impatient...


Thats all for today.. hope u guys like it.. pls do comment 😊

Love
Nikki
Edited by Nikkisha - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hii nikki...just read ur fiction...n its just awesome...i'm a big fan of RN n love reading fictions related to them specially based on LRL ...its just amazing...

Continue soon n pls do PM me whenever u update :-)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Heyy nice ff thanks for the pm

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