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Posted: 10 years ago

#171

Originally posted by: ILuvParsh
Wow.. u gave a lovely christmas present !!! An awesome update...
D plot is soo fascinating...
Keep writing dear :)
update soon..

Thankyou so vry much aakriti:;) lov you

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Posted: 10 years ago

#172

Originally posted by: sudipto-69
awesome superb lovely lovely
lovely lovely lovely lovely
amazing fabulous
very very interesting and nice

its dam interesting and amazing

love it. update asap.😃

Tysooo much dear;-)))

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Posted: 10 years ago

#173

Originally posted by: Daddysdoll

Waiting ;-))

unresd dear 😳

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Manal

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Posted: 10 years ago

#174

Hey I just read ur ff and all four parts in a go and I really loved reading it cuz its the most unique concept till know I have sended u a buddy request if possible plz send me a pm when u update ur ff's next part😊

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Zumi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#175

Liked both the chapter and waiting for the next one too.. So bring it on fast.. Curious to read whats coming next.

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Posted: 10 years ago

#176

Originally posted by: Paramharshita
Liked both the chapter and waiting for the next one too.. So bring it on fast.. Curious to read whats coming next.

Thankyou so much dear:-)"lov

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Posted: 10 years ago

#177

Originally posted by: Thriller123
Hey I just read ur ff and all four parts in a go and I really loved reading it cuz its the most unique concept till know I have sended u a buddy request if possible plz send me a pm when u update ur ff's next part😊
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Thankyou so much dear:;) kk will pm u for sure:)"lov

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722670

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Posted: 10 years ago

#178

"DIS UPDATE IS FOR YOU SHRUTI WROTE IT IN A HURRY.. DONT KNOW ITS GONNA HELP YOU OR NOT But I HAD TO WRITE IT FOR YOU anyhow LOVE YA

PART 5

"DUMBO... GHOST!! speakup na why...cant...I ..TOUCH YOU..WHEN YOU CAN DO DAT TO ME ..?? she murmered for umpteenth time hanging in his ARMS though in a more kiddish way now and again lifted her right hand up to reach to his features

BUT LIKE EVERYTIME HER FINGERS CROSSED THROUGH HIS FORHEAD,,DEN NOSE,,DEN LIPS,,AND THROUGH CHIN AT THE LAST... SHE CUDNT REST HER FINGERS ON HIS SKIN,, MAY BE IT WASNT A SKIN INFACT

"U CANT!! COZ I DONT WANT U TO!!" he answered breaking his never ending silence and continuing his walk the SOUL continued
" ITS MY SHADE NOT ME!!"

"WHY DONT U WANT ME TO TOUCH U..??" she pouted taking it other ways

"IM NOT BOUND TO ANSWER U EVERY DAMN THING" he said wid neutral expressions and his face still up not giving a damn to the pity soul in his arms..

"SO DAT ONLY U CAN SEE ME!! IF I TURN TO BE MY ORIGINAL BEING I'LL BE VISIBLE TO ALL...BUT NOW ONLY U CAN SEE ME!!... he explained guessing her staring at him wid alcohol working at its peak in her veins and eyes.

"WITTY GHOST!!!...ITS SUPERFUN BEING DEAD..!! NO..??" U CAN TOUCH ME BUT I CANT!!.. I CAN SEE YOU BUT NONE OTHER CAN DO DAT..!!.. HEY..!! KUNWAR SHEKHAWAT!!... CAN YOU KILL ME..?? I TOO WANNA BE A SPIRIT..!!.. her words seemed challenging him...

all dis while he had been avoiding any gaze of his on her but he declared looking intensely at her shivering eyelids AT LAST
"I WONT LET ANYONE HURT YOU...NOT EVEN MYSELF!!"

as he laid her down on her kingsized bed a look of confusion spreaded over her eyebrows
"HEY WAIT!! YOUR EYES!!..DEY R..DEY SHINE MORE DEN NORMAL..?? BUT.. DEY R DEEP!! she smiled confusedly

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722670

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Posted: 10 years ago

#179

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and tried to find her reflection in HIS EYES but her own frequent blinks were making it difficult to do so..

"IM NOT ALIVE TO BE NORMAL!!"he said getting up off her and as HE blew air wid his mouth the door behind his back bolted making a hard thump

"U DIED COZ OF ME RIGHT..??" she wispered hesitantly her eyes more heavier den ever

"SLEEP!! U DRUNKARD!!" he orderd removing her sandles

"I CAN SEE DAT "RED" ON YOUR SHIRT!!.. ITS... BLOOD!! I ..KNOW!!" U..
DIED COZ OF ME!! BUT!! U WILL..LET ME..TOUCH YOU SUM...DAY!!" her words fumbling and thoughts flying one to next and finally drifting to a deep sleep she turned her face towards him allowing her body lay on the edge of d bed..

HE had an idea dat again a touch cud break her sleep so HIS HAND SWAYED IN AIR TO MOVE HER BACK TO MIDDLE OF THE BED AND THEN HE COVERD HER WID A BEDSHEET..

"I DIDNT DIE COZ OF U!! I DIED "FOR" U!! I DIED FOR MY MOM!! I DIED FOR HER PROMISE!!..BUT LET IT BE A LIE!!"... I WONT LET U KNOW!! NEVER!!"...
THE SOUL thought to itself and stepped aback a little...

PRECAP:- HOW DARE YOU..?? HEZ EVERYTHING TO ME..YOU GHOSTII!! HOW CUD YOU..??" she shouted in frustration

"HE TRIED TO HURT YOU!!" he didnt seem affected of her words as he answered looking at other side...

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samridhi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#180

Res
Unres
Aw that was sooo nice..
He died fof her..
Mystery...
Ohh Ho..
Itne Dino baad update diua Vo b ituu sa..
N wats with precap..
Why is she yelling on him..??
Update next part sonn.

Edited by samridhigoodiez - 10 years ago