RIMA 3S: BROKEN HEARTS (final part & epilogue - pg.19) Dt. 22/09)

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rishbalafan9

@rishbalafan9

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Posted: 9 years ago

#151

Emotionally swept madhu ended on a funnier note by taking revenge on sultan...loved that..you trnsitioned in in a funnier way of revenge...

And the two broken hearts deservingly united and the products came what ...A super cure boy Krish...Naughty krish want to burst madhu swollen belly...this i have never thought before that a womb can apper as a ballon to innocent kids...indeed unique...⭐️. read and heard first time here...

Overall a good attempt dii ..though i have expected a high voltage drama in this...but i can understand Krish compenstated that...lovely epilogue...❤️

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Nithunavi

@Nithunavi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#152

Emotional story turned into super funny and hilarious end...!!

It was fabulous ending Sudha...loved the story...

I thought this wud be very heavy emotional story but liked the fun end better 😃

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Aaniya

@EVIL_ANGEL

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Posted: 9 years ago

#153

Hilarious ending...!! Rk literally threatened Sullu to sign d paper lyk he did to dips & gun 1st pointing head then heart then ROFL...!! Dips trying to act smart hun, bt its Rk with who u r dealing girl...!! Rk-madhu finally united, confessing their love..

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Aaniya

@EVIL_ANGEL

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Posted: 9 years ago

#154

Epilogue So cute...i luv little krish,so much lyk rk..nutorious...he want to brust mommy belly,lol & carry bag to carry baby...haha..the way he was lukng trish's baby,i though he's falling in luv,lol...tnxx fr pm, sry fr late comnt, ws engaged in exams..!!

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tavamm

@tavamm

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Posted: 9 years ago

#155

hi sudha...I tried to leave comments on previous updates - but having some connection issues. I enjoyed this os . thanks for the pm.
Pls keep posting other work - I will read it for sure.

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SOUWMIYA MURALIDARAN

@vishuv

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Posted: 9 years ago

#156

Super story sudha akka. I loved it. But I didn't like rishbala's name linked with supali. But it's OK as it's required for the story.

After reading prologue I was thoroughly confused but I know you would unite them in the end.

Loved RK when he called dipali bitch. After knowing her true face each and every word he called her bitch. Dips is so shameless to come out wrapped in a duvet.

Rk wanted to dissect brain while madhu wanted heart? They are adorably mad. But she shot in that place, serves him right. Dipali is a great cooker😆 always cooking stories. She is a stupid woman. I was so sad that you didn't kill her but she was left for the police , moreover penniless ! Well done.

Marvellous epilogue akka ! So krish and Andrea were born on the same day as their parents anniversary ! His balloon and carrybag antics were hilarious. Last part, when RK called the dog 'dog' and his son's and biwi's outrage was funny LOL.

Thanks for giving such an amazing story !!

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