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Originally posted by: asexualflower
Hey Shrutu 🤗,
It's actually been quite a while since you posted this, and I read it too, but I didn't get much time to write up a proper comment, so after all this time, here it finally is.Overall I really loved this TS, but then again, when don't I love your pieces? 😆 The first person style was quite different. I don't think many people on the forum have been using it, at least most of the works I've read aren't first person. I enjoyed it anyway. First person really helps develop the characters more because we can hear their thoughts and sympathize with them more. So, frankly, I think you should definitely use it again. 👍🏼Also I know your TS mostly concentrated only on SwaSan and I absolutely loved that about it. I mean common, who even cares about the other characters? Not me at least. 😆I really liked their confrontation. When Swara told Sanskaar she didn't want divorce, it was such a beautiful moment. 😳Thanks for all the PM's.- Sapna 😃
Hey sweetheart 🤗
Have been missing you! It was such a nice surprise to realise you'd left me a comment on this and such a lovely one at that too! Reading your comemnt was well worth any wait Sapu:). Aww thanks so much! Am so happy you liked it. Yes the first person style is a bit new to me and i never thought of it, but your right in that it's not that common generally on the forum. The Depatches Series is first person but letter format so slightly different style again I guess. Thanks for the encouragement, I may well try it again in future work!
When I wrote this I was so so sick of the other characters, they're all inconsistent or create pathetic drama so I had had enough, shame I can't write all pieces without referring to them 😆.
Sorry if I've bombarded you with too many PMs! Thanks again and hope to catch you again soon!
Love S xoxo
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