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Posted: 10 years ago
#41
u r facing a writers block
soon it will be ok
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Posted: 10 years ago
#42
please continue the story
this is an amazing concept
u r doing an excellent job
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Posted: 10 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: rima4ever

please continue the story
this is an amazing concept
u r doing an excellent job



Thanks a lot dia... May be u r right... i will try my best dear.. 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#44
Very cool, unique, and fun concept! Please don't stop writing this one.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: madhurish

1st to comment in your story after villainous love!! feeling great!!
i won't consider ur reply to Ni as 1st comment & according to me this is the 1st comment after ur update!! okay?

haha...hilarious update!! i loved it!!
i like this crazy shameless madhu LOL!!
uffo.. for a coffee maker she made such a scene but i guessed that something funny she is asking for & nothing serious!!
hmm...hero is a superhero!! why can't he show some special powers & attract the beauty?? LOL
i thought he will deliberately shook the chair & make her fall in his arms but no he behave like a gentleman apart from ogling her LOL!!
hmm...why i feel madhu also as some super natural powers & she is also one like Rk & not a normal human?? even she asked him to stretch his hands to talk the box so is it just for fun or she seriously blurted out??
hmm...y she is behind him like seriously knocking his door every know & then?? did she know abt him?? is she making him fall in her trap?? is she in evil gang?? then later she will realize what she is doing will end up affecting the world & only Rk is right & support him & both super powers will together defeat the evil may be sullu LOL?? or she is just a normal girl & get her life time surprise that she have fallen in love with a super hero??

umm... dear, its a nice story & nice concept & sure u'll make it interesting & better!! we don't expect hollywood range so don't worry!! we are here to support u & we enjoy reading ur stories so please take ur time & give us update but never stop it in middle...infact u r doing Good!!



hey.. thanks a lot... ofcourse yours is the first comment as i had resed the other 3 in the beginning..😆
you really helped me... I will try to get something out of my dumb mind tomorrow... 😆
i also dont like leaving something in the middle... it makes me feel utterly frustrated with myself..

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Posted: 10 years ago
#46

Originally posted by: k.atrina75



hey thanks for the honest review... even I am not much of a superhero person.. I dont know whyI got this crazy stupid idea and now m stuck.. 😆
you must have known my knowledge about superheroes by seeing the planet of Superman even written wrong... 🤣 I mean who on earth can not know that... so here I am! Maryam.. and even then I decided to touch this... Stupid Me 😆
waise my story wasnt going to be that saviour superhero with a journalist GF running behind..
but whatever it was.. I dont know how to continue...🥱

First of I feel flattered that you resed three posts and one of them was for replying my comment. Feel like the king of the World. 🤣 That's wrong. I am a girl, can't be a King, have to be a Queen. 😆 Sorry, had a Titanic moment. 🤣 Sorry Sudha. But I am happy. 😆 And yes you are first to comment. Congratz! 🥳
Okay, I am glad you appreciated my comment. Even though when I read through it might have been a little too much at some point. But as I said, the only thing that matters is what you think and what the majority thinks. Don't pay attention to one silly persons comments.😆 I will try to be a little less of a harsh critic on this update. Don't take me wrong I like reading your stuff. But this all, well I have already said so there's no point writing it twice, right.
This idea isn't crazy nor stupid. And since you said that yourself aren't a superhero person, maybe you are in a writers block because you are trying too hard to write something. Cause you don't want to disappoint your readers. You are setting way to much expectations on yourself. I know this is an easy thing to say but just let it go. Let it go do something else and it will come to you. Like Isaac Newton and gravity. But I don't think an apple on your head will help. 😆 Okay jokes apart. Relax, listen to some music, watch a movie for inspiration. Maybe even a superhero movie. Watch the Batman triology. Those others superhero movies are 🤢. My view of them anyway, maybe others think that they are okay.😆 What I am trying to say is just relax and let go, don't stress yourself. Inspiration for an update or a story doesn't come with a snap of a finger. And I know you already know that, so just relax.
Don't worry, no one is holding that against you. I am holding myself against that, just knowing that. 🤣
Not stupid you. It takes courage to touch a field that you know absolutely nothing about. And I know you know something about superheroes. Hey how else did you mention Neptune?😉 Neptune is the second name for Poseidon, one of the 12 Greek Gods in the Greek Mythology. He is called God of Sea. Maybe you can elaborate on that. RK having some connection with the Greek mythology. Since he himself ridiculed that superhero movie and how Superheroes always are displayed that they come from a different planet. And those Greek Gods were considered as Superheros at that old time. He can be one great great great great grandchild from one of the Greek Gods.😆 I don't know I am just bouncing of with ideas to help you out. Feel free to toss them aside like one nasty cockroach. And if you do decide to continue on this path, then my suggestion is that, if you don't know much about the Greek Gods search online about them. There is Hercules, Ares the God of War, Afrodite, Zeus and many more. And choose one of them for inspiration. Even the complete Gods could fly. Semi Gods, half human half God can't fly. At least according to the mythology and the shows.😆 Yes I read Greek Mythology in school and watched Xena and Hercules in the morning waiting for my cartoons to begin. 🤣 As I said useless information is still stuck in my brain.😆 If you ever feel that you want ask or uncertain or a person to ball ideas feel free to PM me and I'll help the best I can. I have the knowledge, but the rest.😆
Oh by the way. If you do choose to go into the field o the Greek Mythology then I recommened that you either Watch or read about Percy Jackson. It's a modern adaption of the greek Mythology in today World. The Movies are based on the written novels. Yes another fact I desperatley want to forget and wonder how come I know this. 😆 It's about a boy, Percy Jackson, who lives in US, forgotten where in Us, with his mother. He doesn't know that he is a semi-God. Then on a schooltrip or something he discovers he is the son of Poseidon. Then blah blah blah. Well there is a suggestion. Then you have Hancock with Will Smith. Also a Superhero and something movie. Then there is the movie with Bruce Willis and Samuel Jackson Unbreakable. About a man, Bruce Willis, who can survive everything without a scratch or something like that. Considered as a superhero from a guy. This guy, Samuel Jackson, is obsessed with comics and is fragile as a Farberge egg. If you choose not to make RK the typical superhero. I suggest if you haven't watched or heard about these movies. Read about them online. It will save you a lot of time.😆
We already know what these two do for a living. And I can tell you maybe RK lied. Yes I know lying is never good and it doesn't give a good impression of you. Especially if you are a superhero. But maybe he have forgotten to mention he got laid off, because he was too cynical with those superhero ads or comics.😆 And is looking for a new job. Again only a suggestion. If you want to avoid a Superman concept. 😆 As for the superhero part, if he saves someone or something like that. I have no suggestions what so ever. You know where I stand.😆 It's your story. But I can tell you right now. I will laugh like an idiot reading about him saving a cat from a tree using his superpowers.🤣
Okay over to comment this update. It was one great and hilarious update. Still uncertain of RK's character. I mean he has powers, it's obvious. He like Madhu also very obvious. He is handsome, very obvious. And like Clark Kent he behaves like a girl. 🤣 Sorry I couldn't help it. It bugs me when he behaves like that. Then again, I emphasize MY OPINION, probably not the majority's opinion. I Always thought of superheroes like strong people, sure might be a little dorky at some point. But that girly. Wow. He hopes she falls so he can catch her.😆 He shows the care and plays the gentlmen like almost every superhero does. Good. Now I am stopping. 😆 Just gonna say. Wow! Madhu is like another person I know when it comes to coffee. Won't reveal who. 🤣 Just saying I make coffee every day, and I never drink coffee, never had a cup. 🤣 Tasted one time and out it Went. 🤣 By the way we drink turkish coffee. Not that coffee from some machine or something. I have never used one of those, wouldn't even know how to use. Poor people have to drink strong coffee when they visit me, and that too, not from a machine. 🤣
Thanks for the update and for the PM.
Hope I could be to any help. PM me if there is anything you like to throw some ideas or get some information about.😉
Edited by Ni33 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#47
That was a cute part.
Authoratative madhu n gentleman RK.
I'm not much into superhero stories but this seems interesting.
Don't give it up, you are very good writer.
Take your time.
Happy Diwali!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#48
It was cute
RK is a SUPERHERO!!!!😲😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
#49
super wriing
again i luv the thought
plz plz pl z cont
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Posted: 10 years ago
#50
nice update
plz continue the story

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