IN LOVE WID A GHOST!! a sandhir story PART23 page90 UPDATED - Page 43

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Posted: 10 years ago
Unressed on page 57,.ja tu b kya yaad rakhegoi..
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ILuvParsh

Lovely update dear...Feeling bad for aarush..d guy genuinely luvs her...Phew !! thnk god d kiss didnt happen.. Now another cliffy... Suman aise karte hai kya... U just knw how to keep d excitement level at its peak... Update soon re... Nahi toh... Nahi toh i'll wait..what else i can do 😃


Hmm u dont hav a choice ;-) thanku aakriti yaar
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Posted: 10 years ago
And congoz re.. Tu Goldie Bann gayi..
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: samridhigoodiez

Unressed on page 57,.ja tu b kya yaad rakhegoi..


Han yaad to rakhna padega na aapke comments bohat expensive hain yaar ;-) thanku for reading this crap :)
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: samridhigoodiez

And congoz re.. Tu Goldie Bann gayi..


Hmm or tum sizzler ;0 hihi congo shongo to u too :)
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: sudipto-69

awesome...

update asap.😃


Thanku dear :))
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: paramfan

Itna din badh ithna chotusa part ? Long part chahiye.


Will give long one now ;-)
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: vidhichaudhury

Awesome updates.
loved it.thanks for pm & update soon pls


Pleasure z all mine dear ;)
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Nitra

Oh god sanyu kidnapped and poor aarushhh :(


Thanku dear For ur review :)
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Posted: 10 years ago

PART 11

"Lea...vve me...don't.. pleas...se.. don't do this to..me...I beg...u..plea..." a girl in her early twenties was pleading to her every known God to save her from such a cruel death... she was being thrown on the ground, her shrug though in her sight but far away from her reach.. her condition was miserable.. eyes fighting within themselves as the sedative in her veins was showing its power..while they still were capable of brimming with a stream of fine tears...her hands doing every possible exercise to keep the unpleasant touches away from her...the cloth from her mouth was removed as they had reached the isolated area of the jungle...

" chhodo use bhai..not she but her death is our target... and moreover the Boss needs us back in ten minues..." one of the goons for whom professionalism seemed to have a few limits tried to make the other understand the same...

"I won't!!... she always was a target...THAAAP!!" the guy slapped hard the poor struggling soul...as she hadn't yet let him fulfill his desires... the girl was finally caught firmly by the same... she wasn't fighting him anymore..her eyes in deep rest.. her body as relax as a dead one... she was unconscious.. the guy settled himself upon her.. he was about to announce his victory by kissing her when his phone rang in his pocket.. he frowned at his luck and checked the caller.. it was his boss!!

"You said you've got her?? She is dead right..?? I want u guys here..Right now!! Do you get that..throw her where no one can find.. and report me in 10 minutes..." the boss ordered his men autocratically..

"ji boss!!.. the guy picked the girl up and threw her in an agedly old well near them.. The well contained natural water in it...if not drowning than a long touch with icy water was other way for her possible death... the well wasn't much deep but the water level was quite enough to let her tiny body immerse itself fully in its lap.. Her eyes opened for an instant at the touch of water on her half naked skin.. She gasped for air.. Thus realizing that she was finally being murdered.. Her salty tears mixed with the water, while the water was mixing itself into her..

"JUST CALL ME OUT ONCE..WHEN U FEEL LIKE!!" she remembered his last words.. her GHOST'S words.. and back to back flashbacks started playing like a film in her not so stable head...the flashbacks which had only two souls in the scenes..SHE AND THAT GHOST!! The counts of her breath was reducing with every flashback...

"RAN...DHIIIRRR...!" she closed her eyes and smiled accepting the upcoming consequences... she was ready all ready for anything.. She thanked her God for letting her meet HIM once.. She was happy that she too was going to be dead in a while.. That she too would be like HIM.. And maybe this time MORE CLOSE TO HIM...

Suddenly the atmosphere in that area was horrifying.. With owls hooting, the echolocation of bats was scary..The wild animals were no more in a slumber.. The wind was exaggeratively active.. The leaves of the trees were in a loud conversation with each other... they were shaking as if they would be blown away with this wind.. This all indicated a REGRET... the regret of a powerful soul.. This suggested that somewhere someone was hurt.. Someone was not happy.. And that someone wanted a REVENGE.. Revenge for hurting HER.. Revenge for HURTING HIS ONLY REASON TO BE WITH.. FOR HURTING THE GIRL HE COULD DIE HUNDRED DEATHS... HE CRIED OUT LOUD...

HE entered the well to see her..to feel her once.. to know if she was alright... he picked that injured soul in his hands and came out.. he cried dried tears out his GHOSTLY eyes... it seemed water had already entered her maximum cells... he turned his body down to the ground in an attempt to remove the water from his gut..

"hannn..Open your eyes sanyukta.. Please.. You do are alive.. I know.. You just can't die like this.. I promised you I won't let you die... I... won't..." he hugged her fearfully his eyes had that pain to lose her.. He knew he never got her but still he was scared to lose her... he cried for countless minutes with her in his arms when suddenly he heard her faded whisper...

" dar gye na tum GHOSTY..??" he parted with a jolt still holding her fragile frame in his strong arms..

He didn't want to scold her for not letting him come with her..to not call him out when she actually was being killed... he was just scared.. still scared.. he kept staring in her drowsy eyes confusedly..

"I wanted to die.. I thought I'll get more close to you that way.." she accepted her intentions like a sincere student to which our ghost reacted trying to fake anger and genuine confusion..

"Please don't go anywhere ..." she held his hand smoothly stopping him at his place..

"I told you.. you'll let me touch you some day... see!! She held his hand in both of hers and slided herself more close to him.. she was enjoying his touch... it felt necrosed ... cyanosed.. but it was contenting.. it was holy..it was pure.. it was safe.. for not a second she let her grip lose over his hand.. after all it was finally that she could touch him... to feel him...

AS she dig her back more into his chest while resting her head on his right shoulder, his eyes fell on a bunch of water droplets on her wet face and he lost himself in that droplet which was already struggling to leave the hair flicks resting on her lips.. "ST..OP STARING AT ME.. U GHOST..!!" she teased him smilingly in a sleepy tone...BUT IT SURELY MADE HIM AMAZED THAT THOUGH WITH CLOSED EYES SHE CUD FEEL HIS GAZE ON HER... he was numb.. Maybe he was still scared.. What if he was more late.. She would have died.. This mere thought was scaring him still... he was busy in his confused state when the drop from those hair flicks at her lips left its host and entered her mouth... he noticed that.. The creases of fear on his forehead vanished to be replaced by expressions of a kid who gets lost to see his favorite chocolate in front of him.. His other hand lifted itself involuntarily to reach to those flicks while his eyes kept scanning her features... he removed those hair from her face to have a proper view of this angelic beauty..

"I'm beautiful right..?? She smiled and open her eyes to catch the ghost red handed while gawking at her.. but she forgot he was more fast.. he instantly turned his face to other side while trying to suppress his imaginary blush..

"You're the ugliest of girls I've ever seen..." he faked his determined declaration which he didn't know had actually hurt her in a way..

precap : kuch socha ni hai abhi ..;-P

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