IN LOVE WID A GHOST!! a sandhir story PART23 page90 UPDATED

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Posted: 10 years ago

#131

Originally posted by: sudipto-69
awesome superb lovely lovely
lovely lovely lovely lovely lovely
very very nice and interesting

finally past reveled hogayi
sanyu's life in danger
Rd is pragiti ma's son
really very very interesting

please ya Rd ka mystery jaldi reveled karona
o jinda hai ya margaya i'm still confuse

love it. update asap.😃

Thankyou so very much sweedy :)

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722670

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Posted: 10 years ago

#132

Originally posted by: shalbi

background to clear ho gaya ... But how did randhir turn into a ghost ...
do continue soon and thanks for p.m

Thankyou so much dear:)

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722670

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Posted: 10 years ago

#133

Originally posted by: ILuvParsh
hey,i knw i m late,was busy wid exams yaar.
Just read all d parts.
Woah,frm where do u get such brilliant ideas ??
Mai to fan ban gayi :)
An awesome concept !!
Continue soon...

ur never late dear:) exams do falls in priority zone ;) lov ya

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722670

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Posted: 10 years ago

#134

Thankyou so much everyone for ur love and support:)

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722670

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Posted: 10 years ago

#135

PART4

"ITS THE ONLY THING I LIKE ABOUT PARTIES!! DAMN!! U LOOK SO BEAUTIFUL YAAR!! why dont u accept my proposal SANYUKTA!!" Aarush was genuinally blown away by her beauty..

anyone wud gawk at her today as dressed in a perfect black one piece exposing her right shoulder sanyu was looking extremely hot..

"MUH BAND KARLE SHONA!! VAISE BHI UR NOT MY TYPES!!" she smiled at him and made a light push at his chin to help him close his mouth

"OHKEY!! NOW DATS SOMETHING NEW!! I MEAN "UR NOT MY TYPES..??" YE TUNE PEHLE KABHI NAHI KAHA ?? KOI MIL GYA HAI KYA..?? he said in a teasing tone jerking her shoulder wid his a little...

"SHUTUP!! and enjoy d party..??" she smiled at him

"Hmm..do i hv a choice.?? if its written in my destiny to stay alone forever to kya kar sakte hain..?? He said dramatically and continued
"Dekh na praachi is back too for Neel..kitne happy hain dono"... he said pointing towards the lovebirds who were busy dancing under the spotlight..

"ENOUGH NA AARUSH!! DRAMA MAT KAR OR BRING A DRINK FOR ME..??PLS?

she made a puppy face..

"Okey!!" he sadly moved to drinks corner

Usually parties are meant to be enjoyed and dats wat she was here for but sumthing was there making her not to do so...sheer happiness all arround..Colourfull lights challenging the natural darkness of night.. a mass amount of good looking faces..and sturd music beats..means all things dat gives a feel of "LIVELINESS AND HUMANLY SENSE" was present here but NO POWER ON EARTH CAN BEAT THOUGHTS..and so was she LOST IN THOUGHTS OF A LIFELESS SPIRIT!!..

"wat must be he doing..?? Why all dis happend..?? he's all here for me!!..but..Kya hua hoga use..
I DO REMEMBER FEW THINGS!! we used to fight!! no..no he used to fight wid me as he didnt like sharing his MAA's love wid me!!

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Cont.. i never thought dat he wud...DAT HE CUD DIE!!".. she sighed and a lone tear escaped her left eye making her cheek go wet...

"HII!! ARE..U..OK?? I MEAN PRETTY GIRLS WID TEARS IS A BAD COMBO!!" she saw a random guy from nowhere offering her a hanky..

"NO..THANKS..IM OK!!" she managed replying and turned to leave
"AARUSH KNOWS ME!!..a.. i mean if u think im a stranger dan ur mistaken" he said again offering dat hanky
"am..im actually fine!! i dont need it.. pata nhi Aarush is making it late!!" She said smiling at him and seaching for aarush

"OK!! WAIT U HV DIS!!..its not ort!!HV IT!!" he handed
Over a drink to her which she accepted reluctantly..

"SO..?? U'WR MISSING UR LOVED ONE RIGHT..??" he asked politely
"L..LOVED ONE.? NO!!" she gulped dat drink in a go..

"Great den!! lets hv sum more Aarush'll join us later" and he dragged her to drink corner..

"Ye.. where d hell is Aarush.. i dont even know dis guy".. she wsn comfortable at all

but soon she felt everything blurring arround her vision zone..

"HEY U..OK" she felt d guy supporting at her left shoulder..

"Yaa i..m..ok!!" she said moving her hands to her head as it felt unusually heavy..

"Ur not!!" d guy ws taking her to an exit place holding her more rightfully den ever.

"But..i..said na..im ok!! she wasnt in senses anymore still tried shrugging his unpleasant touch but felt really cumbersome to lift her eyelids..

soon she ws on a bed trying to shed dat droplets out of her eyes as she felt d guy attempting to tear her dress at her unexposed shoulder..

"R..ANDHIR!!" she called out wid all her leftOver might..as he ws more dan A GOD TO HER..

but she heard dat guy's screem surprisingly..actually a big glass flowerpot had just hit at his occipital area of head...

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not just dat but he was getting beatenUp wid every flyable thing in dat room.. d last she saw was a heavy mental health book dat flew from d rightmost corner of d room possibly from d study table and hitting d guy at his forhead made his breath surrender itself

she smiled drowsily still having few tears in her beautiful eyes..

"I WANNA SEE U!!" she wispered blinking in SPIRIT'S hold as holding her in arms he ws moving back to her residence from d rarely crowded area of d town..

"I TOLD U ITS NOT NEEDED!!" HIS voice was firm..

"DAN LEAVE ME HERE RIGHT NOW!!" she faked frustration

"IM NOT UR MOTHER TO BEAR UR TANTRUMS!!" he yelled putting her down

she stood facing hr back towards THE SHADE suggesting dat she wsn pleased wid his comment

a long silence took place between dem again to be broken by him but wid a most awaited Surprise

"OK!! BUT ITS UR LAST WISH" He lifted her up in HIS arms from the back HIS SAUL VISIBLE TO HER AT LAST...

"WOW!! U...look...
"U..(blinking frequently) U..UR.. HANDSOME!!.. HOW.. CUD U DIE..??" she pouted in HIS ARMS LOOKING DROWSILY IN HIS EYES.. "BUT I...WHY..CNT I TOUCH YOU..??" she frowned her eyebrows a little still blinking drowsily under alcohol's effect as she found it impossible to TOUCH A SPIRIT'S SHADE THOUGH SHE CUD REST IN HIS ARMS!!..

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Posted: 10 years ago

#138

Damn!! How can I be so late!!!!
Pft! I'm so pissed off on myself!!
I'm so sorry to be the late comer and not reviewing lately...
I'll go and read the stuff soonish!!!

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What?!! I'm the first person to comment...!! Aiyyoo! Yeh kaise ho gaya?!
Yay!! I'm so great...
*raises imaginary collar in the air*

Keeping aside my stupid rantings and coming to the most important thing, this fiction, I'm so glad that you presented us with such a marvelous Christmas gift by updating this fic.
Gosh! So many crucial developments in such a short span of time, my head is spinning right now with confusion.
Just like Sanyukta is tangled in a web of complexities about her past, so am I. What is the secret behind that Ruby? And what has it to do with Randhir? And most vitally how is it that Randhir is a spirit??
I'm so in love with this story... With the fully loaded thrilling suspenses, this story is surely an addiction...
Ah! Randhir... I'm so dying to know about him..
Believe it or not but you are definitely a fantastic writer. The way you have penned that Sanyukta fighting with those goons and then Randhir beating the crap outta that guy, is praise-worthy.
I demand a faster update...
If possible then update it right now.
Love you loads re behna...
Keep writing..

Regards
Keya

P.S.-~~^^MERRY CHRISTMAS^^~~

Edited by -foreverhers- - 10 years ago