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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: npksk8495

absolutely amazing update
dedicate this song to our dear raina "abhi mujh mein kahin" from movie agneepath
thanks for pm keep smiling keep writing


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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thanks dear 😊
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Originally posted by: Mahak Sinha

Superb update. 👏 👏

Naina is unable to believe that Raj is there with him.
For Raj his luck isn't that bad when he made her meet Naina again after so long.

Their emotions and chemistry is sizzling.😳 😳 The words Naina said meant Raj and his importance in Naina's life.


Continue soon dear.


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Posted: 9 years ago
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Chapter - 7

After a quite long time...naina..n rajveer detaches from each other...they both starts feeling awkward...she asks...sir...aap yha kaise aaye...??usdin ke baad aapne kisi ko koi contact nahi kia...yeh sab kya ho raha hai sir...kisne kia tha woh hamla...

Rajveer take a deep breath actually...seeing her concern...he expected more from her ...at this time... something more above than concern... Wat it is...he himself is not fully aware of the fact... But something more...this was the most close moments they shared...of their relationship...

He looks thoughtful...he was thinking
Sayed abhi bhi naina concern se jyada kuch nahi feel karti...mere lie...eshanmand hai sayed...par naina maine tumhare kya kar paya hu...kuch bhi to nahi...aur jo bhi kiya hai...woh meri zimmedari thi...u shouldn't be thankful..to me...kya hai mere naseeb me...??...kya who mujhe kabhi nahi chahegi..kya mai mohabbat ke bhi layak nahi...mere dost ko chin lie gaye...mera career tak chin goya...sab kuch...jo apne balbute pe maine hasil kiya tha...pal bhar mein chin liya gaye...ab naina mili hai wapas itne dino ke baad ...usdin jo hua court me uske baad bhi kya tum sirf itna hi kahogi...aur kuch nahi...??

Naina kab samjhogi...???...ek tumhi sahara ho mera...aur koi nahi bacha hai...bas sirf tum...kya mein tumhare pyaar ke layak hi nahi hu...naina...a lump rises on his throat...aur saha nahi jata bagwaan...marne kyu nahi dia...?

Sir ... sir kya soch rahe hai...?? kahiye na...kya hua hai aapko...ap mujhse baat tak nahi kar rahe hai...naina sounds worried...and a bit complaining voice... Her voice brings him back from his thoughts..
Ha...kya kaha tumne???

...aap kya soch rahe ho sir...kya hua kahiye na...??aap yha kaise aaye?...naina complains...
Woh sab baatien bad mein bhi ho sakti hai...pahele tum change karlo...puri bhig gayi ho...thand lag jayegi...aur mujhe bhi janna hai...raat ke 3 baje tum yaha ghane jangle me kya kar rahi thi...he curts naina in midway...sounding concerned...its an order cadet singh...!!!

naina shivers at this..after such a long time...she has allways cried at night...recollecting those small memories...she had so many things to tell him..to surrender herself...but when the time came...she is feeling damn uncomfortable...she doesnt know why...a hesitation...a uncertainity...whether she should admit her love or not...if yes how...she was not ready to deal with..she is feeling so many things but couldn't express any of them...he is so near to her but still so distant to her...she mutters ...sayed abhi waqt nahi aaya..
She obeys him and tries to find out her bag...

Ohh here it is... He by habbit tries to lift it by his right hand... and rapidly it fells down from his hand...ahhh...!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Sir...whats wrong wid u...!!!! kya hua hai aapko...??

kuch nahi cadet singh don't worry...kuch nahi hua hai mujhe aap change kar lijie...

Sir stop lying...and tell me what happened to u...?? Are u injured..? she groans...and for the first time... shows right on him...tell me wat is the matter actually..

That automatically brings a curve in his lips...nothing cadet singh...goli lagi thi...nikal nahi paya...

what...?...!!!!!!! unlogone aapko goli mara thi...!!! aap ko goli lagi hai..??aur ap itne din us goli ke sath ho...?sir aap jante hai aap kya kahe rahe hai...oh my god...!!!!!!!!!!!!!her face pales within a second...kaha lagi hai...kaha lagi hai goli...louder than first time...why don't u answer sir..?!!!!!!!!

bolne kaha de rahi hai aap...????bas sawalope sawal kiye ja rahi hai...!!

Naina...first..change...or u will get cold...!!!!rajveer tries to divert...
Sir aapko nahi lagta kuch jyada ho raha hai...!!!naina has got angry...
He gives it up...ok...shoulder pe...!!! Zidd karna kab chodengi aap..?
Jab aap batein manne lagenge..!!rajveer gets amused by her word..cant help grinning..

She comes close to him...she touches his body with concern tries to find the wound out...
It makes him feel her breath...her fingers are untying the buttons of his t _shirt...he stops breathing... her touch is arising passion in him...he tries hard to control himself...he wants to touch her badly...hug her tightly...kiss her...

Finally...she has been able to strip off the shirt from his body...and..she tries to find out where is the wound...the semi darkness of the house...makes her unsure...she is touching his chest by her soft finger...rajveer is loosing his senses...ohh...his breaths grew more faster...she ables to understand his condition...but apprehends it as uneasiness..

She gets too close to him and bents him down to her self too see the wound...she is now standing..just in front of him..bending as if hugging...he feels the urge to love her wildly...but controls

Sir aapko kitni golia lagi hai...yeh ek se jyada lag rahi hai...
3...nain...cadet singh..! he sounded drowsy...

She is beautiful...her wet black kammej is kissing her body...all curves are prominent...the contrast of her fare glowing skin and the black kameej is simply attractive...reflection of the fire on her face made her more adorable...he just wants to strip off her kameej from her body..to see her ...to unfold her...he was unable to restrict his thoughts...naina...his love is so close to him ...touching his bare upper body...as if putting fire on him that he is feeling completely helpless...she is very s**y...I hav to admit this...he thinks...forgetting totally about his wounds...lost in his thoughts...

Sir...!!!!

Haaa...kya...rajveer shakes his head...to cut his thoughts out...
Sir ...goli nikalni hogi abhi...issi waqt...infection ho gaya hai...buri tarha se...mujhe halat thik nahi lag rahi hai...kahin kuch galat na ho jaye... aap koi doctor ke paas kyu nahi gaye...??...u shoulnt be so careless...she gets nervous..seeing his condition...

U must be kidding cadet singh...!!!!i m a absconder murderer ...who will teat me...???
Rajveer smiles...

Naina feels the grief lied in his smile...the deep pain..
What should I do now...?...naina feels the intensity
u can try it urself...rajveer replies...
Me...naina looks at him in disbelief...

Yes...and only u can do dis...raj remarks confidently...
No sir I cant...agar kuch ho gaya to???agar jyada khun bahene laga to...???maine kabhi nahi kia yeh...agar aapko kuch ho gaya to...??...she cant loose him again...she cant pay this anymore..
Everything in ur life has a first time cadet singh...

No sir...it will pain u...
Naina be confident...I belive in u...plz try to understand...u hav to do dis...
Naina...has no choice but to take the risk...she understands...that now everything depends on her...his life is depending upon her...
She finally agrees ...ok ..par kaise...???ko sharp cheez ki jarurat hai sir..goli nikalne ke liye...woh kaha se milega...??
Ruko... dekho...uhape ek chaku rahka hai...he indicates towards a lil lump of clods.

Chaku...chaku se goli...its unhygienic sir !!!!!...already infection ho gaya hai...halat aur bhi kharab ho jayegi...naina almost yells..
Common cadet singh ab mein aapke liye scissor aur medical equipments lana bhul gaya to aap goli nahi nikalengi...rajveer tries to lighten her up...to encourage her...use hi thoda aag mein gram kr lo...kam chal jayega...

she does that...and comes back to him...she is getting more nervous...she sits facing him...with trembling hands she pulls him down...rajveer lies in front of her...keeping his head towards her lap...
Kya naina hath kyu shake kar rahe hai tumhare...jaise confidence se goli mari thi aisehi iss baar bhi maar do...Raj says...to see her reaction...in a sarcoustic tone...filled with deep pain..

She completely fridges at that comment...keeps mum...and then tries to get up...hurriedly...but raajveer quickly catches hold of her hand and made her to sit back again...she was so hurt at the comment that does not look at him...faces other way... to control her tears...the sentence has stabbed her heart...she shivers in an unsaid pain... Rajveer hasn't expected this much...!!!!

God knows what happened to rajveer seeing her like this...he unfolds his heart to her for the first time...he just puts his head down on her lap...and pressing it says...bachalo...ek akhri baar...aagayi ho har baar ki tarah bachane iss baar bhi...ab marne to dogi nahi ...akkhri waqt pe aahi gayi ho...hamesha ki tarah...to..bacha hi lo...waise marna to hai hi mujhe... par agar tumhare hath se ho jaye to kya baat hai...aisi maut mujhe zindagi se bhi jyada pyaari hai...par pata nahi kyu aj jeeneko jee kar raha hai...bohot saalo ke baad...he whispers...in a magnetic tone...zindagi ya maut kuch to deti jao...i have lost everything...at least tum mat jao...

[is this that rajveer who was begging 4 death a few minutes ego ...!!!!!!!!!!...]
This make naina cry...sir...plz...chup ho jaiye...aapto mar jayenge aapko kya fark padega...jo piche chuth jayega aapne unke bareme kabhi socha hai...??.

Kya sochu naina...kaun hai mera...koi nahi ronewala age piche...koi nahi...kisiko jarurat nahi meri...rajveer says...fighting with his own ..
Plz sir chup ho jaiye...naina moves her fingers through his soft stresses ...takes a small pause and then finishes...sayed hai sir ...par aap use andekha kar rahe hai...
Rajs heart missed a beat...

Then she bend on him to take the bullets out...she tries to feel confident...closes her eyes for a moment to gaderr confidence and then pushes the chaku on the wound...and ...bring the bullet out of it...within a second ...aaahhh...aaah...raj clatches nainas thigh...that made her aroused ...but she have no time to think about that...she have to do the same with the rest two bullets...she quickly does that...with her shaking hand as raj yells in pain...in no time after the last one she throws the chaku away far...and taks him in her arms...hugs him tightly...as if she is trying to take his pain...raj's tears soaks in her lap...she tries her best to comfort him...rubs his back... moves her fingers through his stresses...tries to console him...she feels...like heaven...as raj is so close to her...thik ho jayega...kuch nahi hoga aapko...mai hu na...aapko kuch nahi hone dungi...fikr mat karo...mai hu na apke sath...mat rou sir...plz...apki halat mujhse dekhi nahi jati...that was enough...raj breaks into tears...he required that badly...and clungs to her...
Itna to naseeb ho hi sakta hai ek teacher ko...

Naina presses him tight into hers...to stop him...though her self is sobbing...plz sir...plz...chup ho jaiye...aap hi mera barosa...ho...agar... ap tuth ...plz...unable to finish...aap kaise tuth sakte ho...raj ables to understand...and tries hard controls himself...but doesn't move from the position... remains in the same pose... he takes the smell of her skin ...the warmth of her body ...her soft skin is rubbing with his owns...his face is now on the softest part of her body...the touch of her cleavage arising him...he has become completely beyond control...he lift himself upward... to adore her...to take her soft body in his bosom...he wanted to kiss her...to take her soft lips in his own...the bare part of breasts that is visible from the deep necked kameej is turning him on...he has never felt something like that for her...this urge...!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

But unexpectedly she said sir...mat uthiye mujhe dawa laga leni dijiye...she used the first aid box that she always keep with her to do it...and pulls him towards herself...
Hai...!!.naina kaash tum samajhti is darde dil ko kya dawa chahiye...!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Ahhh!!!!!!!!!

This makes him think...is she too young for dis...may be the time has not come yet...does she really loves me in that way...?.thinking as same as naina...he controls himself from distraction...and curses himself,,,,shit...!!!! have I lost it...what was I going to do...she is my fellow cadet...she is navin's sister...shit shit...he curses himself under his breath...she is not only the one whome I love...rajveer control urself...!!!! God knows what she is thinking abt me...shit yaar...why did I do it...!!!i have really lost it...u had promised navi...he says himself...and gets up hurriedly...throwing her hand almost...as she wants to pull him to bandage the wound... walks a long distance from her...as if he is denying her affection...

And when naina asks her how is he feeling now...he roughly replies ...its ok ...cadet singh...apko fikr karne ki jarurat nahi...I m fine...I can take care of myself now

Naina gets shocked at this cold and rough reaction...!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
She gazes him with a stunned look...abruptly gets up...and runs outside...and breaks down poorly into sobs ...


Hope u like it guys.. Pls do comment

Love

Nikki


Edited by Nikkisha - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#75
Nice update i hope dey confess soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#76
awesome update...i really liked it

raj naina's closeness

bt rajveer being rajveer...come on raj ...u r not just a teacher for her...

waiting for their confession😊

pls continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#77
Super duper hit update dear
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Posted: 9 years ago
#78
amazing & awesome update
rajveer itna dimaag pe prssure mat dalo naina is all yours bas usse thoda time do suddenly itna kuchh ho gaya uske sath
thanks for pm take care stay blessed
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Posted: 9 years ago
#79
Awesome update.,all the emotions are beautifully portrayed
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Posted: 9 years ago
#80
Chapter 6 n 7

Awsmm uds
So emotional finally both met
Lovely waise I like Rona dhona 😆
Plzz cont soo
Thanx for d p
Edited by rkchandni - 9 years ago

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