RIMA 3S: BROKEN HEARTS (final part & epilogue - pg.19) Dt. 22/09) - Page 15

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Posted: 9 years ago
Such a crazy update!!! Like seriously in the beginning I thought this will be a serious and painful story but the way it ended hahaha everytime rk called dips bitch I laughed like mad!!! Ahaan bday gift is gun that too packed in pink box!!!
Lol how much sultan and dips will have sex now bitch found in bedsheets!!!
Smart hun dips took the blame on her instead if dying!!! The most best part was rk and madhu fighting heart brain heart brain and Hehe finally wrong shoot in right part!!
Madhu, shoot on his head. I have never seen brain in real. We will shoot his head & dissect the brain out
This was the best best lol I couldn't control my laughter and people in train gave me a weird look!!! Is sultan really have brains I don't think so!!
One que y they waited till madhu's bday to take revenge they could have done this before also na? Why they gave so much time to Sullu and bitch to enjoy?
Another dhamaka this krish kundra!!! Hahahahaha he wanted the baby in plastic bag oh shit how u come up with crazy ideas??
You know what my family is planning to buy a dog and guess the name they are planning to keep its scooby only but in this case I m with rk I hate pets!!!
Omg i cant stop laughing dad put the baby in plastic bag and we will play with scooby!!!
Rk was the best in this story instead of calling biwi biwi he called bitch bitch!!!
I was imaging the scenes of Rk threatening bitch and that Sullu
Oh gurlll I have become deewani of your writing!!!
Love u for this story yaar!! Will be missing it
Thanks for pm



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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: shruthi14

Such a crazy update!!! Like seriously in the beginning I thought this will be a serious and painful story but the way it ended hahaha everytime rk called dips bitch I laughed like mad!!! Ahaan bday gift is gun that too packed in pink box!!!

Lol how much sultan and dips will have sex now bitch found in bedsheets!!!
Smart hun dips took the blame on her instead if dying!!! The most best part was rk and madhu fighting heart brain heart brain and Hehe finally wrong shoot in right part!!
Madhu, shoot on his head. I have never seen brain in real. We will shoot his head & dissect the brain out
This was the best best lol I couldn't control my laughter and people in train gave me a weird look!!! Is sultan really have brains I don't think so!!
One que y they waited till madhu's bday to take revenge they could have done this before also na? Why they gave so much time to Sullu and bitch to enjoy?
Another dhamaka this krish kundra!!! Hahahahaha he wanted the baby in plastic bag oh shit how u come up with crazy ideas??
You know what my family is planning to buy a dog and guess the name they are planning to keep its scooby only but in this case I m with rk I hate pets!!!
Omg i cant stop laughing dad put the baby in plastic bag and we will play with scooby!!!
Rk was the best in this story instead of calling biwi biwi he called bitch bitch!!!
I was imaging the scenes of Rk threatening bitch and that Sullu
Oh gurlll I have become deewani of your writing!!!
Love u for this story yaar!! Will be missing it
Thanks for pm





Oh my my... I have no words to express how happy i m feeling now... U made my day darling...

I was actually little upset that i didnt do justice to this story as i started it as an emotional one & ended in a funny way... But after reading ur comment... I feel ecstatic... U r a sweetheart...

That was a lovely comment... I loved it so much..
I m so glad u enjoyed & laughed hard reading this ending & epilogue...

Yeah... This Rk is the craziest i have ever written i guess... I usually make my madhu's crazy & chirpy but for a change i made Rk crazy... & dipali played the right role for rk to rant her... Lol...

Hehe... I loved him calling dips bitch so much... For a change i didnt use rk's trade mark biwi word but used bitch... As dips is one... Lol

To answer your question...
Rk didnt know it was her bday before hand & once he came to know he decided to get back her properties on her bday as her gift...
But u asked why they took one month or so to take the revenge? & thats bcos... As u know madhu met with an accident so she took a little time... Say a week or two to recover... Then she was not so sure on what to do to sultan... How to punish him or how to get her properties back... She was sure she will fight back but she need Rk's support & waited for him to say the right time... & he waited for madhu to get recovered from the trauma she had been thru... & once they got the perfect time... They had gone for their revenge... U know... "Revenge is a dish best served cold" ... Hope i made clear for u dear...

Thanks for loving krish... My little naught boy...
Haha... To tell u the truth... I asked the same when i was a kid... I used to carry a plastic cover to pick my cousin bro & put him it so that i can play with... Still my bro & I laugh over that incident... So i wrote the same...
I used to burst all the balloons too in whichever party i go... I find so much joy in bursting it than playing with it... I still burst balloons... Lol
So u could say krish is me... Lol

Thanks for becoming my deewani for my writings... I m honoured... I love u too baby...
Cheers!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
WOW!! perfect ending...loved it dear...Oh , I forgot to congratulate u for winning the os competition...😊...keep writing & entertain us with ur beautiful works...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Mindblowinggg update...but Outstandinggg epilogue dear...
Rk revange style is Superbbb..
poor Sallu nd Dips...
loved Dips nd Rk conversation tooo..
He is tooo muchhh...
but His son Krish is Outstandinggg..
Sooo cute...
loved d way he said he bust all 50 balloons...
now want to last one too...hehe..
nd d plastic bag part is Awesome...
Edited by karamjeet - 9 years ago
janu2006 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
beautiful ending
thanks for pm dear,
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Posted: 9 years ago
Sudha again u justify ur writings with its tittle .
1st part u described their sorrows ,2nd part u bring them face to face and 3rd part u make them Hamsafar ...
Love 3 parts
but most loved part is EPI part
Such a cute ending
Awesome darling thanks for PM
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hilarious update.
Madhu joined kickboxing classes.😆
Wow, what a birthday gift, a gun!!!!!!😆😆
Seriously they are fighting where to shoot.As if they are playing some game.🤣
Smart Deepali. she cooked nice story.😆
finally, madhu got everything back.😊
They proposed and became one.😉

Coming to the epilogue

Krish is too cute.Madhu's tummy is a balloon.🤣
One second I thought he really inserts that pin.
He wants to carry the baby in a carry bag.🤣
I loved the epilogue full of Krish.😆






-QueenlyChitra- thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome update
fabulously written
keep writing more stories
thanks for pm sudha 🤗
parimaniya thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome last part especially epilogue...love rk made sultan n dips cry..thanks 4 pm dear...
vandy28 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
I don't remember last when I read rishbala story...but today after so long I loved reading this one...
How both person broken n betrayed in love find solace in each other...their relation built on trust which they lost in previous one...
U wrote prologue in very interesting way...haha...loved that...
I loved how rk n madhu threatened sultan to sign on transfer paper...n later turn the table to Deepali...

Epilogue was very cute...krish was so sweet n cute...loved their family moments...


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