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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thanks dear..😊
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Thanks dear...😊😊
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Originally posted by: desaiprachi07

Hey a great FF started by you.👏 Nice start.😊 So all six cadets are going in search of Raj.👍🏼 They had to as Raj was not only their mentor but a true teacher in all sense. Everyone is doing his/ her work.👍🏼 Good one. 👏Continue soon.


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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: rkchandni

Aswm story dear

Loved all 3 chapters cont soon


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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Mahak Sinha

Finally finished reading all three parts. Kuch kuch yaad aa gaya.

It was really good and once again these friends of Naina proved that they can sacrifice anything for friendship. Naina went all alone in search of Raj not risking anyone's life.

I hope she meets Rajveer soon. Only she is the one who can save him.

Update soon dear


Thanks a lot dear.. finally u read it..😛😛

yeah jaldi hi naina raj ko dhund lengi.. n i hope jab tmko sab yaad aa jayega..😉😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Chapter - 4


Naina slowly walks...through a lone dark alley...leaving the main road...because...there may somebody can recognize her...as the cadet who has fled away from vindhyachal detention Center...she knows that her friends...have to face a lot for what they have done for her...

She needed the boost badly to get out of the oblivion of depression...she has not been able to prepare herself the oppression she was facing at the detention center...

Though she had lost the man whom she loved most in the world...4 years ago...but after coming to kma...from nainital...she...was recovering...from the shock...that navins death has given her...by getting the support of these friends...and...specially...rajveer sir...
Yes he is her rajveer sir...naina mutters under her breath...abhimanyu sir...watever u say...I dnt accept the charge against him...sir cant do dis...he cant kill anybody more...

She has been able to understand...under wat condition...rajveer has killed her brother...and his best friend Capt navin.
She recollects ...capt salve's...words ..."only one person was so important to him...the one...u ...the his love..."she is completely lost in her thoughts...the memories...the only companion left to her...tears made her eyesight hazzy...

What rajveer sir has not done for her...is this love...??how can one love anyone so much...???why u have finished urself for me...why...???dont u understand I love u too...she...pledges...she has got sentimental...

Yes abhimanyu sir...he is my BELOVED...u r right this time...!!!!!!!!!!he is my beloved...i love him...I don't know...how and when...I fell in love wid him...but...he is the only one...whom I loved in my whole life...as...somebody special...naina...looks upward...to the sky...why...why...???damn it...??what problem u do have with me...?? Why u always snach away...my love everytime...i just loved two persons in this world and u have taken them away from me...?? why??...

Tears has chocked her throat...she is unable to control herself...after a long time she has got a very long time to speak to herself...
She blinks her eyes...to let the tear flow...and views the sight of last sight of rajveer sir...the emotion...the pain...the love...the way he has loved her nobody can love anyone Kya khub nibaya pyaar sir aapne...hath thama tha...chodke kaha chale gaye sir.!!!!!!!!...ab mai kayse jeeu...ya fir kaise maru...kya karu sir...bol do...plz sir laut aao...aapni cadet singh ko aap chodke kaise ja sakte ho...u had promised me u will be allwayz wid me...will never let me be alone...u have kept ur promises...but why did u forget this...how can u forget this...??plz come back...mujhse aur nahi hota sir...plz...plz... come back...kitne baat adhure rahe gaye hai sir...lemme finish...those...give me a scope...plz sir...


U have told me who goes to point 1857 never comes back alone...they all get settled in there life...then why this is happening with me sir...???why???where r u sir...??

Tere bin mai yun kaise jeeya...
Kaise jeeya tere bin...
lekar yaadein teri...
rate meri kati...
tanha hai...tujhbin saase meri...
tanha badan...tanha...feeru...
jeena nahi tere bin...
tere bin...


She was so lost in her thoughts...doesnt able to notice someguyz are following...her...as she have come near to a locality...thought has engrossed her so...she was completely unaware...where she is going...

OHH GOD!!!!!!!!!...
the security guards...of the detention...center...
She walks in a drowsy manner...as if she is not able to understand wat is going on around herself...

Suddenly one of them...comes close to her as she bumped on a brick...it...brings her into the sense...ohh...my god...!!!!where has she come...she recognises...the guards...and got the whole matter...bhargav...is back in his senses...

Ohh god...I have to do something...she says to herself...
As the guy ables to touch her shoulder...she just turns around...and gives a tight slap to him...

Oyee...teri himmat kaise hui mujhe chuneki...gharme ma bahen nahi hai kya...she acts like dat to draw attention of some people...who r sitting in a nearby...tea..shop...

Derr is no choice left...for her...except gaderring...some people derr...by whom she can distract the guards...intellegent cadet ahh singh...smart move...capt rajveers voice echoes from background...her favourite communication teacher...
Oye sharam nahi andi tereko...akeli kudinu chendti hai...army bale hokar des ki auraton ka ijjat nahi kar sakta khote da puttar...one old woman comes out wid a bellon...!!

Some peoples...also...joined her...
Ajkal rakhshak hi vakshak hai...desh ka kya haal ho goya hai...oyee...sun...par humlog abhi bhi jinda hai...samajh lio...saitano...
Suniye aaplog galat samajh rahe hai...yeh ladki hamare detention center se bhagii hui hai...

Kya...kya kaha...naina acts like a innocent girl...mai...ki center...???detention...woh kya Honda hai...haye...kina saitan hai...!!!abhi bhi jhut bol raha hai,...??bohot chalak samajhta hai aapne apko...??hayee...himmat to dekho...!!!

That was enough...!!!!for them...
Janta janardan lag jate hai dhulaime...u see guyz...nothing can stop them...

Naina takes the advantage n fies away from derr...after walking normally sometime...she starts running...she knows it...Bhargav will never give up so easily...she know him very well...if u can not pretend ur enemy...he will beat u any time...dnt ever...take him casually...she was taught by Capt...rajveer...!!she is his best cadet...who can...recover...in anytime when situation needs...
And after a while of running through narrow alleys...she gets into the jungle...

But she doesnt stop running...after moving inside she slow downs her speed...
And suddenly...

she hears a sound frm back...she finds a truck...was coming...from the direction of detention centre...she apprehends...it might be the guards...from the detention...centre.

And suddenly...the truck stops...she was hiding in a bush...she was making herself ready for a tough fight..with them...but to her utter surprise...she watchs the driver...to find a bush for nature call
Yack!!!! She mutters...and a plan...sparkles in her head...she steps outside...n...creaps toward the trucks back...she has planned to use the truck...which can tak her away a very fare distance...she cant ask 4 help to demmmone reason...she is a gal...and secondly...her cloths has got very untidy...they will get suspicious ...about her...
just after getting into the truck...she feels that starts moving...right timings cadet singh...!!!!she says herself...and sits comfortably...streaches her feets...which were paining for walking n running a long distance...and again starts to think...where is the destination of the truck...and tries to listen the conversation between the driver and the helper...

Ohh my god...they r going to take meal at a dhaba a lil before ambala...

I shouldn't go to ambala...if nair watches me out...then...everything will go in vain...I have to get down at the dhaba...but how...???derr will be a lots of people...at the dhaba...she recognizes the dhaba...her friends once freaked out at the dhaba...!![remember guyz...jaha chiku se bachaya tha cadets ko capt raajveer ne...!!!!!!!]

Its must be crowdy...derr...i should do something...she tries to look out to recognize the road...but fails due to deep darkness of night...at jungle...the jungle has covered the both sides of the road...as if they want to hide the road...derr is sound of passing cars n trucks...she realizes she has taken a big risk ...she have get down before reaching ambala...because they r going to stay the night at ambala...is fairly evident from derr discussion ...

Time passes by...she thanks pooja in subconscious mind that...she has forcefully made her taking the dinner...it will very difficult to arrange food now onwards...she has simply no destination...she has no aim...except one...she has to get down of d truck...within half an hour...ambala is not far away from here...hardly 100 km...she have to get down...!!chal naina tayar ho ja...chalti gadise kudne ke lie...tere pas aur koi option nahi hai...she mutters herself...but d truck is running at a very high speed ...what to do...???

...screeechhh...suddenly the driver pushes the break...
Ki hua ustaad!!!!...the helper asks...
Aho yaar...!!!mujhe kuch awaj si sunai di...piche se...rukh oyee...mai dekhta hu...the driver replies to the helper...

s**t...!!!!!!!!!!!...it was the sound of the drum in which naina punched in utter disappointment...!!!!!!!!!!!


Thats all for today.. hope u guys like it.. pls do comment..

Love

Nikki

Edited by Nikkisha - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#37
nice update
well done ! Naina! kitne achchhe se situation ko handle kar khud ko gaurds se bachaya just hope truck se bhi bina kisi problme ke nikal jaye
thanks for pm take care keep smiling
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Posted: 9 years ago
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awesome update...👏
ab mujhe yaad aa rha h ki maine ye ff padhi h...bt it was incomplete...thnq so much for continuing it😛 i think i know next part me kya hone wala h n eagerly waiting for this part

u described naina's emotions very well...

thnks for PM

pls continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Superb..,all emotions are beautifully portrayed
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey dear Nikki right? 😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 Mahak aka Vartika pmed me about this FF and after reading a few parts I remember that I have read it.😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😉

Great that you started it again so now it's your responsibility to finish this as well. 😊

Nice parts.👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 Naina is alone and I am sure she will be successful in her mission. 👍🏼
👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼

Continue soon dear.
Edited by varshita - 9 years ago

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