LRL Dream (Raj-Naina FF) CH-13 Updated Pg-26 - Page 3

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Chapter - 3

I m entering...huda just opens the door...n sees..aalekh has failed to make him sense less.
s**t!!!he mutters...and starts creaping towards...major bhargav...from bhargavs backside...


So answer me cadet aalekh...what r u doing in my cabin...????no..no first tell me what kinda punishment you want for urself...???hahaha...bhargav laughs...he is just pleased wid his luck...he has got the scope..to punish...the toughest male cadet...!!!!!!!!!!!!
So whats going on here??...answer me cadet sharma...!!!!!as alekh sees huda ...he calms down...actually sir...apunko ...apse room arrangement ke bare mein...baat karna thi...


Apun us nautanki ke sath nahi rahe sakta...sala bahut tang karta hai apunko who huda...aap plz apunko dusra kamra de dijiye...
Center tumhare baapki nahi hai cadet sharma...bhargav teases...knowing that...the word baap makes aalekh furious...
But aalekh controls himself...and tries to confuse n distract major from turning back...
Suddenly huda...hits bhargavs neck...to make him senseless..

but..bhargav...moves...n huda fails...seeing derr no choice left...aalekh hits bhargav...form frontside...in his eye...(jor ka mukka dheere se laga...)


Then they both ties him up...in his chair...
Do you know cadets what the hell u r doing...I will...n suddenly...bhargav...doesnt gets time to finsh...himself...huda has punched in his neck...aalekh puts the cotton in his noses...to make sure...that he has really lost his senses...this man is dangerous...!!!!!!!!!!!!!they doesnt want to leave any loop-hole...


They all...five have to face isolation...and much more probably...they have already estimated...they knew it...
But everything for dosti...you see...rajveer n navin has taught them...what is...frendship...!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Here...yudi n naina...are getting impataient...!!!ali consoles them...dheeraj rakhiye naina...yudi bhai...who log sab samhal lenge...sab kuch thik hai...warna...who humein indicate karte...remember the signal...


Ahhh!!!!yes dude...you are absolutely right...yudi says...
Lijiye woh aagaye...ali indicates towards one side...
Heyy...is derr everything fine...aarre huda tere hath se to khun nikaal raha hai...blood was coming from huda's left hand...naina...looked concernd...huda gets emotional at this...mai thik hu phulan...tu apna khayal rakhio...best of luck yaar...khus rahio...
Aalekh notices...the shine in hudas eyes...he truly loves his phulan...
Every body hugs her...the time for bid a goodbye...

Every one starts...heading towards...the gate...naina hugs everyone...before going out...
She gets out of the center...finally...her friends...has made derr words...she is now free...of everything...she doesnt know where the life will take her now...doesnt know whats waiting 4 her...!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!baas chal di...!!!!!!!!!


Phulan...huda calls her from back...ek baat yaad rakhio...phulan...koi tera intejaar karega...
Sari zindagi kar raha hai...aur karega...aapna khayal rakhio...phulan...khus rahio...
Huda tries his best to control his tears...but fails...a drop tickles down...


Everybody is with tears...they dont know...when they will meet again...aalekh whispers...ja naina...ja...apunko yaad karma...musibat aayi to...


Haa...naina...also cries...tumlog apna dhyan rakhna...hamesha sath rahena...hum jaha bhi rahe...yeh dosti hamesha hamare dil mein hamare takaat banke chalni chahiye...naina...bids them goodbye...and proceeds...
Pooja breaks down into sobs...ali...hugs...her tight...to comfort her...
They goes back to the monster bhargav...they hav no choice...


When huda was saying...those words...that somebody is waiting for you forever...GOD was winking...towards them...
Lets see what is HE planning...


I hope u like it guys.. pls do comment 😊

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Posted: 9 years ago
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nice update
just hope jald hi naina rajveer ka pata laga le
thanks for pm take care keep smiling keep writing
Edited by npksk8495 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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yupp huda is ryt...someone is waiting for her😛

and i'm waiting for that someone

awesome update nikki...i loved it...this is called true frndship👏

oh gosh ab huda aalekh yudi ali n pooja ka kya hoga...this bhargav is 🤬😆is bhargav k liye m jitne bure word use kru wo kam hn😉

i really hope sb acha ho...

eagerly waiting 4 next part...pls continue soon😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey a great FF started by you.👏 Nice start.😊 So all six cadets are going in search of Raj.👍🏼 They had to as Raj was not only their mentor but a true teacher in all sense. Everyone is doing his/ her work.👍🏼 Good one. 👏Continue soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Aswm story dear
Loved all 3 chapters cont soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: npksk8495

nice update
just hope jald hi naina rajveer ka pata laga le
thanks for pm take care keep smiling keep writing


Thanks dear..😊😊 yup naina raj ko jaldi hi dhund legi..😉😉
u too take care dear..😊😊 i am not writing dear this is my frn ff which i am posting on her behalf.. so credits goes to her...😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thank you dear😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Finally finished reading all three parts. Kuch kuch yaad aa gaya.

It was really good and once again these friends of Naina proved that they can sacrifice anything for friendship. Naina went all alone in search of Raj not risking anyone's life.

I hope she meets Rajveer soon. Only she is the one who can save him.

Update soon dear

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: ProudRajeevian

yupp huda is ryt...someone is waiting for her😛


and i'm waiting for that someone

awesome update nikki...i loved it...this is called true frndship👏

oh gosh ab huda aalekh yudi ali n pooja ka kya hoga...this bhargav is 🤬😆is bhargav k liye m jitne bure word use kru wo kam hn😉

i really hope sb acha ho...

eagerly waiting 4 next part...pls continue soon😊


Thanks dear...😊😊.

And rahi baat gang ki toh woh handle kr hi lenge bhargav ko😉😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: agm1998

Gr8 update

Continue soon


Thanks dear..😊

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