Sanctified- A SwaSan TS- Final Parts Updated - Page 19

Originally posted by: medhasankar

Shrutu---🤗,

Brilliant ending and epilogue.

Loved how she just went all out when he was starting out on all the divorce crap.

He was like.."lets divorce"

She was--" nuh-uh."😃

and why?

coz i love you😳

She did not expect a boat ride..but then sanskaari sanskaar hai bhai--aaj kuch sanskaari ho jaye😃

and thank goodness you sent them out of that sicko mansion. Been following swasan scenes in asha's updated log of episodes...swasan are coming along now. But the rest I have absolutely ditched.🤢

My day just got better reading a story from my sis---

love ya--

Medha.

Originally posted by: tootiefrootie11

Hey Sakshi! Huge thank you for this! I'm so happy the first person style worked on this one. It was the sort of story that only focused on them two and so felt appropriate and once I began writing it, the flow seemed to come. Anger between lovers is like that I guess, it can be a front for a lot of other things and then it can die down just as suddenly. Glad you enjoyed it xx

Absolutely true! No thank yous right?
Anger is like that only. U never know u shout on ur love and sudeenly u feel the biggest concern for him/her. Just like now, our Sanskaar is furious with his lady love and u never know when he will forgive her! He will definitely though right?

Originally posted by: MusicAddict

Absolutely true! No thank yous right?
Anger is like that only. U never know u shout on ur love and sudeenly u feel the biggest concern for him/her. Just like now, our Sanskaar is furious with his lady love and u never know when he will forgive her! He will definitely though right?

Sakshi, oops yes forgot the no thank you. You guys are too sweet so I keep messing up the rules :).

I will be commenting on the current SwaSan scene in some of the posts but totally. When you care so much the emotions are out of control. I actually see the current Sanskaar like the one I often write about. Swara needs to see his harsh reactions to wake her up, otherwise she is too blinded by others. I found it amazing that Sanskaar said yesterday that she is too tried down by others to think of herself as isn't that exactly what I wrote in my letter on this TS? Also he is hurting big time too, just because he's usually stoic it doesn't mean he can't erupt. In fact that's why he's being like this now. I don't like Swara suffering but I totally get why Sanskaar has got to this point and yes of course it will all be alright, they need this process too:).

Originally posted by: rsk16

Wat can I say Shruti, But in Ron's style Bloody Brilliant piece.

Totally fell in love with the way you handled Swara's insecurities to her reasons for not quickly accepting her love .Loved the part where she said that I will not sign the divorce papers .I so want to hear that line in the show as well.

Loved that Sanskar stood up to his promise and gave her the trip that she deserved of Banaras.Loved the way , he understood her dilemma and acted upon it.

Trust me, this is definitely getting more than 1 read from me the way , I have read all your other works more than once.😳

All in all , an exceptional job.👏

Hey Raunika! Thanks so much for your kind words and as a huge HP fan, loved being complimented in Ron's words so a big hug for that!
I just wanted to delve into Swara a bit more this time as it's clear that those insecurities and fear of love have a back story and it's pretty easy to guess at it but we just don't get shown in in detail in the snow.
Sanskaar is the perfect man, he knows when to hold back as he did then and I wanted them to enjoy a couples bonding experience before those majic words were exchanged so glad you liked that.
You've made me so happy! You read all my stuff and that too more than once?! A writers dream reader you are! So grateful, honestly! Lots of love to you xoxo

shruthi it was beautifully written...i loved it completely...😃

Originally posted by: anu91

Read all parts in single attempt...

Wow dear...

Definitely u should publish all ur works book...

The feel of the wordings were so awesome...

Super top...Loved it so so so much...

Originally posted by: The-Heart

Hi Shruti

First of all thanks for the PM

I like all your writings and i love yours this style of writing very much

@Part 1 - You very well penned the swara's feelings in the letter. The emotion behind each and every word in that letter brought tears to my eyes.

This is the best letter i have ever read till date in any fan fictions.

"Maine hamare rishto ko dosti ka darja dediya kyun ke uss rishte ke peeche main chup sakti thi, aur tumhe apne saath bhi rakhsakti thi."

I think the above line is enough to explain the swaras current state of mind even in the show, unknowingly she loves sanskar but she afraid to accept that feeling and fall in love.

@Part 2- This part is hear wrenching, i felt very bad for both swara and sanskar😭.

You described the swars fears and inner turmoil very well, poor swara she carved for father love since her childhood.I am in edge of crying while reading swara's POV😭

Finally swara understand the importance of sanskar in her life and started yearning for him.😃

Naughty sanskar thinking of kissing her sensless in this situation😳

@Part 3 - I am totally speechless after reading this part👏 Swara raising her voice when sanskar brought the divorce p apers topic and declaring she wont sign the papers is awesome, we can also say it quite realistic👏 ( Attack is the best form of defense)

Wow swara and sanskar boat ride( I wish cvs give us this kind of scenes)

Epilogue - I am glad finally they left that mental mansion and living their life happily.

Originally posted by: Banjaaran...

There are some great stories rendered good by ordinary endings..
and there are great stories who become extra-ordinary with an ending worthy of the journey...
This story Shruti.. belongs to the later category..

what a journey this has been.. and what a beautiful destination.
Calm, serene, gentle.. from the storms of painful emotions to the bliss of love..
Journey of those two souls.. that of Sanskaar and Swara was beautiful..
thank you for taking me along in this journey!