RM FF: Entwined - Thread I (Thread II Link Added) - Page 85

Updates super...Rudr and rishaan both know the truth... i dont want Maya to fall for rishaan.. i know you have explained it but still i felt like telling you...

What a wonderful update 👏, I really enjoyed it 😃

Now the past is disclosed finally and we get to know all what the poor soul has been through in life, having a mother who is a prostitute (a stigma for a lifetime!), who loathes her at times for reminding her of her past, who abuses her, then being abused by a man and her mother denies it all and comes late to her rescue an to top it all after she finally thought that the worst has passed her mother and the only family she has commits a suicide!!! it's so hard yaar and uperse Rishaan who mades her face her past and worst nightmares when he forced her to become his heroine!of course he didn't know about her past back then but that doesn't make it easier to her, but if we see at it, he only did her a big favour she will finally face her past to overcome it and she will meet her Rudra/Rk and learn to accept him and accept that she is Madhubala the name she hates most!!!

I really felt for her so much, there is a limit to what a child/teenager can take/face, but she is so strong to face all this and still stand firm and ready to fight whatever comes her way, she doesn't want to be a quitter like her mother and I admire this, it takes a lot of courage and williness to overcome such painful past


Rishaan is also strong in his own way or maybe he just turned off his feelings to suffer less, I wonder what happened in his past that made him this way, day after day I'm getting curious to know more

And finally Rudra, he was lost and found himself he knows he is Rk, so the problem that concerns him as a person is over but this man I guess will suffer a lot because of his loved ones, he already suffers because of his brother now he will suffer even more because of his Maya, sometimes when you tend to your own wounds and are so engrossed in them is much more easier than when you see your loved ones suffering and you are helpless and can't really help them, seems he couldn't help Rishaan in the past, also Maya has suffered a lot and he can do nothing to change her past either, now I wonder what will he do to help them overcome their pain. Poor Rudra he will definitely be shattered to know about his Madhu/Maya's past but I'm sure he will help her and give her justice as much as as he can, he can't bring her mother back, but he can punish the man who is still troubling her

There is something I've noticed, these three people (Rudra, Rishaan and Maya) were lost and incomplete without each other, I feel the fact that they came together and their destinies got entwined, is exactly what will make them overcome their pain and find peace and happiness in the future


I'm eager to learn more about Rudra/Rishaan's reactions, their next steps/actions and also Rishaan's past, I want to know what happened to him exactly, also I don't know what happened to their parents, does Rishaan hold himself responsible for their death or something which made him feel this way, it's just a thought that crossed my mind, since you never mentioned their parents, anyways I really want to know more

hats of to you for this awesome chapter 👏 and please update soon 🤗

Suprb update. Emotional.. Who s dr.roy?? I thought she was young. Thought she loves 2 Cal kid datz it. Plzzz update soonnn. Waiting 4 The MILAN OF RK AND MADHU n dis janam

Plz send Pm 4 Me 2. I am aravindam100

Waiting desperately .. pls update soon

I have finally unresed my post on page 116.😆

Originally posted by: .MorsDraconis.

AWESOME! LOVED IT!
Very nicely dealt with the sensitive
matters
Maya earns new respect from me...such resilience !
And Rishaan is onto his big brother ki jasoosi ! Lol!
Looks like next chappie will be an emotional read. Cant wait to see Rudra's reactions. Just spectacular!

Originally posted by: Ni33

I'm so sorry for unresing this late. I had an exam I had to study for that I wrote yesterday.

That's alright. I hope your exam went well.

But read the update and it was incredible.

Thank you so much!

I figured something happened with Maya in her past. But the past that was revealed, was both expected and unexpected. I had a hunch it would be going in that direction, but I didn't expect that it would be the same man that keeps annoying Rishaan with his offers. It made me think whether or not he would do something similar with him, cause he looks like RK...🤣 But Rishaan would overpower him within a second, unless Shaurya spikes his drink then Rishaan stands no chance...🤣 Unless his PA, Bittuji's daughter comes in and saves him...🤣 Sorry I forgot her name...😆

😲🤣 that would have been very interesting. You have inspired me to write an OS about it. But I won't. 😆

Well anyway, I don't think that Maya's mother killed herself. I think Madhu had it wrong, but who can blame her thinking like that, given how and where she grew up. I think that Shaurya either came back when Madhu went to school and both of them had a heated argument or that Big Joe found out somehow, maybe from Shaurya, that they were staying there and went to get the both of them back in his business. But it all ended in her getting shoved out of the window and people assuming, including her daughter, that she killed herself.

Very interesting theory! And no I cannot say if you are right or wrong. 😆

It took a lot of courage for Maya to reveal such an important and awful piece of her life with someone, and allowing to get herself recorded.

I hope I could pen down her emotions well because yes, it was very difficult for her.

Now over to the three major questions that popped up in my mind while reading this update, other than the sceanrio with Rishaan...😆

Number one: Who is going to kill Shaurya Rathore first? Rishaan or Rudra/RK?🤣 Somehow I am hoping for the second one...😆 I hope Rudra ends him. Cause it would make a lot of sense...Rudra is RK's reincarnation, and there is no way RK would ever allow someone do that to his Biwi. Rudra would torture him to no means...Making Shaurya regret that he was even born...😆

But somehow I Think you are going to write that it's Rishaan who will end him. Because first off, his brother is a lawyer and can protect him. Well, I hope I am not that predictable then. 😆 Second Rishaan feels some bond and feelings for Maya, but doesn't know himself what it is exactly. I still think it's because they are twins and they can feel what the other one is feeling, given the same looks, they are identical twins. Maybe Rishaan also has developed something for Maya. I'm still undecisive about that. Let's see what happens. 😛 Sorry if I am being too cryptic. Can't help it. 😆

Number two: WHat kind of relation does Rudra, Rishaan have with that shrink? There is something that is fishy. I have a feeling it has something to do with the fact her being a mother or lack of it. I can't really decided what could possibly hide behind that. But I am looking forward to read it in the coming updates. I can tell you this much that it will take a long time before I reveal it. 😆

Number three: Actually I have forgotten what three was...😆 I know it was something interesting but can't remember what...😆 If I remember I'll post it.😆

Please do tell. 😆

Just another thing. I loved how you wrote this update. That you didn't show the storytelling right away but at the end, and that to with Rudra watching the DVD. I am so glad you liked it.😃 I'm just missing Rudra's reaction to all of this. I guess you saved it for the next update...😆 You got that right.😉I wonder how will he react... Well I know how...But I mean...Will he stop saying the name Madhubala?😆 Let's see. 😛

And I loved Rishaan reaction when she was done. Perfect. I guess he took that shower to let some frustration out.😆 But when Maya said Shaurya Rathore's name. Impeccable...From confusion to plotting the perfect revenge plan...🤣 I know he plotted...what else could he do...🤣

I am looking forward for the first question to be answered soon...😆 I am so happy you liked that. And yes, something is cooking in his twisted mind. 😆

Even though I cam second, I am probably the last one to comment...😆 Sorry again about that. And I hope you keep your promise...😆

Not quite. Steph was the last one. Lazy she is! 😆

Thanks for the update and for the PM.

You're welcome!!

Looking forward for the next update.😉

Looking forward for your next comment. 😛😆

Originally posted by: Anny90

No words to say anything!
this update has revealed so many things!
past of maya!because of what she is today..
it is really mind BLOW-ing update..
what is the relation of RKs with Mrs.Roy?