Distorted Lives..... FOUW...Link to Thread 2 Updtd - Page 4

Prologue

So both are hurt by their respectives exs.

Though Geet wanted it to do just to forget her ex, her hurt n pain; she was bold enough to ask for it directly. Letting go of every rationality for one night n just live the moment.

Maan was holding it at first but he gave in. He seemed attracted towards her.

I'm of course curious to know they met n also shared about their respectives ex.

Its quite a different concept. Specially Geet, we hardly get to see such bold side to Geet in stories. I have always wondered if Maan can be shown as playboy n casanova in stories why cant Geet? So at least this is something different for me.

Loved the prologue Aditi.

-Sanjana!

W*F?? Both are married? *eyes widening* No divorce or nothing. Both have got some major problems in their respectives marriages. Both are hurt n just for night found solace in each other. Never in my wildest thought I could have thought of this. In prologue I just felt both are now singles hurt by their ex but this chapter was real shock.

Though both had this night just for one night with each other they have left a part of theirs with each other. They even felt had they got a chance to know each other both would fall in love.

I so wonder what problems does Geet n Dev have in their marriage? Even when she was with Maan she couldnt help but think of Dev. She said she would be yearning for him emotionally, does that means she loves him or something? Even Dev was with some other woman, well not sure, its Geet who just thought that and I m taking her presumption as true.

They were complete stranger still Maan felt protective of her n she adviced him to try once more in his relationship. It really dint feel like they had met just tonight. It was as if they knew each other since ages. Guess, their pain got the understanding btw them.

The update was intense n painful. It was literally screaming of how both Geet n Maan are still hurting. I loved Geet's letter. I guess she tried giving Maan a woman's perspective so that at least he could try saving his married life.

I'm so so curious to know what their past is n what exactly is the problem with their respective life partners.

I loved the start Aditi. The story is quite hatke I m all for it. Do continue please.

-Sanjana!

Suprb stry...very dffrnt concpt...
Wanna know more about dem...

part 1 - beautifully written... both have their share of problems with their spouses...then why they didt not get free from their marriage...why geet telling him to resolve his problem with his wife. she confessed that she had best night with him, same with maan...both will keep this night as a precious treasure of their life. they didnt used any protection. what if more complications arise out of this.

Congrats for the new story =D

I like reading dark Maaneet stories where they aren't perfect so I will definitely like this one as well...please continue soon

congrats for the new story... beautiful update...