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spoorthi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#21

😕 😒 😭

Waiting for the next! 😭

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preeti.1

@preeti.1

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Posted: 10 years ago

#22

Amazing start
looking forward to it

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Mahimaan

@Mahimaan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#23

koi pain ko akise itna khoobsuret likh sakta ahi

( how someone should write painful part so beautifully )

don't know morally they right or

wrong

but one thing sure they r meant to be

each other

no maan and geet but only

maaneet

as usual awesome update dear

👏👏👏👏👏

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Bindu sharma

@-indu-

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Posted: 10 years ago

#24

hi Aditi...

I don't like these type of stories...🤢 I just hated the movie kabhi alvida na kehna in spite of brilliant performances by some...

but when it comes to maaneet... everything goes out the window...😆

so both r hurt and searching for solace...😭 and found it in each other.😳.. but they aren't destined... aren't they?😕

superbly written...👏

do continue soon...

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sanghita0000

@sanghita0000

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Posted: 10 years ago

#25

WOW!! that was beautiful...perfect precious moment of two imperfect people...So both are married & cheated by their partner...& in search of solace they meet each other & spend one night...hope they meet each other soon again & their story start...

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#26

hi thanks 4 da pm n intense emotional fab update! superbly written. Maaneet seek solace in each other! Both r suffering n in pain! they want 2 forget their problems for one night n spend the night together! Hate Dev! Geet leaves n calls him! he is so disgusting! Geet left a note 4 Maan! update soon

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punam2712

@punam2712

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Posted: 10 years ago

#27

both are married but ended up together

both are in pain and but have to go face the reality of their lives

will they meet again

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Sheetalvasa

@sheetalvasa

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Posted: 10 years ago

#28

Wow! What a update!!

Aapko pata hai, aapne kya likha hai...jast jast awesome!!

Dard ko itni khubsurti se likha hai ki kya batau samjh nahi aa raha hai...

Aapne maan geet ke saath ko bahut achhe se dikhya hai...dono dukhi hai...apne apne partners se dokha khaye hue hai aur ab dono sab kuch bhulkar ek dusre mein kho jaana chahte hai...geet toh maan ka pura naam bhi nahi jaanti...dono ke bich pyaar kam aur physical relation jyaada hai ...maan ko geet khubsurat lagti hai aur jaan ne ka mouka mile toh pyaar karna chahta hai...

Raat dono saath batate hai...maan ki aankho ka dard aur geet ke aansu un dono ke dil ka haal batate hai...subah geet note likhke chali jaati hai par ussne maan ko likha hai kahi dil ke ek cone mein woh geet ki yaad ko sambhal ke rakhe...awesome writing!!!

Maan aur geet apne apne partners ke saath nahi hai par phir bhi woh galat nahi lagta par dev bhi kisi dusre ke saath hai woh galat lagta hai...yahi aapke writing ka kamal hai

Egarly waiting for next part...kab dogi? Pata hai ki abhi abhi toh 1st part ki comment ki par aage padhne ka itna mann ho raha hai ki kya batau?