RIMA 3S: BROKEN HEARTS (final part & epilogue - pg.19) Dt. 22/09)

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@vivian.drashti

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Posted: 9 years ago

#131

Feel good ending...perfect update...👏👏👏

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vasavi_sri

@vasavi_sri

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Posted: 9 years ago

#132

Awesome

Rk calling deepali as bitch

Madhu and Rk fighting to shoot sultan

Rk on head and Madhu on heart

And u decided a right place for him 🤣

Deepali is so smart to make stories

Rk asking Madhu to slap her

Finally the kick boxing was of some use

Krish wants to carry baby in a carry bag

Trish running away

Both their babies and their marriage

Anniversary on the same day

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Tanya Kaur

@muzikk93

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Posted: 9 years ago

#133

Shooting down his balls?😆 oucch. Loved the 2 chapters, nice ending

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Jyoraj

@Jyoraj

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Posted: 9 years ago

#134

Loved the revenge part.

Madhu shot Sultan where it was needed.

Epilogue was cute.

overall nice story. Enjoyed it

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manna43

@manna43

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#135

What an ending. U mend the broken hearts in ur style. I really love the story. Here rk is more crazy than madhu.

Happy madhu got her property on her birthday. Like their threatening to sullu n dipali.They r punished for their betrayal. Terrace scene is cute n romantic. They got their true love. Happy ending.

Prologue is fabulous. They have lovely n cute family. Krish is cute n naughty.Want to carry baby in carry bag.Gosh!He is crazier than his father.

Thanks for such a lovely story n pm.

Take care.

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silverfire

@silverfire

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Posted: 9 years ago

#136

Hahaha...Madhu taking her revenge on sullu was hilarious. U started the story as a emotional one but brought in comedy towards the end. W e could see u lost interest in the story n wanted to end it ASAP.

Just loved the ending n the epilogue.

All those antiques with krish was beautiful. Rishabala with their two little Apple pies in the end was so adorable.

Thank u for the wonderful story.