IN LOVE WID A GHOST!! a sandhir story PART23 page90 UPDATED

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Hii friends... wanted to give a try to a concept dat js popped into my mind.. so herez the prologue pls hv a look...:;)

PROLOGUE

"Say THANKS to me SANYU u've again survived the ACCIDENT!! LIKE EVERYTIME??"Aarush praised himself

"U better cry for ur injuries my dear!! sanyukta ko to maine bachaya hai!! n yaa LIKE EVERYTIME!! right sanyukta??"Neel said patting his own back dis time..

She FAKED a smile to both coz she felt it was nice to make her friends happy THOUGH for no reasons as she knew it wasnt dem to SAVE her but HIM!!

HIM!! WHOM NO BODY CAN SEE BUT she CAN STRONGLY FEEL ARROUND her !! WHOM ONLY she CAN TALK TO!!

YES!! you heard it right she CAN TALK TO A SPIRIT!!

FLASHBACK

a month back
mentally cursing her friends for d mess dey had created in her room in last night party she was cleaning her room.. when suddenly she felt a STRONG PALM supporting her bare foot probably in an attempt to resist it from being kept on floor... IT held her foot for 2 minutes and litterally pushed her foot back to its original place.. she got shocked to see the GLASS PIECE on the floor she just was going to hit if DAT PALM HAD NOT BEEN There!!..

"HEY!! STOP!! HEY U!! I CAN FEEL U GOING!! JUST STOP!! SEE U DONT SCARE ME!! I'VE BEEN FEELING U ARROUND ME FOR PAST FEW MONTHS!! WHO ARE U?? JUST SPEAK UP FOR GOD SAKE?? I KNOW UR HERE!!" she screamed wid all her might to d owner of Dat palm whom NO ONE CUD SEE NOT EVEN HER!!


"I'VE BEEN TOLD TO PROTECT U!! CHANGE UR CLOTHES I'LL BE BACK"...

FINALLY she HEARD THE MANLY VOICE!! A VOICE OF A SPIRIT WHO HAD BEEN PROTECTING HER FROM EVERY POSSIBLE HARM...

A VOICE WHICH HAD A POWER TO GIVE HER GOOSEPUMPS...

"AT LEAST TELL ME UR NAME" SHE shouted feeling him leave again


"RANDHIR!!"... the SPIRIT REPLIED POLITELY...




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Posted: 10 years ago
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INDEX

PART1
PART2
PART3
PART4
PART5
PART6
PART7
PART8
PART9
PART10
PART11
PART12
PART13
PART14
PART15

PART16
PART 17
PART18
PART19

PART20
PART21

PART22[/U]
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Edited by Daddysdoll - 9 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Res
Unres..
Kaha se aya esa gajab idea..
Awesome re..
Randhir Mr. India this time..
Mast h re sumoo..
Loved it..
Update soon..
Edited by samridhigoodiez - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Superb!!!
What a concept?? its amazing.
Tnx for the PM
Continue it soon.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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awesome ...prologue... yrrr
chalo jldi jldi ...
update plsss...
keep smiling ...:):)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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interesting
very eagar to know how d story will progress
human nd ghost
awesome prolongue
thanks for pm
continue asap :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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stupendous update
me loving it
tere khopdi mein accha idea aaya hain
mele ko bahut pasand aaya
keep writing
continue soon
update soon
thank you for pm
with love
RIDDHIMA
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Lovely... awsome prolouge. Thanx for pm.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Amazing yaar:-):)
Ghost story loving it...
Continue soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Ah! A supernatural fiction... Moi already in love with the idea of it!
Firstly, the title of the story is so damn captivating...
How do you come up with such amazing and catchy ideas??? Thode tips moi ko bhi do na...
To put it into simple words, the prologue is effin' intriguing...
I'm already in love with this mind-jostling concept...
Itne dhansu aur dhamakedar ideas kahaan se aate hain yaar???
I'm so eagerly waiting for the first chapter...
I'm dying to know what is gonna happen.. So update it soonish!

Regards
Keya

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