The Superhero Story: Last Part on Page 86

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Okay si as it is I cant stay away from forum for long, so I am back.. though i was still here all this while.. hehe.. so back with this story whch i dont exactly know i should write or not..
but then it has been in my end since long and all through my exams i had this itching in my hands to write it down..
so now i have got time.. here it is.. a bit crazy maybe..
tell me if its not good..
and yes.. i have just started it and still thinking how to go about it...
hope you all like it...



The Superhero Story


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Born on the planet Neptune, he was sent to earth to safeguard
us from the evils of the dark. He had the power of 50 elephants and fire in his
eyes that could burn even iron. Soaring on the arms of the wind, he glided
along the streets of the city to save the civilians from mishaps. The powerful,
the undefeated, the invincible SUPERMAN


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"Why do they have to show him like that?!" Said
Rishabh sitting on his couch as he watched the television." And why does the
superhero have to be from some other planet?! And the hell why do they make him
wear that cape. Who on earth can move around with 4 meters of cloth swinging
behind you that too without any damn use.?! And let me not even get started
with that annoying read underwear.. what
a shame!" he said frustrated as the
frown on his face deepened.


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Just then the doorbell rang. He got up from the couch
grumbling about his laziness and he opened the door. But soon he forgot all of
that and got lost in the beauty of the girl who stood in front.


"Hello! I am your new neighbour. Can I have some
sugar?" She asked in a jolly tone.



"Amm. Yes.. Sugar.." Rishabh said nervously as he
looked around as if the sugar was to pop out from somewhere magically.



"Ohh sorry I was just joking.." she said with a
slight giggle.



"Ohh" Rishabh said smiling.



"No.. but I am really your new neighbour.." she
said nodding her head in affirmative.



" Nice to meet you.." he said smiling not knowing what to say.



"Thank you.. But for now can you help me.. I want to
have contacts of local people like the cablewala, newspaper, milkman etc etc.."
she said rolling her eyes as if tired.



"Ohhh.. sure.". he said as he turned back to find his contacts diary. He
was quite nervous and he didnt know why.
This girl had caused his ground slip away beneath his feet.



"If you dont mind, May I come in while you
search?" She asked.



"Sure.. I am so sorry.. Please come in.." he said
embarrassed at himself for not inviting her in.



"Thanks a lot.. wowww.. looks like you live alone"
she said looking around the drawing room.



"Yeah.." he smiled "how do you know?"



"It wouldn't have been this messy if your wife or
girlfriend stayed with you.." she said in an instant. Rishabh chuckled
hearing her.



"Ohh.. so you like superhero movies!!" She said as
her gaze fell on the tv which still had Superman playing.



"Well.. actually..." Rishabh was about to refuse
when suddenly her attention was focused on the tv.



"Thats my favorite part" she said staring at the
tv.



"You like them? Superhero movies?" He asked
slightly..



"Of course!! Who wont?" She said in a matter of
fact tone.



"Even I like them a lot.. They are so... so.."
Rishabh tried to find some good word for those movies.
"Adventurous.." he came up with a decent word.



"Yeahh.." she said smiling. "Did you get the
numbers?" She asked.



"Yes... here it is.." he said passing her the
paper on which he had written the numbers.



"Thanks a lot.. Mr..." she looked at him in
anticipation.



"Rishabh.. Rishabh Kundra.." he told her.



"Ok so thanks a lot... Mr. Kundra.. And.. I am
Madhubala.. Madhubala Malik" she imitated him and then giggled.



"Madhubaala.. Classy name.." he said with a
naughty shine in his eyes as he tried controlling his laughter hearing that
name. Of course! That wasnt a very normal name. He had least expected to hear
that name except for the legendary actress.



"Yeah.. Yeah.. I know.. Old and boring.." she said
as she walked to the door.



"Boring? Not at all.. In fact it sounds way too
interesting" he said genuinely.



"Yeah.. you can tease all that you want.. after all you
helped me.." she said with a frown.



"No I am serious.." he said to her.



"Ohh.. Thats so sweet of you.." she smiled at him
lovingly and Rishabh's heart skipped a few beats.



"Anyways bubye.." she said waving her hand.



"Will see you soon.." Rishabh said. Madhu smiled
at him and went away while Rishabh closed the door.



As soon as the door closed in a flash Rishabh disappeared
only to appear at the far end of the room the next second.
"Woohhooo" he said as he punched his punchjng bag with almost the
speed up of light one after the other, to vent out the excitement that had built
in him on meeting her. He swayed in the air around the whole living room as he
picked up the clothes and other things and kept them on the place in a flash.
"Messy room!! No more..." he screamed in excitement. He pouted his
lips as he blew air on the shelf and there blew a wind which cleared the dust.



He swayed all the way through the living room in the arms of the air and landed infront of the whole glass wall of his room. "Madhubaala... Ahaan" he said with a smirk as he
stood watching the black sky shimmering with the light
of the stars and the moon.



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Part 2


Okay.. so this is a bit crazy.. heehee... do i need to say that please comment... And yes.. i dont know which planet Superman was from.. so sorry for that Neptune part...





Part 3
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Part 5
Part 6


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Part 8
Part 9
Part 10
Part 11
Part 12

Part 13
Part 14
Part 15
Part 16
Part 17
Part 18
Part 19
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Love-Blossoms thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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firstly welcome back kat
hope ur exams went well n honestly i missed ur stories a lot
yayyy i m first on ur new story befkre pm only reserved my place lol crazy it is

okay so a superhero story
something new but wen i read title i felt rk wld be superhero lol
but then u showed that he was cribbing abt them
quite interesting as guys like all this to impress their girls but our rk doesnt though he had to lie to his lady love haha
it was amazing
so in first meeting only he is smitten by her n i m.sure she is too
amazing start
plss do continue it i m luking foward to reading it
Edited by NehaVdian - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice maahn !! They are neighbours it sounds cool !! Nice update !! Thanks for da pm !!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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This was one great and one surprising update.👏😆
When I got the PM, I was over ecstatic cause you have begun a new story.😳😆 And to be honest the title caught me off guard and it was also the first shock for me.😆 Soon enough you will know why.😆
The second shock which was the biggest one in the entire first part for me, was reading the first paragraph. Yes reading that pararaph was something. You will soon enough know what that something was.😆
I kept going no, no, no, no, no, no, no, no, no, no. Please, please, please do not make RK the Superman. Please.😆 Of course after composing myself after remembering Lubu's OS Only For You. I had a little laughing fit to be honest, remembering that. 😆 Yes Lubu if you are reading this, I will never forget that OS and my comments. 😆 Then, after taking a deep, deep breath I read the second paragraph. And it was a relief to know that it was a movie RK watched.
Now the reason for my reaction is, well Lubu already knows this.😆 I am putting it simple. I am like RK in this update. The difference is, I am a bit worse than him. There is almost no pleasing me in the supernatural or superhero department. And actually I can't believe I am writing this or that I know this. I promise you all the unnecessary facts or anything else are still stuck in my brain. 😆 Like this one. Superman comes from the planet Krypton that is located in a different solarsystem. He is a man of steel, even bullets bounces off of him. Only thing that could actually hurt him is kryptonite. The only reason I know any of the superhero facts is quite simpe, they stood in the way for my cartoons that I used to watch when I was little. 😆 Well they always put one of those superhero cartoons in between my favorites. I always had to wait for Batman or Justice League to finish so I could watch Looney Tunes.😆 And even when I was older, I had to wait for Lois & Clark or Smallville to finish so I could watch Married with Children. It was always those superhero shows that were in my way.😆 And unfortunately it's the same deal with those movies.🤢 Except for Green Lantern, Superman and The Avengers, those I watched on my own. I promise you there wasn't a fast enough fastforward button for them.🤣 I did enjoy Christopher Nolan's Batman triology. But mostly the last one The Dark Knight Rises. Okay of the topic. My point is, me and superheroes are a big no.😆 I can't emphazise enough on that.😆 So when I read the second paragraph I felt a huge, huge relief.😆 Thank you. I honestly couldn't know how I would be able to read this if it was a superhero. Wait. Please tell me this isn't like the movie with Uma Thurman and Luke Wilson, My Super ex-Girlfriend. Please. I will read anything you write, but I honestly I won't be able to give any comments. Not just because it is timeconsuming and I have a lot of studies, which is like 95 % of my reason. These comments ends on practically every story from now on, because of that. Okay but the other 5 % are because I wouldn't know what to comment on this things. I can't imagine RK flying around savings babies from a burning building. I just can't. 😆 I couldn't do that with Clark Kent aka Superman. And I probably can't do that with RK. But it's your call. I will read whatever you write.😳 I just need to read something of yours.😳
Okay, after the major shock laid down and I read the rest.😆 Well it was quite funny. RK lying to Madhu that he likes those superhero movies. Madhu inquires wheather or not is he single. Well in an indirect way. 😆 She said that his place wouldn't be messy if he had a girlfriend or wife. And if that wasn't true he could have corrected her. So she is as interested in him as he is in her. The difference is, since we had RK's POV, we know he is very interested in her. 😆
But then at the end another shock came. How can I put this?
Okay, don't take me wrong but RK behaved like a girl.😆 He swayed around cleaning his place because Madhu told him it was a mess. We can put it in a different way, it was love at first sight.😆 Sorry, but all of this, I mean the last two paragraphs, were pretty girly for me. 😆 Now I know some can predict the next thing I would write. Even I would never do that. But what to expect from a girl that do not blush nor cry.😆 Okay, never mind me or my comments. They aren't that important.😆 What is important is what the majority thinks. And even more than that, what you think. That is the key for unlocking the secret door.😆
All in all it was a great update. Even though I didn't expect any of this. Though I would continue to read it, don't ever question that.
Now thanks for this surprisingly new story and for the PM.😆
By the way, I won't be able to write these long comments anymore due to me being buzy. Like stated above. But I will read and comment. Don't worry about that.😆
And I hope you aced your exams Maryam.😉
Edited by Ni33 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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hey! u r back with a bang baby!! i hope u did ur exams well!!
wow... super hero story!! great!! u know what i was waiting to read such kind of stories & i infact requested one of my fav. writer to show my Rk as super hero with super natural power & i finally got it from u!!! i'm so happy!!
interesting start!!
well, rishbala encountered in fisrt chappy itself!! neighbors too... madhu likes super heros so if Rk is a superhero then no issue for madhu, as she will still love him LOL better show madhu with some supernatural powers too... madhu could be a cat woman, a sexy cat womam LOL!!
krish vs kat LOL!! & make sullu a villu LOL & Rishbala fighting against him.
oh i'm so curious to read futher!! update soon dear!!

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Posted: 10 years ago
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congo for the new story
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Posted: 10 years ago
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I. AM. SUPER. EXCITED. FOR. THIS. STORY.
wow wow wow amazing idea
Cont. soon eagerly waiting for the next part
Yeah I agree its crazy but at the same time its different n interesting
Sometimes craziness is also necessary u know...😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
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OMG ... this story has such a cute beginning! I love their meeting .. both have a great sense of humor .. please continue soon!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Congratz fr da new story
So rishabh is the saviour sent frm neptune fr saving da people on earth.
Rishabh tu pehli mulawat me hi deewana hogaya,interesting n amazing
continue soon
thanx fr pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
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I love all your stories. Please continue soon 😊

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