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Posted: 10 years ago

#41

Wow!!! it was superb👏 Beautifully written..Want to read more. Can u pls pm me the next updates

Edited by ChocBrownies - 10 years ago

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aditi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: sahibasharma
oh my god..that was so beautiful..
both have problems with their spouses...
spent time together to find solace and left a part of themselves wid eachother...this is quite a diff story...
curious to know how they met..what is up with their lives and all..
amazing!!!!!!!
cont soon

Thanks a lot dear! I was super nervous knowing that I have never written something like that. How they met is not really important but this is about why they met.😊

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Posted: 10 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: flowing_river
amazing update..
I never thought they both would have problems in their marital life after reading prologue...
loved the concept so much...

Thanks a lot dear!! I told you, this would be different.😊

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Posted: 10 years ago

#44

Originally posted by: sporthy_smile28
😕 😒 😭
Waiting for the next! 😭

Kya yeh kaisa tha yeh batay hi nahi😭😕

Waise I am updating soon😆😉

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Posted: 10 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: preeti.1
Amazing start
looking forward to it

Thanks a lot dear!!😊

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Posted: 10 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: Mahimaan
koi pain ko akise itna khoobsuret likh sakta ahi

( how someone should write painful part so beautifully )

don't know morally they right or

wrong

but one thing sure they r meant to be

each other

no maan and geet but only

maaneet

as usual awesome update dear

👏

Thanks a lot dear for such lovely compliment... Even I don't know if morally they are right or wrong...but in that moment they did what felt right for them to do.😊 We can write only as much as our characters let us write.

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aditi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: -indu-

hi Aditi...

I don't like these type of stories...🤢 I just hated the movie kabhi alvida na kehna in spite of brilliant performances by some...

but when it comes to maaneet... everything goes out the window...😆

so both r hurt and searching for solace...😭 and found it in each other.😳.. but they aren't destined... aren't they?😕

superbly written...👏

do continue soon...

Hi Indu, You know even I don't like KANK. I can't really hate a SRK movie but I didn't like the cheating. I feel loyalty is the basic requirement of a relationship. Yet here I am writing a story of disloyalty... Guess Maaneet makes us do impossible things. I don't know about their destiny but you can enjoy the journey can't you?😃

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aditi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: sanghita0000
WOW!! that was beautiful...perfect precious moment of two imperfect people...So both are married & cheated by their partner...& in search of solace they meet each other & spend one night...hope they meet each other soon again & their story start...

Thanks a lot dear!! I am glad you liked this so much since I was totally nervous about it.😊

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aditi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#49

Originally posted by: khwaishfan
hi thanks 4 da pm n intense emotional fab update! superbly written. Maaneet seek solace in each other! Both r suffering n in pain! they want 2 forget their problems for one night n spend the night together! Hate Dev! Geet leaves n calls him! he is so disgusting! Geet left a note 4 Maan! update soon

Thanks a lot dear!! Just don't start hating a character reading one update...you know it's my story so noone would really be good or bad, they will all be mix.😉

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aditi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#50

Originally posted by: punam2712
both are married but ended up together
both are in pain and but have to go face the reality of their lives
will they meet again

Sometimes situations arises making the right and wrong cease to exist.😊