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Posted: 10 years ago
Don't want them both hurting each other.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Their passionate love hate relationship will start now i feel.
ananya2010 thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
Eager to know how these two are going to behave in the office
ananya2010 thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
Story is getting very interesting with each passing day.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Continue soon, waiting for the next update.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Is this girl for real or not
Seriously wat independency she is talking abt. Wen she n her team r dependent on rks super powers to save the nation .
Had hai yaar after doing everything she is putting all the fuss on serving nation like seriously did the citizens came or pm came to ask her to pretend infront of rk to serve nation .
Itni hi independent hai to y the f**k she hided her profession if her motives were noble she shd have come infront of him in her real self he didnt asked her to come as a damsel in distress so that he cld act as a knight in shining armour
She really needs to get her facts straight before accusing him of anything if he wants he cld easily go n file a case against her n her general for kidnapping him frm his house n putting him like a prisoner in their office n for forcely making him do things
Which he is not doing i wonder y maybe bcoz he has some dignity n respect for her which she clearly dnt have for him otherwise before categorizing him like others she wld think twice bcoz she is the one who pretended not him so generally he will find it pretendence only
Who knows whether she is truthful or pretending n secondly Independency comes with honesty not with pretendence bala needs to know that in first place .
She is getting offended by his words so how much offence she has caused him by her actions she shd realise that first before opening her mouth bcoz no matter wat situation is a lie is a lie it doesnt become a truth . N wat if rk wld have done the same thing with her i bet she wld have slapped the hell out of the poor guy for breaking her heart bcoz her heart is heart n his heart is coal mine ki dukaan n tab everyone wld say tit for tat but abhi ppl say rk is doing wrong by saying all this kyun bhai y is he wrong for protecting himself frm enemies n another heartbreak
N i i have learned that frm this forum only
Hint: rk lieing abt his love
Remained a lie for this forum till end
So in same way madhus lie will remain lie only

P.s i m commenting after long time so sorry kat for being too lazy but just u know u r awesome writer n i love ur stories by heart but this update really made me comment bcoz i cant keep my thoughts to myself n sudha di i agree with u fully .

Whoever plan to defend bala on my comment soch samajhkar quote karna bcoz its me not a sane person i m whole heartedly insane lol
Edited by Love-Blossoms - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
wow...awesome update dear.
nicely said by madhu.
waiting for next update.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Amazing updatem both hurt each other and finally madhu fade up. I hope rk will soft towards her now. I really liked the shooting scene
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Posted: 10 years ago
gr8 parts..
cont.soon


thanks for pm dear,,
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Posted: 10 years ago
Part 14

As Madhu now was working on this new project since past one month, RK was undergoing different training sessions and orientation programs. He somewhat still couldn't connect himself to the whole thought process that those people around him had. He was a patriot for sure but maybe that level of devotion was something new for him.

Madhu and him had started to mostly ignore each other. She would hardly meet him in the eyes and so was the case with him until that day.
Madhu stood in the General's cabin.
"Agent Malik.. We need to send our delegates to the Delhi branch. They are all set for the new mission.." The general spoke.

"Yes Sir.. I am ready for it.." she said confidentally.

"I know you are.. And I know you are studying about this mission since long now.. but the agency expects Agent RK's services now.." he said seriously.

"But he can't go on this mission Sir.. its dangerous..!" Madhu intervened.

"Yes it is dangerous and that is the reason he is expected.. he can handle situations more swiftly than any of our agents.." The general argued.

"I can understand the reason for this inmense confidence being put in Agent RK and his capabilities but we should not forget that these people are anti nationals. And they are strong and dangerous. RK doesn't know much about them. Granted he has powers which surpass our capabilities but still he should be given time for a background study.." she argued. Somewhere she was scared for him. She knew he wasn't ready for such a mission.

"Hmm.. I will talk to the superiors regarding it.." The general nodded his head thoughtfully. "But then who would report there as of now.."

"I am ready Sir.. I have read about them, I have a plan mapped out.." she said getting back to her stern

The general nodded his head in appreciation. "Be ready then Agent.."

The building of their office had 9 floors. The ground floor covered all area but the subsequent floors had rooms and cabins infront of which was a railed corridoor. The middle of the building was continuous right upto the 9th floor.

Madhu stood on the corridor of 7th floor as she took support from the railing. RK was on the ground floor as he walked with Sikky.

"RK, the commander may make us join the Mission" Sikky said to him casually.

"Mission?! So soon?" He asked astonished.

"Yup.. he says you are ready for it.. and he says all that is already in your reflexes." Sikky said smiling cheekily.

RK rolled his eyes. "But nobody told me a thing yet."

"yeah its the unofficial still.. He has to get the approvals of the superiors.." Sikky said nodding his head.

RK suddenly heard crank from far off. It seemed distant and slight. He looked around but noone seemed to notice the sound or rather it was too faint for any other normal ear to notice it. But he could.

"Did you hear it?" RK asked getting defensive.

"What do we have to hear?" Sikky asked confused.

"The sound.. Of metals.." RK said as he swiftly looked around to search what the sound could be but everything seemed to be normal. It came once again and immediately he turned his face up and noticed the railing of 7th floor getting detached. He looked about to see Madhu taking its support and busy in a phone conversation totally unaware. Another movement on the opening joint and the railing could give way. All his senses got evoked. In a swift motion he thrust himself up in the air. Everyone around were suddenly astonished to see such a sight. Sikky's eyes grew wide as he saw RK ascending in the air straight up. But all that RK could see was Madhu in danger. He hated using his powers not to mention showing them off but now all he could think was to save his Madhu.

He reached her and in a swift motion pushed her inside as he too fell along with her, just in time that the metal rod gave way and started to fall below. Sikky was the one to understand it first and he quickly screamed to make everyone leave the middle area of the floor so the rod doesn't hurt anyone.

As everyone else was dumbstruck either because of the heavy rod just falling off from such a height or because of seeing a man just fly 7 floors, Madhu was stuck between the floor and RK.

"What happened?" She asked stunned...

"You should pay more attention.. what if i wasn't here now?" He almost screamed in anger.

"How am I supposed to know that such a thing could happen..?" She replied back defending herself.

"Yeah so let anything happen and not take any precautions.." he said sarcastically.

"Okay calm down.." she said with a slight smile touching his chest in a gesture to console him. She felt good seeing him worry for her like that.

"What if I wasn't here and you had fell down from here..? How were you so engrossed in a call that you didn't hear or feel the rod descending.?!" He said yet again. His heart was thumping hard and he couldn't help but fear the consequences if he hadn't saved Madhu.

"I know you will always be there to save me.." Madhu said with a slight smile and a strange confidence which made RK loose track and he just stared right in her eyes.

For a few seconds it was all silence for them and they stared into each other's eyes. That's when Sikky came running. "Are you both fine?" He asked as he ran to them not realizing that he was intruding their perfect eye lock.

"Yeah we are good.." RK said nodding still lying on top of her.

"You need to get off of me.." Madhu said in a pressured tone so only RK hears it.

"Huh?" He looked at her.

"Yeah she is right.. I have climbed up 7 floors and you still haven't got up from the floor..." Sikky said shaking his head at his laziness. "Is anyone of you hurt? Should I help?" He asked coming closer.

RK realized what she meant and quickly stood up. Madhu too stood up and starightened herself.

"Ohh.. both of you are fine.." Sikky said relaxed seeing them.

"We should get all the attachments checked i suppose.. This was way too dangerous.." Sikky said shaking his head disappointed.

"Yes you are right.." Madhu said nodding her head thoughtfully.

"And besides you should loose some weight.." RK said to her..

She turned sharply to him astonished. "Yeah.. you are so heavy that the rod couldn't bear your weight and gave way.." RK said biting his lip to prevent laughing.

"It must be loose okay.. I am not heavy.." Madhu said looking at him with narrowed eyes.

"Yeah.. you are not.." RK said shaking his head while still pursing his lips.

"Yes.. Thats right.." Madhu said defending herself thoroughly annoyed at him.

RK nodded his head and walked off laughing while Madhu huffed in anger.

"Never saw her like that.." Sikky said while walking along with RK.

"How?!" RK asked confused.

"Being teased and defending herself on silly jokes..." Sikky said with a slight smile.

RK smiled sadly. He didnt know if his Madhu was locked in her or she wasn't anywhere.

"Actually noone dared to act that friendly with her..." Sikky said clearing his own doubt as he nodded his head thoughtfully.

"Yeah.. maybe.." RK shrugged off.

"Do you think she is friendly with you because you have powers?" Sikky asked him confused.

RK looked at him for a second as his own mind started working on that thought. His heart said it wasnt the case. She behaved that way with her because they both had spent a lot of good and cherishable time together but his brain said that Sikky was right. She treated him differently because he had powers and that was all that interested her to get close to him.

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hey friends.. sorry for being late on this.. but this one is a bit difficult for me.. Hope this is upto the mark too..

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