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Brilliant update, yammy 👏
Loved it...😛
So u have nicely justified madhu's act...👏 u have showed her so strong & she is no longer guilty of what she did to rk...great!!😳
But i m always biaded when it comes to my Rk 😆 so please let me defend him...😉
She is a TRICKSTER undoubtly...
Yes...she was the one who came knocking his door for something or other... She was d one acted cutely infront of him...she made crappy food for him & had fake tears when it didnt come out well but he like a fool not wanting to hurt her he ate that crap... She was d one who came climbing behind him on his ducati... If she was just acting then why she showed so much love in her eyes?? Why she fooled him?? What is wrong in rk asking "you will do or have done d same to other men??" Yes...she tricked him for her job...what guarantee that she wont do d same with other man?? All she cares is her duty right?? No care for others feelings?? I agree men always like to be a saviour...a dominant too...which i hate in them...but here madhu showed herself vulnerable...so cute sweet little girl... She fooled rk & hurt his heart... She could have been her ownself...a self dependent girl... & still she could have attracted rk & i m sure he would have loved for her gutsy boldy brazen nature... He could have fallen for her true self...but she only showed herself cute to him...its her fault for being judgemental that all men like such girl... See he is adoring d other side of madhu now...seeing her as agent malik...rk is really proud of her... All he expected from her was loyalty... Trust is something which takes a life time to built but a second to shatter... He trusted her fake acts & loved her but he fooled him... He is no way at fault in hurting her back... If she wants to be loyal to her job & serve her nation she shld have acted truthful to every citizen of the nation...no actually one who wants to serve d nation or protect people she shld be fair & truthful to evry human being... She could have directly knocked his door & made him understand saying she is from raw & she knows everything abt his superpowers & asked him to join...well, i know he wont easily accept it but he neither now accepted on his own will...he was forced to join that they could have done earlier too... If she want to know abt him...abt his powers & thats why she got close to him... Thats too bad of her... She could have been a stalker Lol instead of being a trickster Lol... Okay enough of my blabbering... I really feel madhu is at fault not rk... She hurt him already & now she is hurting him more... But she was right at one place...yes he is a fool...a big damn fool who fall prey for her cute sweet antics...
Hmm... She is so proud that she is a self dependent girl... I like it...but one day she will depent on her SUPERHERO!!
He never accused for any fake reasons...he taunted her with what all fake things she had done to trap him... But still he got worried seeing madhu walk in rain & hurried to know that she was fine...thats bcos he loved her madly but yet again she hurt him...
But frankly i m enjoying their hurt-hurt game... I want them to hurt each other more with their venom spitting words then only they will realise d depth of their love...
Great going yammy...u r just awesome dear...
Thanks for d pm...
Will wait for next update eagerly...
P.s... Yammy i m sorry if anyway i have offended u or ur characters... I really like rk more than madhu not only in this story but in serial too...but thats not d only reason for defending him...he is actually right in accusing her...😳
P.p.s ... Sorry... my comment went long & i feel bored to insert emos in btn each line...so i left as it is...😆
Edited by madhurish - 10 years ago