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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: senchaitali131

Hay great update. I really enjoyed it very much. This part is too imotional. Please cont. Soon.Thanks for pm me.


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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: tr_eta

Awesome update.,loved raj-naina moments,continue soon


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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: npksk8495

Awesome update!!! 😃
total package of emotion,humour romance & a little bit of misunderstanding!!! 👏
RN moment 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Mahak Sinha

Sorry Nikki dear for being so late with reply. But I think I am not that late as you didn't update till now.

Great part with sizzling end..😳 😳 😳

Raj bhi na why is he pointing again and again about Huda? Can't he see how she is taking care of him and his every small need. Look she is more worried about him totally ignoring about her health. Shalini is right she must take care of her health first.

Raj bhi, when he woke up he found Naina but he hurt Naina unintentionally when he came to know that Naina didn't have proper food for last a few days. She was angry and I totally support her anger. Raj should say sorry now.

But the end was just sizzling and hot, but Raj once again hurt Naina. Can't he see through her eyes what she wants? 😡 😡



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Posted: 8 years ago
Awesome...continue soon.
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Originally posted by: Prakrutibhat

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Posted: 8 years ago
Chapter : 13

Raj...raj...cadet singh...kaha rahe gaye tum dono...ajao...jaldi se khana kha lo...

Shalini shouts for them...and mutters under her breath...jab dekho yeh love birds khusar fusar karte rahete hai...kahi fir se panga na le lia...

Naina...breaks into tears...in the wash room...sir ko kya ho jata hai harbaar...kyu aisa karte hai woh...itne kareeb aake bhi itne dur chale jaate hai...he has loved me...should I be happy with that or sad for that he has done afterwards...
Raj dint understand the lilttle fact of women's nature...
whenever they loves somebody from there heart...only then...they surrender themselves...fully...
Raj comes silently to the hall...and waits for naina...his head is crushing down with lots of negative thoughts...again he cursed himself under his breath..

After a long time when she dint come...he takes derr plate and goes inside...throwing all hesitation out...as shalini words moving in his head...she can be in prob...if she doesnt take care of herself...
Now...raj doesn't forget to knock before entering the room...
Naina ...tum khana kyu nahi kha rahi ho...?
Mujhe bukh nahi hai...aaaplog kha lijiye..naina...replies...lying back to him..
aise kyu soyi ho...plz...naina...mera gussa khane par to mat utaro...mujhse bohot badi galti ho gayi hai...mai janta hu...par agar tum khana nahi khaogi...to main bhi nahi khaunga...
Plz...kha lo...plz...naina...plz
Naina...knows her mentor very well.if he has said...whatever he is saying he means it...unke dewaangi ka namuna...court me dekh chuki hai woh ...slowly gets up ...and...tells him...(facing away from him...)...main kha lungi...ap kha lijiye...
Raj notices...her wet eyelids...and says drowsily...right hand to use kar pata nahi...hamesha se tum khilati thi...ab left hand se kha lunga...par tum kha lo...uske baad hi khaunga...in a emotional tone...

And gets up from derr...leaving her plate derr...holding his plate in left hand...and turns back to go back to hall...and suddenly feels...a pull in his t-shirt...turns back to naina...with shock...
yha..baithiye...naina...voice is still heavy...plate dijiye aapni...
Kyu????raj asks...
Dijiye...aur baithiye...naina..indicates a place near to her...and takes the plate from him...
Kha lijiye...though...facing either way...naina...lifts her hand...to his mouth...
But raj does not respond to her...and...touches her chin...by his left hand...and draws her face...towards himself...that makes naina...shiver...she responds...but lowering down her eyes...and...having butterfies in her belly...(is he again going to kiss me...)and again shivers...

Naina ...after a pause continues...naina...pata nahi...tum mein kya hai...jab jab tum mere saamne aati ho mere hosh udd jate hai ajkal...sahi aur galat pahechan nahi pata hun...kuch samajh mein nahi aata hai...par jab tum mujhse ruth jati ho...tab...mar jane ko jee karta hai...mujhse kuch nahi ho pata hai...plz naina maaf kar do...raj whispers in a hypnotized tune...raj was having a fight...very long in his heart...naina...whether she loves him or not...whether he should follow his heart...or not...whether he should come close to her or not...

Dil kaheta hai...
chal unse mill...
uthte hain kadam...
ruk jate hai...


naina...understands his insecurity...and says...to divert him...ab ...kha lijiye...aap khayenge to mein bhi kha paayungi...and wipes d tear rolling down by his cheek...by d other hand...
raj smiles ...and shooks his head...!!!...tum bhi na...koi nshi jeet sakta tumse...do..and takes a bite...of food...ab tumhari baari...
shalini...came to see them whether every thing allright between them or not...and notices...everything...that makes a tear in her eyes...watching d immense and innocent love between them...they have allways gone through worst situation...but d bonding...d depth of d bonding between dem never changed...god will surely help dem...
and wen she was thinking all dese...she notices...raj is holding naina hand...and bites in her finger dat made naina...push him...beat him...in his chest...and breaks down in laughter ...after a pause...dey also joined her...though...wid pinkish chiks...having quick glances in each others eyes...blushing...
and shaliny mutters ...yeh dono kabhi nahi sudhrenge...!!!!! Leaving d love-birds alone derr...
aap fir katenge to mai nshi khilayungi...naina..complaing...
kyu...tumne bhi to mujhe gloi mari thi...student ho kar...teacher ko...
naina...says in a mischievous tone...aur aap ne to bohot kuch kiya hai teacher ho kar...
raj gets serious at dis...and...turns pale...
naina turns d topic...glancing at his face...and says...I mean...teacher student ki aungliya to chaba nahi jate na...ha...waise mucchad hota to...sayed dimag chaba jate...
dat makes raj ..chuckle...and...naina...successful to ease him.

accha...mein chalti hu...aap medicin le lena...wahi pe...apke bed ke paas rakhi hai...aur mam...apko kuch aur chahiye to bata dijiye...naina...says...standing on d doorside...about to go out...
nah cadet...!!!widout d medicines aur kuch nahi chahiye...dats all...take care..
u could hav ask me once ...what I need from market...raj complains in a pretending sad tone...

Naina...chuckles at dis...I know..dat ...u dont need anything...!!!
Raj smiles in...accha..?? manner...and says...come soon...plz don't be late...naina..turns back listening...dis...and smiling in a mischievous look...says...don't tell me u r going to miss me...checking shalini is not derr...
Raj ...shruggs...and says in a serious look...nothing like dat cadet singh...!!!though feeling happy inside...
Naina wears d helmate...and says...den I m not going to come back...and in no time disappears...leaving...a rounded smoke and...puzzled raj left derr...

Raj feeling...she is hurt...but I dint mean so...actually...cummon...ab bolne ka kya faida hai...woh gayi...har waqt tu use hurt karta raheta hai...curses himself...agar woh ...tujhse payar karti bhi hai...to bohot jald nafrat karne lagegi...
Raj coming into d hall finds shalini...checking d knief...dat was used to take out d bullets...
Toh yeh baat hai...cadet singh is really brave...I must admit...!!!!!!!!!!!!getting what actually happened...!!
Yah...!!!...but don't u think dat is too much...is halat mein bhi use bike lekar jana ni chaiye tha...market??d last sentence of naina...rolls in rajs mind...

Anyway...doc tell me what is d condition of KMA...and Vindhyachal..
I m egar to know...cadets condition...how r dey now...dey have helped naina a lot...major is not going to leave dem...so easily...I m anxious...
Tell me how r dey now...
Well...capt...dats unlucky for dem...major bhargav...has treated dem badly...but...could not go to far ...shalini replies...
Why...?raj asks..
Shaliny: capt abhimanyu...had kept a strong eye on him...dat he couldn't cross d limit...

Raj: chouhan...??dats so good of him...at least he has started taken care of dem...i m lil relieved now...!!!!
Shalini: Yes capt...he has changed a lot now...!he has helped a cadets a lot ...!!
Raj: hummm...he has a very good heart...actually ...he is a lil stubborn...but has a very kind heart...!...stubborn...caz of royal blood...hona bhi sahi hai...
Shalini: well capt...derr is a interesting news for u...derr is a traitor inside KMA...
Raj: I knew it...doc...(excitedly..)..but derr was no time...actually I was so close to d traitor...I was about ...to reveal dat...and dat happened...!!!!!!!...i was so close...!!
Shalini : I know capt...it was d most shamefull incident of kma history...

Raj: nahh...doc...may be 2nd one...d 1st one was d of be navins incident...
Shalini : yes capt...and ...naina has to bear d both...and she had had enough...jante hain Capt woh bilkul tut chuki thi...aapke haadse ke baad...shock me chali gayi thi...na kuch bolti thi...na kuch sun pati thi...na khatithi na piti thi...roti tak nehi thi...bas chup chap asman ke taraf dekhti raheti thi...jaane kisse sikwa karti thi...kisi se uski halat dekhi nehi jaati thi...puja...ali...yudi...huda...aalekh..sabne kosish ki ...usse hosh me lane ke lie..par koi..faida nahi huya...jinda lash ban gayi thi...

Fir capt abhimanyu ne...usse sadme se bahar laye...apki aur navin ki yaad dila ke...
Jante hai...uss raat naina ki tadap...sare kma me cha gayi thi...
Raj turns his face away from her to control himself...a lump choacked his throat...and after a pause asks shalini...do u think...she loves me...??agar karti hai to mujhe kuch kaheti kyu nahi...

Shalini : I don't know surely capt...she has never confessed me anything...u know na...she is not dat type of girl...to speak up so easily...to reveal herself...but after ur incident...and after last night...i do think she loves u from d bottom of her heart...I don't know my thought is true or not...but my intuition says so...
Raj : den y doesn't she confess me so... I have waited a long shalini...a really very long..time..and being so close to her now...I cant wait anymore...I have nothing left except her...just nothing...I don't want to loose anymore...at least not her...she is my life...and I want to be sure dat whether I have naina...or...unables to finish...and closes his eyelids...
Stop thinking...like dat raj...shalini says patting his shoulder... every thing will be fine...
Ya me too...hope so...raj...says in a heavy voice...

Shalini : so jaiye thodi der mein...nahi toh fever aa skta hai phir se...u should take rest ...
Raj gets up from derr and heads towards his bed...and being both physically..and mentally...tiard...dozes off...widin...half n hour...

Leave me I said leave me...naina screams...
No...u r under arrest...sister of a bloody traitor...girlfriend of a murderer...and urself...a absconder...tujhse aur umeed bhi kya kia ja sakta hai...akhir...khun hi gandha hai...

Claaap...naina gives a tight slap...bhayia...was not a traitor...!!!! Do u get dat...!!!rascal...!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! leave me...i said...!!!!!!!!!
Teri itni himmat...!!!!...u bitch...!!!!...tucking her hair Nair...draggs her...

Aaahhh...!!!!!!!!!...chod dijiye...chodiye mujhe...rajveer sir ...raaajveerrr sssiiir...bachaiyeee...!!!!
Tera yaar yha nahi aanewala...tujhe mere sath hi chalna padega...!!...bitch...!!
Nahi...leave me...!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Raj...raj...raj...wake up raj...!!!

Y r u sweating so much...!!!!!!
Kya hua...?
Raj wakes up wid a shock...!!doc...naina...naina kaha hai...
Who to abhi tak wapas nahi aayi...par wat happened...???
Doc...kitna baj raha hai...??naina ko abtak aajana chahiye tha na...woh koi mushkil me to nahi hai na na...??bohot waqt ho goya doc...kuch prob to nahi hai...
Ha...its been quite a long time...!!!!she should have come back...its really very late...but u don't worry...!!just relax...u shouldn't take so much pressure..capt...I had told u earlier...

Raj...inattentively thinks her last sentence... "den I m not going to come back..."
After some time...raj walks out side...and stands...facing towards naina's way...
Shalini sits near the barandah...capt...I m really scared now...its 8.30pm...
She yet not came back...
Raj impatiently...announces...if she does not come back within one hour...den I m going to find her...she might be in trouble...

No capt...cause of high antibiotics...and ur jidd...u r free to move...but u cant go outside...dats not possible...

U r not getting me doc...i hav to go...if she...doesn't ...stops awkwardly...!!
every second is seeming like a year to raj...her last said words r echoing...near his ears...
i cant loose her...she may love me...may not...but her presence is d most important to me...

i m missing u naina...badly...immensely...i hav allways missed u...y dont u understand...!!!
plz come back naina...dont do dis wid me...
i cant live widout u...
plz...naina...come back...plz...plzzz...
i beg of u...
come back...!!!!!!!!

Shalini...is so tensed dat couldn't deny him...knowing dat very well...dat...its really harmfull to him to go out in dis condition...and says...ok...but I will accompany u...!!no more discussion capt...curts him...in midway...as raj tries to deny her proposal...
...

Time passes by...and their tension increases wid it...!!...wats wrong wid her...!!!
She was never such irresponsible...definitely something wrong wid her...
Bohot ho chukka...ab mai jar aha hu...raj announces...and heads inside...to fetch his revolver...

I m going wid you...just a sec capt...!!!

No...shalini...but unables to finish...as suddenly...

Edited by Nikkisha - 8 years ago

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