Sanctified- A SwaSan TS- Final Parts Updated - Page 18

Originally posted by: samiya.059

Shruti fantastic
Well Sanky's eyes have found a special place in stories lately...Well now am going to observe them more keenly.
What a beautiful confession.!!
I seriously want a OTT dramatic bollywood Ishtyle confession with lots of tears(ofcourse khushi k),hugs n,kisses .
After all we need the required khushi after so much heartaches...oh my sadist shipper heart
All I can say about this story is that is was poignantly beautiful.You had put your whole heart AMD soul while writing it and it totally shows it.
The boat ride part was magical.Sanskaar's love is not just passionate but also the in most purest form.
I think ye swara he hai Jo itna time lagaya patne mein..mein hoti toh Kab ka I love u too keh chuki hoti
The epilogue was the best considering they had left MM..coz in my opinion only then can swason live in complete happiness if they leave this MM
It seems everything is going to b fine ..first the olvz and now such beautiful story
You nailed it my friend
keep writing more
love
Samiya

Samiya xoxoxo

Such lovely comments you left me, before I head off to a very long day full of travel and meetings so you've made my day so much better- thank you dear!!
Really glad you felt this worked despite the lack of high drama as such. As you know I've written my share of very filmy OTT love confessions by Swara (I think Overpowered by Love was the most dramatic and so was Against All Odds I guess) but here the melodrama on the show had drained me so I chose the more subtle approach. On the show I really expect a dramatic confession and hope cvs don't disappoint.
Sanskaar ie Varun has such lovely eyes 😳 you can't help but notice, check them out especially in emotional scenes 😉 I'm so thrilled it came across to you that my heart and soul went into this piece as indeed it does in parts on every piece written. Here I was actually feeling everything I was writing and Swara's pov came alive to me too. Yes poor Sanakaar- Swara really gave him a run for his money lol so the forum writers keep trying to reward the guy! Happy you felt the magic in the boat ride and yes I so wanted them out of the madness with their families. Your words have made this writer very happy! Lots of love to you xx

Samiya- I see you too want a honeymoon series huh?! Im already thinking how to make this interesting so let's see! Some ideas are taking root! Xoxo

Guys, I will reply to all the messages, sorry am travelling the moment but promise to respond soon, thanks so much for those writing in!

Originally posted by: MusicAddict

Perfect ending Shruti!
I really prefer this first person view of Swara Sanskaar
It puts more emotions and passion into the write up
Swara's confession and Sanskaar's subsiding anger was so well described yaar!
I cudn't stop reading once I started.
Beautiful one!👏

Hey Sakshi! Huge thank you for this! I'm so happy the first person style worked on this one. It was the sort of story that only focused on them two and so felt appropriate and once I began writing it, the flow seemed to come. Anger between lovers is like that I guess, it can be a front for a lot of other things and then it can die down just as suddenly. Glad you enjoyed it xx

Originally posted by: NitaMikealson

Read three parts at once and i loved it.

It was really good, i love how you even got Swara to move away from the family . And that too for eight months . I cant believe she didnt rush back home at the mention of a small headache to Ragini .

I loved SwaSan reunion scene . the way Sanskaar didnt force her to say why she didnt want divorce but waited patiently till she was ready.

Read all parts in single attempt...

Originally posted by: misaki

RES 🤗- Only because the ending definitely deserves feedback that I can give when I'm not half asleep as I am right now.

Unres.😃

Shru🤗🤗

I can't help but regret that I really can't say anything different this time either.😆 Loved it! The epilogue especially Shru😃. You know how I have always never been a fan of joint families when it comes to my OTPs. Seriously, they create so much drama in their lives that they hardly get time to focus on themselves. Morever, that family has got no shortage of lunatics. I cannot understand how Sansku turned out to be such an amazing guy having people like that around him!😕

So when I read that Sansku decided to leave and live separately with his wife , I couldn't help but do a fist bump in the air!😆 Phew! Thank god! Now they can focus on the important stuff - them.

😃

You know I especially loved the part where Sanskaar found it more easy to take refuge in anger than expressing his love. I think and have experienced the same thing happening to me on numerous occasions. You know you want to tell them how much you care about them, but it's somehow always easy to shout at them than to show them and explain how much you care about them. So that part somehow connected with me immediately. It was so real and amazing. 😊

I also absolutely loved the part where when Sanskaar realizes he was holding her too tight and loosens his grip on her, she instead of feeling relieved gets anxious and prays that he not let her go. Her desperateness and anxiety were so obvious that again it hit so close to home. I could completely relate to her today seeing as I kinda felt a tiny weeny bit like her just before I left the office today😵 - that story is for another day though*sigh*. So that part kinda had me feeling that way all over again! It was beautiful Shru!❤️

That part where Sanskaar finally realizes her feelings for him, that smile on his face(could totally imagine VK and his adorable smile) and the promised trip and Swara's wish were realized. I completely enjoyed reading Swara's POV and all her insecurities, pain, anxiety and especially love for Sanskaar.

This part - "baptized me to reborn again" - so true, I really believe people are reborn ( or at least become something entirely different and beautiful) when they find true love or soulmates. They become "complete" which is how I have always understood love. It was a wonderful read Shru. Loved it as always, such pleasure. 🤗

Shrutu---🤗,