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Distorted Lives... Fragments of unfulfilled wishes


Prologue


"Let's have sex"

"But..."

Geet came closer to him and kept her fingers on his lips. The soft touch was arousing Maan. Yet he was holding on to the rapidly diminishing rational side of his mind.

"Maan... You know you want to..."

"But Geet, That's ...That's impulsive... You know what I am trying to say right..."

"Maan, for one night let's forget all the reasons and give in to the instincts... We both need it."

"Geet...we should do it for right reasons"

"I need to forget him and you need to forget her. Even if for one night, even if for few short hours... let's give in to these impulses in the darkness of this night. Tomorrow morning in the light we will think about all the right reasons and rationality..."

The pain in her voice... the lusciousness of her plump lips...the mystery that she is... pulled Maan towards her insanely. It was a great temptation to give in to the basic instinct and let go of it all, the reasons, the morals, the norms of the society... even if for just one night.

Maan let go of his inhibitions and captured her lips for a hungry kiss. From the moment he had seen her for the first time that night, he had wanted to kiss her...

Sharm hata de jo shab gira le aankhon pe
Pyaas mita de.. wo nami chura le honton se

Main jalti raatein teri
Tu wo subah jo bujha de
Bheeg loon, bheeg loon
Aaj main teri baarish mein
Bheegh loon, bheeg loon
Aaj main teri baarish mein bheeg loon

Aa honton pe tu khwahish tu bun le
Baaki jo hasrat wo chun le
Bikhre hain jo katre mere
Ho.. haan tan se tan uljhale zara
Phir se mann sulga le zara
Chakhne to de tukde tere

Main jalti raatein teri
Tu wo subah jo bujha de
Bheeg loon, bheeg loon
Aaj main teri baarish mein
Bheegh loon, bheeg loon
Aaj main teri baarish mein bheeg loon

Aa ye raatein lambi tu kar de
Chingari rag-rag mein bhar de
Sharmon se tu sharmo haya
Ho.. haan rakh le tu lab ko labon pe
Main guzru meri hadon se
Thehru kahaan kuch tu bata

Main jalti raatein teri
Tu wo subah jo bujha de
Bheeg loon, bheeg loon
Aaj main teri baarish mein
Bheegh loon, bheeg loon
Aaj main teri baarish mein bheeg loon


After watching the bheeg loon video here's a plot in my mind I couldn't resist writing though forever and always is still ongoing. Here's the prolugue. Based on your responses I would continue this one.😉 So give your honest opinions so I could decide whether to continue or not.

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continue continue...


hum bhi bheegna chahti hain unki madhoshi mein...
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oh so beautiful and so different...
both want to forget their exs...seeking solace in each other...
and the combo with the song is awesome...

looking fwd to it...
cont soon!!!!!!!
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👏 wow too good start bold topic dear
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congs 4 new story 😳😳 naughty naughty maaneet update part 1 soon
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Same feeling... Can't say in words abt his performance in that song... Rendered me speechless 😳


Grt Idea dear... Liked it very much
Do cont soon 😃
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Wow!
New story!!
Acha h mujhe kuch samajme hi nahi ayaa😆
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Ye humari Aditi hai? 😆
surprised and intrigued

ab forever wale Maan ko bhi thoda dose de do Aditi😳
kitna tarsaogi😆


edited..

just read that update😳
Edited by dqno1 - 10 years ago
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hi congrats on the new story! Thanks 4 da pm! Interesting title! superb prologue! well written. both wanted 2 forget their past n ex! update soon

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