LRL Dream (Raj-Naina FF) CH-13 Updated Pg-26 - Page 5

Originally posted by: npksk8495

nice update
well done ! Naina! kitne achchhe se situation ko handle kar khud ko gaurds se bachaya just hope truck se bhi bina kisi problme ke nikal jaye
thanks for pm take care keep smiling

Originally posted by: kajalkalwani

thank fr pm nice update

Originally posted by: ProudRajeevian

awesome update...👏

ab mujhe yaad aa rha h ki maine ye ff padhi h...bt it was incomplete...thnq so much for continuing it😛 i think i know next part me kya hone wala h n eagerly waiting for this part

u described naina's emotions very well...

thnks for PM

pls continue soon

Originally posted by: suhana.dixit

nice updates..😃

Originally posted by: tr_eta

Superb..,all emotions are beautifully portrayed

Originally posted by: rkchandni

Awsm

Lovely

Update

Continue

Soon

Originally posted by: varshita

Hey dear Nikki right? 😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 Mahak aka Vartika pmed me about this FF and after reading a few parts I remember that I have read it.😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😉

Great that you started it again so now it's your responsibility to finish this as well. 😊

Nice parts.👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 Naina is alone and I am sure she will be successful in her mission. 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼

Continue soon dear.

Chapter - 5

The driver comes to the back...removes the terpall cover...
But finds nobody...

Ahhojee...sayed aapke kaan baaje honge ustaad...!!!!!!!!!
the driver looks confused...he has heard something...hummm
Chal chalte hai...

He was right...it was naina...but its too late...to find her out...she has taken the full advantage...of the incident...{oyee chakthey phatte...!!!!!!!!!!aakhir naina hai yaar...!!!!inne jaldi thodehi hath aanewali...!!!}

She quickly runs into the jungle...it is complete dark everywhere...horrible sounds are coming from each side...she ables to understand...she has come into the very dense side of the jungle...but it makes her happy...rather than worried...she is at least confident...that Nair at least this time of night wouldn't be able to find her out...
unexpectedly...a lightening...it makes every thing clear...ohh...whats this...

It starts raining within no moments...its raining heavily...she almost turned to a doll made by mud...she looks at her self...this makes her think of the moments...of the mentor ship program...

It makes her breath heavy...she tries to move fast...but caz of heavy raining...n cold bridge...makes her shivering...she was completely wet...!! Its seeming the rainstorm will finish up everything today...whats wrong with nature today...chilling cold...and the storm...made the jungle a utter disaster... unremitting lightening...is giving her some idea...of the way... But tries to move fast...ohhh...what was that...a tree falls down...making a huge sound...it was terrible...its no more safe here...where to go...maaahhh...ahhh...ahhh...the adversity...has crossed all the limits...

She bumps on a tree...and fells down...darkness of the awful night had made her almost blind...her leg and right hand has got injured...she sits derr as it is...for a while...pain...was making her handicap...possibly ankles...has lost it...she gets up...after a short span of time...though unable to...stand on her own feet's...she makes it possible...the training days of kma...has taught her...this...blood was oozing out from her hand...paining bitterly

Tries to move along...and slowly starts walking...she is lost now...she has lost the direction...not knowing where...actually where she is heading...she walks...to get a shelter...

The ankle is paining so badly...pain has shrunken her face...she is trying hard to walk...after a long time...she finds a cave type something...a lightening helps her to visualize that...she gets more enthu to head towards that...at least the night will pass away...i will think about the other things later in the morning...my ankles need rest badly...or tomorrow ..it will give up walking...she thanks god...4 showing her the shelter to pass the night...as she get closer to it...it seemed totally desolate place...at least where I can rest my feet's...she gets closer to it...hey its not a cave...it seems a ruined old home...probably deserted for many years... ohhh... ...atleast human being were here someday...she ables to take herself in it...and suddenly...a hand wrapes around her neck...who are you...??what are you doing here...she feels...a cold metallic touch at her right ear...

THE VOICE...WHO...WHO SAID IT...????

Who are you...The voice is so FAMILIAR...!!!!!...NOOO...IT ...CANT BE...ITS IMPOSSIBLE...god!!!!!!!!nooo...!!!!!!!
everything was moving around her vision...though it was total black inside the dwelling...though...the world was seeming stirring badly to her...
She back her sense to speak...after a while staying in the same position she asks...the man
Who are you...??

The person gets shocked at dis...NAINA...

IS IT YOU...???WHAT R U DOING HERE...?
THAT WAS ENOUGH...FOR NAINA...TO LOOSE HER CONSCIOUS...
She fells down ...AT GROUND...
THE MAN REMAINS THUNDERSTRUCK...!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Ohhh GOD...!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
IT WAS NONE ODERR THAN...CAPTAIN RAAJVEER...!!!!!!!!!!!

Hope u guys like it.. pls do comment

Love

Nikki