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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: .MorsDraconis.

Congrats on the reincarnation of this reincanation story 😃😆...jokes apart it was a great chapter !!!!!!!!
So Maya is unaware of the glimpses of Madhubala she keeps showing...and Rishaan ...I feel for this guy...kahan itni ambition ke saath ladki ko phasaya tha acting ke liye...aur khud hi phas gaya uske complicated life mein 🤣

Rudra's tensions just keep mounting dont then...that Bittuji Rudra scene was awesome...the way Rudra leaves Bittuji flabbergasted and shocked was awesome ...quite an emotional scene.

My favourite how ever was the last scene...Maya is a tough cookie...and Mrs/Dr Roy just got a telling off from her when it comes to Rishbala's love story...loved the way Maya speaks of them...so much fire for something she is not even aware of...and what a way to end it...

the unconsciously done reflex of a past life...a signature...carried over to the present life ...such a small action is gonna have big repercussions. Or so we think 😉...
Again I say...poor Rishaan 🤣

All in all, an enjoyable and awesome chappie ! Looking forward to the next one !

P.S. - only for you, would I deem this place worth my time my Alpha and sistar ! 😆





Hahah! Thank you so much Anki!! 🤗

Yes... Rudra cannot seem to catch a break! 😆 ... and yeah... poor Rishaan.. *sigh* 😆

I am so happy you liked Rudra-Bittuji and Maya-Mrs.Roy scene! 😛

I know! I will be eternally grateful that you blessed my thread and IF with your presence again! 😛

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ..Ananya..

I was missing this story so much that I don't even remember the number of times I've read the previous updates. Thank you for finally updating. Missed you a lot 😊
The update was as usual gripping and am emotional roller coaster. I really like the way you capture the emotional turmoil of characters who are coming in terms with their past while on the same time juggling with their present. It's truly commendable 👍🏼 I love love love the character of Rudra. I'm totally crushing over him 😳
I'm getting worried seeing Rishaan getting so close to Maya. It gives me jitters. Maya signing as Madhubala Rishabh Kundra 😲 oh my God. Has she realised that she is Madhubala? I'm so intrigued. 😉
Continue soon my friend 😃



@Bold- That is the sweetest thing ever! Thank you so much. It means so much. And I am so sorry to keep you waiting. I will try to update as frequently as possible! 😊

I am so happy you are enjoying the journeys of all the characters and the story as a whole. I hope Chapter 17th answered some of your questions... 😃

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: aan-rish

Wow !!! Finally you updated😃

I am really glad to find this update. This is one of my favorite stories. And I really really loved the update. Thank god Rudra got that creepy note from the car and decided to investigate more about it. I am looking forward to know the history behind creep and Maya. I really feel bad for Maya. She is in trouble. She really need an expert help/advice. Loved Rudra Bittuji conversation. And I think Maya also subconsciously aware of her past life otherwise how come she signed as Madhubala Rishab Kundra?? RIishaan is a sweet heart , he is really helping Maya. And this Maya is a tough girl. Its going to be difficult for Rudra to get close to her😛

Once again Thanks for updating Maria. Shall we expect your updates frequently now..



Hey Arya! How are you??

I am so happy that you liked the update. I am so sorry for the delay. I will try not to disappear like that again. Thank you so much for your response.

Yes, Maya is a tough one! You will know more about her in the next update. 😛

I am very happy that you are liking all the characters!! 😃

Keep giving me your feedback, Arya. It means a lot to me.



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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: sanghita0000

OMG!! I can't believe this ...u updated after such a long time...My favourite part is Rudra-bittuji's scene...I loved how Rudra instead of directly telling bittuji about himself , he just left him shocked so that he thinks over it ...Rishaan is trying to help maya , but the closeness between them gives me jitters...It will be a tough job for Rudra to make maya his madhu...I am happy that he found the note in his car...waiting for Rudra to find that creepy guy...Btw can I get more Rudra-Maya scene...Its always so less...





Thank you so much! I am glad you liked the scene between Rudra and Bittuji. About Rishaan and Maya, let's not get ahead of ourselves. Let's see where things go... it might never go the way you are thinking it is going... 😛 About Rudra and Maya... there will be updates when you will only see Rudra and Maya but that cannot happen now... the focus is not on that at this moment... let everything happen in it's own pace.
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome update loved it interesting one cant wait for next update 👏⭐️Tfs for pm 😃😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
want maya to feel for rudr pls
awesome update😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
I finished reading all the parts! I am so intrigued by this story.. Its exam time for me but all I can think of is this fanfic.. I love it!! You are such an amazing writer.. I can't just wait for the next update now.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Could you give us an estimated date of your your next update? Please?
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Posted: 10 years ago
Well i still want Maya to somehow confide in Rudr and not Rishaan.. Rudr was hurt like hell when he asked for his brother...
waiting for the past to be revealed..
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Posted: 10 years ago
Welcome back🤗 Im so happy dat u updated 😃
Awesome n fab .Loved it to bits.❤️
I guess rishaan too knows sumthin abt rudra maya connection wid rk madhubala. I feel dat rishaan wud fall for maya/madhubala ❤️ sometimes i feel like rishaan is RK but i knw its rudra .
why mrs roy said to rishaan : your madhubala RK .
pretty long n awesome update.
cont soon dear👍🏼👏

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