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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: mani2525

Hi.. such an amazing story this is.. just mind blowing.. i just came across this yesterday.. and read 16 chapters back to back.. I m smitten👏😳

Also realised that u updated the last part just recently ...

I am dying to read further pls pls pls update soon

Waiting impatiently
Your Fan
Manisha





Originally posted by: -ChitraRocking-

awesome update Tfs for pm 😳



Originally posted by: lucygrey21

I m so loving this story.



Originally posted by: rima4ever

fascination fantastic update
rather scintillating dear
too much happened in this update
i will keep reading this till u give the next one



Originally posted by: momi78

Ooohh ... what an update! So much happened! Btw, I loved drunk Rishaan! And why did you stop at the most interesting point? Please continue soon!



Originally posted by: sanghita0000

WOW!! Outstanding update...loved it...




Thank you so much guys!!! Your feedback means a lot to me!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: -ChitraRocking-

awesome update loved it interesting one cant wait for next update 👏⭐️Tfs for pm 😃😃



Thank you so much, Chitra!!! 😃


Originally posted by: Insaneniyu

want maya to feel for rudr pls

awesome update😊




Thank you so much. Everything will happen on it's own pace and time.


Originally posted by: drashtifan1

I finished reading all the parts! I am so intrigued by this story.. Its exam time for me but all I can think of is this fanfic.. I love it!! You are such an amazing writer.. I can't just wait for the next update now.



Thank you so much! You are too sweet! I will update in a bit.




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Posted: 10 years ago


Thank you so much.

Originally posted by: SreeRK

Well i still want Maya to somehow confide in Rudr and not Rishaan.. Rudr was hurt like hell when he asked for his brother...

waiting for the past to be revealed..



I am sorry but that won't make any sense. That will be out of character for Maya. Thanks for your feedback.

Originally posted by: GOODLUCKANGEL

Welcome back🤗 Im so happy dat u updated 😃

Awesome n fab .Loved it to bits.❤️
I guess rishaan too knows sumthin abt rudra maya connection wid rk madhubala. I feel dat rishaan wud fall for maya/madhubala ❤️ sometimes i feel like rishaan is RK but i knw its rudra .
why mrs roy said to rishaan : your madhubala RK .
pretty long n awesome update.
cont soon dear👍🏼👏



I am so glad to see you back on the thread as well! 🤗

Loved your comment! I will post another long update in a bit now. 😆



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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: PRATHA1

I read all updates in one shot! Rishabla's re-birth is interesting concept! I read your note too! You are amazing writer Maria, i liked your writing style, don't butchered any character, write the story on your own way!
Now coming to the update!
First you write about Rishaan & Maya, that time i thought that they are rishbala! But i got shocked when you mention about Rudra! But then another twist in the story Rudra & Rishaan are twins!
I liked Rudra & Rishaan's bonding!
I liked Rudra & Bittuji's convo. in 16th part, he left him confused & speechless!
Now Rudra started his investigation, by using his criminal lawyer mind!
Rishaan is hilarious in his drunk state!
So Shaurya is doing all this things, but why? Did he know about Rishbala's rebirth, but how its possible! or he is only trying to scare maya! Rudra remembered his past, but maya thought its only her scary nightmares! She is avoiding Rudra, poor Rudra its hurt him!

Eagerly waiting for the next update! please pm me!



Thank you so much for your feedback!! Updating in a bit! Wait up! 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago


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Posted: 10 years ago
AWESOME! LOVED IT!
Very nicely dealt with the sensitive
matters
Maya earns new respect from me...such resilience !
And Rishaan is onto his big brother ki jasoosi ! Lol!
Looks like next chappie will be an emotional read. Cant wait to see Rudra's reactions. Just spectacular!
Edited by .MorsDraconis. - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
I'm so sorry for unresing this late. I had an exam I had to study for that I wrote yesterday.
But read the update and it was incredible.
I figured something happened with Maya in her past. But the past that was revealed, was both expected and unexpected. I had a hunch it would be going in that direction, but I didn't expect that it would be the same man that keeps annoying Rishaan with his offers. It made me think whether or not he would do something similar with him, cause he looks like RK...🤣 But Rishaan would overpower him within a second, unless Shaurya spikes his drink then Rishaan stands no chance...🤣 Unless his PA, Bittuji's daughter comes in and saves him...🤣 Sorry I forgot her name...😆
Well anyway, I don't think that Maya's mother killed herself. I think Madhu had it wrong, but who can blame her thinking like that, given how and where she grew up. I think that Shaurya either came back when Madhu went to school and both of them had a heated argument or that Big Joe found out somehow, maybe from Shaurya, that they were staying there and went to get the both of them back in his business. But it all ended in her getting shoved out of the window and people assuming, including her daughter, that she killed herself.
It took a lot of courage for Maya to reveal such an important and awful piece of her life with someone, and allowing to get herself recorded.
Now over to the three major questions that popped up in my mind while reading this update, other than the sceanrio with Rishaan...😆
Number one: Who is going to kill Shaurya Rathore first? Rishaan or Rudra/RK?🤣 Somehow I am hoping for the second one...😆 I hope Rudra ends him. Cause it would make a lot of sense...Rudra is RK's reincarnation, and there is no way RK would ever allow someone do that to his Biwi. Rudra would torture him to no means...Making Shaurya regret that he was even born...😆
But somehow I Think you are going to write that it's Rishaan who will end him. Because first off, his brother is a lawyer and can protect him. Second Rishaan feels some bond and feelings for Maya, but doesn't know himself what it is exactly. I still think it's because they are twins and they can feel what the other one is feeling, given the same looks, they are identical twins. Maybe Rishaan also has developed something for Maya. I'm still undecisive about that.
Number two: WHat kind of relation does Rudra, Rishaan have with that shrink? There is something that is fishy. I have a feeling it has something to do with the fact her being a mother or lack of it. I can't really decided what could possibly hide behind that. But I am looking forward to read it in the coming updates.
Number three: Actually I have forgotten what three was...😆 I know it was something interesting but can't remember what...😆 If I remember I'll post it.😆
Just another thing. I loved how you wrote this update. That you didn't show the storytelling right away but at the end, and that to with Rudra watching the DVD. I'm just missing Rudra's reaction to all of this. I guess you saved it for the next update...😆 I wonder how will he react... Well I know how...But I mean...Will he stop saying the name Madhubala?😆
And I loved Rishaan reaction when she was done. Perfect. I guess he took that shower to let some frustration out.😆 But when Maya said Shaurya Rathore's name. Impeccable...From confusion to plotting the perfect revenge plan...🤣 I know he plotted...what else could he do...🤣
I am looking forward for the first question to be answered soon...😆
Even though I cam second, I am probably the last one to comment...😆 Sorry again about that. And I hope you keep your promise...😆
Thanks for the update and for the PM.
Looking forward for the next update.😉
Edited by Ni33 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
No words to say anything!
this update has revealed so many things!
past of maya!because of what she is today..
it is really mind BLOW-ing update..
what is the relation of RKs with Mrs.Roy?

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Posted: 10 years ago
I know I know ! I am finally Editing my comment :P
but you know how much I ove you right?????????????? :D 🤗

dude, honestly.. what can I say .. I loved the update so much.. and I CAN-NOTwait for the next update and you better update soon -.- you can't keep us waiting -.-
I know you have heard me say this a thousand times :P but whatever cause I will never get tired of telling you this.. more than the story, it's your writing that makes the readers come back for more !!! #FACT
You should keep writing.. cause this is what your meant to do.. and I know how much it makes you happy :D 🤗

I love you.. and I am really sorry for editing this late Mar :( please forgive me :P
UPDATE SOON... ❤️ ILY.. ❤️


Steph ❤️

xx
Edited by -StephinesS- - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
This chapter answered so many question and raised so many more.
You are such a powerful writer. There is so much emotion in your updates. I didn't even realise when I started crying. And it's all because you expressed her agony so brilliantly. Kudos!
With this chapter my respect for Madhu err.. Maya raised so much higher. The girl has been through so much yet she lives with so much dignity. It's definitely not easy. So I really respect her for that.
It's to see how Rishaan and Rudra react to this confession of hers. Especially Rudra.
When Rishaan did not say anything, she continued, "This name... Madhubala... it has cursed my life... my very existence. It has never let me live my life as who I am..." she scowled and then spoke with determination and anger, "...but I will be damned if I ever stop trying and fighting. I will do anything to protect my identity, to live my life because I am not a quitter, I am not like my mother and I am sure as hell, not anyone's Madhubala, I am my own person... I am no one else other than Maya Talwaar!"
this gave me goosebumps. I can't wait to see how will she finally come to terms with her past identity of being Madhubala. And moreover how will Rudra react to this.
Continue soon.
Edited by ..Ananya.. - 10 years ago

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