The Superhero Story: Last Part on Page 86 - Page 25

awesome update

Originally posted by: anish17

awesome update

use sikky more in this story

its very fun to read abt him

thanks for the pm

yeah.. i think of using him as RK's right hand.. Bittuji doesnt seem to belong with RAW right? 😆
he would be too chubby for that😆

wow awesome.

brilliant update.rk showed a trick n sikky was amazed.

Beautiful update, feeling bad for both R.K and Madhu but as they say time is the best medicine so i hope in the due course their relationship comes on track, nice to see Sikky also.

Continue soon waiting for the next update

Great going Maryum..at least Madhu confessed her feelings. Plz continue soon..

Part 10

"Agent RK sir.. It would be RK" RK corrected with a slight smirk on his face.

"Sure.. that sounds fancy.." the general said with a slight laugh.

"So Agent RK.. I suppose we should assign you teams.. Well obviously your team would change according to the missions but its kind of a default unit.. As you are well acquainted with Agent Malik and she is a very efficient employee here.."

"Yes.. Very efficient for sure. " RK said with a genuine smile on though only Madhu knew what he hinted on. She looked away not liking the tone of his.

"Yes.. so I think I would put you in her team.." the general declared thoroughly happy.

"Excuse me General.." RK interrupted him midway. "I wont work under her.."

"Agent RK.. I know you might be having some personal off and ons with each other.. but please you will have to keep all of that out of your profession. If you are working here then.."

"Excuse me sir.. Let me remind everyone in this room that I would have been the last one to join RAW.. so all those usual threats and reminders that if I want to be here I have to do some random shit.. wont work with me.. I wont work under her and I am adamant on that.." he said trying to suppress her anger as much as he could.

Madhu stared at him as anger started building in her too. Why was he making everything such a big deal? and whats the need of being so damn rude?

"Yes sir.. I second him.." Madhu said in a firm voice as she looked straight at RK but he was facing general and paid the least attention to her.

The general looked at the two and shook his head disappointed. "Fine.. as you both wish.." he said. "You both proceed to your cabins.. I would alot you your associate later Agent RK.. I thought I would lessen my work but seems like you both wont let me have an easy breath.." he said sighing as he sat on his chair.

Madhu started to move towards the door.

"Cabin? When am I alotted a cabin?" RK asked confused.

"Ohh.. you dont know yet.. we have your cabin made up since a few weeks now.. " the general said calmly then looking up with a naughty smile. "Yes we knew we would have you here eventually.. So you take rest for sometime as it had been a hard day for all of us.. then we would place your appointments for all the other formalities.. Agent Malik, please show him his cabin.." he completed but noticed both of them opening their mouths. "I am not going to bow to all of your banters.. I am a bloody General here.. Now move and that is an order!" He said in a strict tone and both took in a deep breath as they felt that its best they shouldnt bother the old man more.

They both were walking around the corridoor now as Madhu was taking him to his cabin. All this while RK noticed the confident and measured steps of Madhu. She was in no way the girly and cute Madhu that he knew till the day before. It hurt him even more thinking that the one he loved didnt exist anywhere. Not that he wouldnt love an independent and bold Madhu but he was feeling betrayed that the person whom he gave so much importance didnt even exist anywhere.

"Here.. This is your cabin.." Madhu said in a hard tone as she opened the door. It was a decent sized room with a table and chairs. There was a couch on one side too. He entered and looked around with skeptical gaze.

"Needs a lot of changes.." he said to himself.

"Changes?" Madhu asked confused.

"A free mind animator.. locked in this boring brown coloured cube.." he said shaking his head in disappointment.

Madhu nodded her head as she understood what he meant.

"I wish I had that Interior designer friend of mine.. she would have brilliantly transformed it.." RK said eyeing Madhu through the corner of his eyes. She looked at him as she remembered that she had lied to him being an interior designer.

"But sigh.." he said letting out his breath dramatically.

"If you need something I would be in the opposite room.." she said as she started to walk off.

"Oh my God.. this has a glass wall and then your cabin on the other side.. I will have to put up with seeing you all day!!" RK exclaimed dramatically.

Madhu looked at him as hurt descended her eyes even when she had been controlling herself since long now. Seeing her RK smirked as if in victory.

"Thank you Agent Malik.." he said in a deep tone as if he meant for that look that she had got on her face now, and Madhu could no longer stand there and hence she walked off.

"I think its going to be fun this way.." he said smirking to himself as he watched her walk away.
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Hey.. so before i gt eggs and tomatoes all over me.. I know this one is too small.. but i couldnt help it.. but I will make up for it by posting the next part tomorrow only.. Sorrryyy..

gah!! Missed my spot...never mind...i ll try my luck next time...

wonderful update yammy...
loved it...
rk & madhu were so funny...funny like small school kids & general looked like their school principal or class teacher... Lol...
rk refusing to work with madhu...lol..how kiddish was that?? it was like teacher pairing two kids in christmas dance but d boy refusing to dance with d girl bcos she bullied him & also she denied to give him candy lol... like wise rk denying to work with her... turning his face against her...not wishing to see her... lol... grow up kiddos...grow up...u r not in pre school...u r RAW agents...lol...
& rk dont forget madhu didnt deny to give u candy...how nicely she offed d close circuit cameras & gave u a CANDY KISS..*winks*
so stop ur tantrums & start romancing with ur raw beauty lol ...
oh lord...when our RAW hero will realise he is still in love with her but trying & failing miserably in hurting her??... i know soon rk will ORDER the general that he will work only with madhu or else he wont...lol...general has become a puppet in rk's hands..lol...i dont know why but i could only imagine bittuji as general lol... anyways...i m enjoying there nokh jokh too!!
hope rk will irritate madhu more using sikky...lol
i felt the update was not too short...it was reasonable in size...if not also no need to apologize ... bcos its not easy to write stories... thanks for this sweet funny update yammy...& also thanks for d pm which would have reached my inbox by now...