IN LOVE WID A GHOST!! a sandhir story PART23 page90 UPDATED - Page 7

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Posted: 10 years ago
#61
Ah man! I'm so late... Pft!! Mind sending me PMs???

The first chapter is so damn interesting...
Woosh! Why do I feel that Sanyukta is developing emotions for Randhir in her heart??
Gosh! Randhir is so commanding and demanding... That is really adorable.
Aww.. That SanDhir scene is so exquisite and enthralling... They were behaving as toddlers.😆
Ah! That precap is so intiguing.. I want an update as soon as possible..
Do update it soonish!

Regards
Keya
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Posted: 10 years ago
#62
PART2

"Itne bade ghar me aap akeli rehti hai aapko dar nhi lagta mem saab"...The ice candy man finally asked in fearful curiosity but his words seemed falling on deaf ears
"DID I HURT HIM?? NO..NO!! DEAD HAI TO DEAD HI KAHUNGI NA!! BUT... WHY HE seemed hurt DEN AND HE EVEN ALLOWED ME TO OUT ALONE!!... HUH!! ACCHA HI HAI AFTERALL ITS MY LIFE AND I CANT LET HIM RULE OVER ME JUST BECOZ HES HERE TO PROTECT ME AND THAT TOO GOD ONLY KNOWS FOR WHAT REASONS"...she chipped to herself lost in thoughts letting her ICE CANDY mercilessly melting and mixing drop by drop in thirsty road near her appartment..
"MADAM ko kis chiz ka dar hum hai na inki help ke lie" a quite offensive voice managed to break HER trance and sensing an unpleasant event awaiting ahead she turned back to face the owner of the voice thus widening her eyes in shock as THE VOICE WASNT ALONE BUT THERE WAS ONE MORE TO ACCOMPANY IT..
"HOT AND COLD TOGETHER!! WAT A COMBO MANNN!! symbolizing Sanyu as HOT and obviously ICE CANDY cold other guy stepped forward not breaking his disgusting gaze falling bottom to top on her
who..who..rrr..u??just sssttop ok!! i..im not alone here u get dat??... she stepped back in response to both and tried to look back for help from d GOLA MAN who had already left the site

"WE LOST COLD COZ OF U AB TO HOT SE HI KAM CHALANA PADEGA!! d guy rushed to her back in an attept to block her way

dey seemed professionals
she closed her eyes tight flexing her head more den ever as it felt her as her last minutes on earth...she never imagined her end to be like this NO GIRL WUD DO DAT

BUT suddenly she felt a known PRESENCE there a presence dat cud never harm her but protect her

and she FELT HIM SLIDING his left hand on her bare stomach litteraly pushing her organs more inside


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Posted: 10 years ago
#63
CONT..and in a matter of seconds she felt herself lifted up in the air her back supported by HIS IMAGINARY YET strong MANLY chest And HIS LEFT HAND STILL ON HER BARE STOMACH

her feet were punching hard against faces of THOSE
Ruthless CREATURES making dem fall one by one either in SHOCK or due to her punches.
as one of d guy again stoodup composing himself she felt HER SAVIOUR'S Fingers snaking down ON her right arm to her hand turning it into tiny fist and guiding this fist to use it as a defence as well as attack...
IT WAS PROBABLY HIS AURA DAT turned the impossible to possible and the goons litterally ran back to their supposed places shocked of wat just had happened wid dem...

HER HAND INVOLUNTARILY MOVED TO HER STOMACH
Assumeably to react to HIS TOUCH THERE as she cud STILL feel his coldness above her right shoulder, his left hand still on her stomach and right one on her right fist...

"I WANNA SEE U".. she wispered gathering her courage..
"ITS NOT NEEDED"!! the SPIRIT Responded coldly and making her feel shrugged off it DISTANCED ITSELF AWAY FROM HER...

"IT IS NEEDED MR. SAVIOUR!! kyun ho tum mere saath!! WHY??" she was a bit serious this time..
"ITS UR THIRD QUESTION.. NOW DONT MESS WID ME" he dragged her holding her wrist

"ITs GONNA be my first question to you AS I WAKE UP TOMORROW" she pouted on his supposed location and entered her huge yet empty appartment..





Edited by Daddysdoll - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#64

Originally posted by: -foreverhers-

Ah man! I'm so late... Pft!! Mind sending me PMs???

The first chapter is so damn interesting...
Woosh! Why do I feel that Sanyukta is developing emotions for Randhir in her heart??
Gosh! Randhir is so commanding and demanding... That is really adorable.
Aww.. That SanDhir scene is so exquisite and enthralling... They were behaving as toddlers.😆
Ah! That precap is so intiguing.. I want an update as soon as possible..
Do update it soonish!

Regards
Keya


Hey keya im glad i cud grab ur attention dear thankyou sooo much for ur review yaar and ya presenting next part on ur demand ;-p lov ya
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Posted: 10 years ago
#65
The update was superb
I so luved it

This is getting intrstng
Sanyu self talking was amzng
She was so confused
She really want to know abut rd

Bt her self discussion disturbed by goons
Sanyu was so scared
She thought her end came

Bt her knight n shining armour saved her
It was really amzng
The way he saved her
Sanyu was having goosebumps on his touch
She wanted to know abut him
Bt she wasted her chance


Cnt wait for next
Update soon

Luv u
Keep smiling
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Posted: 10 years ago
#66
love it .
action sequence ...
gr8. .
sanyu wanna see him
meet him
haa yrr its high tym now. ..
well
update ..
whenever u r free ...:)
keep smiling
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Posted: 10 years ago
#67
Awsm part sanyu is thinking about rd and the fight waooo
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Posted: 10 years ago
#68
what was that?? Wait that was Mindblowing...
Oh god this is getting so interesting...
Thnx for pm...
Loads of luv
Harshita
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Posted: 10 years ago
#69
Wow awesome
It was amazing and fight was fab
Thank u so much for the pm
And do pm me wen you update
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Posted: 10 years ago
#70
terrific update doll
ron came to protect her
he he goons ko kya maja chakaya
fight was mind blowing
keep writing
update soon
with love
RIDDHIMA

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