RM FF: Entwined - Thread I (Thread II Link Added) - Page 82

Originally posted by: noiseygirl

i thought u forgot about this story
nyc to read u again
luv the bittuji sence

Originally posted by: rima4ever

wow finally the story is back again

Originally posted by: NeelM

Good to see you and your excellent piece of writing!

Long time!

Originally posted by: SHINYSHREYA

Where were you, Maria?

Missed you a lot.

Liked this update.

Finally, Madhu is remembering her past.

Originally posted by: SreeRK

Finally updated!

Thanks a lot..

Are you planning a fight between the brothers cos Rishaan is smitten by her..

Originally posted by: leelaa9

Lovely to see you back, Maria, and that too with an update.🤗
The chapter was superb.⭐️

Originally posted by: arshisfan

I really loved it 🤗

Girl you are so talented 👏, flawless writing, the plot is woven in such a beautiful logical way, I liked it from A to Z

So does that mean that Maya has started accepting that she is Madhubala or is it that she is in a trance now, whatever be it, one thing is sure now circumstances will push her to face her past and her truth

I liked Rudra's scenes too be it with Bittuji or in the car when he realized that Maya is in trouble, so now he knows there is someone after her, now some clues are dicovered by Rudra and some by Rishaan (the autograph and the psychatrist opinion), who will come to know the truth first?, Rudra already knows she is Madhu, so the autograph thing wouldn't surprise him

looking forward to read the rest, update soon 😃

Originally posted by: -StephinesS-

OMGGG I read it all in one go, all over again !
THIS HAS GOT TO BE ONE OF THE BEST RishBala FFs in the forum, hands down!

And, you have started this story before RishBala died Mar, and I can't help but think how close your story is to RishBala's death :'(

You neeed to continue sooon! and no you better not vanish into thin air again missy -.-


and I shall give you further feedback on the FF real soon :D 🤗

I am just super glad your back :D <3
and I am super excited to read the next update !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


xx

Originally posted by: muzikk93

yaay you finally updated!!! Amazing chapter :) post the next one soon please😃😃😃

Originally posted by: Insaneniyu

awesome update hope rudra find out who is blackmailer hope maya also remember eyerthing

Originally posted by: Ni33

Hi Maria.

I am somewhat new to this forum, been a member for 4 months.😆

And yesterday a friend of mine, Stephy recommended me to read this story. I'm thankful for her doing so. This is one incredible story. I am so recommending this story whoever I'll talk to.

I stayed up to wee hours reading this story. I had only chapter 16 left which I read now.

And am rendered speechless. This story is just incredible. Well written, there isn't anything that I didn't love about this story. There is suspense, mystery, love. I even love your small messages. Especially the one when you revealed that Rudra was Rishaan's brother and the incarnation of RK.😆 It cracked me up.😆 Yes you left small hints.😆

And I noticed you updated this story yesterday. Well I am in luck. Otherwise I would have only come to chapter 15.😆 But now what's left is will Maya realise she is Madhu? Will Rishaan realise it? I Think he will. But the two important questions are. Will Rishaan stand in the way of Rudra and Maya? And who sent that message? Cause I became confused. If it was Rudra or Rishaan. Maybe it was a third person. However I hope you update soon. I can't wait to read the next chapter.

By the way I'm waiting impatiently for everything dawn upon Bittuji. Love to read his reaction.😆 But my guess is, since he was left speechless like RK did in those good old Days. It will hit him soon. Hopefully no heartattack or stroke will be the outcome of that realisation.😆 Hmm. We will get to see Bittuji's and RK's chemistry again.

Now prediction and analyze time.😆 Rishaan will put two and two together. He has afterall heard his brother desperate pleading to save both Madhu and him from the fire. A memory from another life. He had noticed Maya's changed behavior. She even gave an autograph writing Madhubala Rishabh Kundra. The question is will Rishaan get them together or will they get together by themselves. Or will Rudra get some help from Bittuji in that department.😆 I have some more alternatives, but it's already one long comment.😆

Next comes Rishaan and Meera. I guess that Rishaan will end up with Meera. Much to Bittuji's displeasure. Afterall how can he be okay with his daughter being with someone who is a cardboard copy of the great superstar RK. His chief. And who is that arrogant. That would just be wrong. But Rudra would set Bittuji straight. I wonder if Rudra will enter the filmindustry, now when he remembers everything. He is afterall the right RK.😆 Something you have indicated and left small hints little here and little there in the updates. 😆 Rishaan will hopefully realise his place isn't in BW. Even after desperate attempts to be the right RK. The tattoo is the example for it.

Now as for Rishaan feeling a connection to Maya, but doesn't know what. Cause he isn't the real RK. There is a quite simple explanation to all of it. They are identical twins right.😆 And there have been reports that identical twins can sense what the other one is sensing. So Rishaan might not be the real RK or have his memories, but his brother is and has. Thus making Rishaan all protective of Maya. But when it comes to Maya, she tries hard to suppress her memories from a previous life. And these memories emerge when she is the most vulnerable, which is at night. I suspect the fire that consumed them both happened then, also Madhubala was afraid of the dark. However among all of this there is still a question that is still left completely unanswered and without any hints. 😆 What happened in Maya's childhood that made the person she is today? She was an orphan. She keeps saying not again. I fought hard to become better. What happened in her childhood? Did Madhu and her memories emerge when Maya was a child? Was she teased about it? Did people call her crazy? Cause I can't come up with another explanation other than that. She changes, I mean her behavior changes, whenever she hears the name Madhubala.

Well enough of the predictions and analyses.😆 I think it's enough. Don't you?

One word like INCREDIBLE doesn't quite cover to describe this story.

I applaud for your imagination and writing skills.👏

Now in aftermath I really am disappointed. Not in you but the makers of MB. 😆 After the leap they could have shown a story like this. This would not only bring back MB in top position but also gain new viewers. We still would have seen that raw and loving nature of both Madhubala and RK and the story would have evolved.

Can you please PM me when you update the story the next time.😳 Pretty please. 😳 And do you have an index of your stories?😳 I'll like to read more of them. You have become one of my favorite writers now. And I am disappointed in myself for not reading this story before. Bad Nina, bad. Very bad.😆 But at the same time I am glad. Cause I don't think I could go six and a half month without an update. I already told Stephy that, and I told her what the outcome would be.😆 Here's a hint. This would be the first thread that would reach 200+ pages.😆

Well thanks for this incredible story and update. Please update soon.😳

Originally posted by: Ni33

I love the story. And I wouldn't expect anything else than what you said it the note.😆 I expect nothing less then Rudra trying to make Maya fall in love with him or her to remember her past lives. But then they can't go on where they left. They are reborn. Have grown up in different enviroments and faced different diffuculties. So it's only natural for them to try to overcome that. And let's not begin with Rishaan. 😆 I can analyze him all day long and predict different outcomes.😆 But I won't.😆

Waiting for the next chapter Maria. Keep up with the great Writing.😉

Originally posted by: Ni33

Okay I read it. And wow.😲

This was something else. And you left us on a cliffhanger.😆 Well I love cliffhangers. But I expect an update soon.😆 I want to hear about her past and what it is she is going to tell Rishaan.

Both Rishaan and Rudra are trying to protect her. Unfortunately Maya can't recognise Rudra as RK yet. But she isn't supposed to yet either. Not until we have crossed a couple updates more.😆

But I do wonder how Rishaan will react, cause clearly he has fallen for Maya. Even though he is denying it.

Sorry for the short comment, hopefully the next one will be longer. Studies calls.

Thanks for the update and PM.