Sanctified- A SwaSan TS- Final Parts Updated - Page 20

Originally posted by: MysticRiver

Simply Awesome..Very Well Written...👍🏼

Originally posted by: MysticRiver

Simply Awesome..Very Well Written...👍🏼

Originally posted by: tarun1234567

shruthi it was beautifully written...i loved it completely...😃

Originally posted by: -TeriMalang-

Shruti🤗

It took me long enough to read this .

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This was so beautiful. Can I talk about the epilogue in the beginning ?

I sooo loved it ❤️

Didn't I say sanskar is an intelligent man. He took his wife away frm the daily drama and conspiracies. He does know ..his wife is not just his responsibility but also his respect one wrd against her would be shaming him aswell.

Their safe haven .it gives me immense happiness to read soo beautiful thing. Thnk u

Tere sang betaya har lamha bhi mannat hai

Tere siwa na koi jannat hai.

Part 2 was so gud. She stood up her self respect which has been tarnished at the hands of conspiracies. And her Remorse ,which finally hit her. Sanskar confronting her was wake up calling. Which she had been adamant to ignore. She had been ignoring his love,his emotions,his feeling hiding behind the perfect shield of "frndship" running away frm reality. And yet broke him at every point. The nail to to coffin was her lack of trust, a trust which has been the foundation of their relation. That made him to break the silence. And talk wat he has been through all this while and she Cannot continue with it. He wouldn't allow.

Oh God can this two be away from each other? These major idiots dsnt realise they are meant to be together or be devasted being away.

He became a total majnu come back to get his love back and she breaking piece by piece every damn second.

She finally said the wrdd which brought intense happiness to him dangling between yes and no was no better than purgatory.he could understand her so well m jealous :P

Their ride starting commencement of their journey. Filled with togetherness and promises.

Uljhe huwe bhanwar main khoye gaye thay khwab

Samet te samet te kuch panne,mil gaye wo jawab.

Awesome :D

Originally posted by: tootiefrootie11

Jazz 🤗 I love hugs from my SwaSan family so thanks for that and for these lovely comments! First as I feel guilty about the apples let me address that! See I am sorry they suffered that fate but you could offer them in prasad to Kala Bhooth Ji- he is Pataali Devi's husband (Jwala discovered this not me btw!) 🤣 and as ardent fans of Lakshya Ji- we can give this as bhog! Perfect solution na? 😆

Seriously though- couldn't agree more about Sanskaar- I personally find it easy to write Sanskaar as he almost literally always calls to me at every level.

Oh re the Hindi- I can't write in hindi script. I have taught myself to painstakingly read it but see as an NRI born and brought up in Africa, we spoke English, Swahili and Gujarati from day 1 and then we had Kutchi neighbours so have always been fluent in that too. But languages like Hindi, Urdu and Punjabi I entirely self taught myself, hence the hesitation in writing in Hindi. I can very fluently speak it and think in it when writing dialogues too but have never before attempted a letter in it so ... Happy you liked it!

Totally spot on about Swara- if we had been shown Swara logically we would not be so upset with her I think. She went through hell and back in a fundamental way, each of her main relations especially with any male figure have been severely tested and except for Sanskaar all the men she has known have let her down big time so it isn't any wonder that it would take her time to transition to love. This is how I see Swara- her not understanding what real love is first led to her relationship with Lakshya being thought of by her as love and then all that happened after. No wonder she was "dense" in that sense about Sanskaar. I am feeling glad that most who are reading this seem to be getting that feel which was my main reason to write this, as without this, i haven't done any major plot building in this like Trial by Fire or Against the Odds etc. It is simply a piece about deciphering feelings and TALKING them out to make sense of them.

Hope you feel better about the apples 😆

Lots of love to you xoxo

PS: Left you a comment on your OS- you are a real "chuppa rustom" but I am not surprised as the way people comment etc you can always tell the ones who will be able to write well 😃

Originally posted by: moonstonespirit

This is amazing!! Loved every bit of it. There are a lot of moments I loved. Them reading each others eyes, the boat ride. The location you choose for their reunion. They simply defined Swasan to me. Something simple yet poignant.

Thanks for PM 🤗