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Posted: 10 years ago
wonderful update a ah rk he is too good love the way he treat madhu nd care her. he is falling for madhu very fastly. how he eats whole food is just awesome.even though it was yuck but didn't express in front of coz he don't want to hurt madhu. nd madhu she is so bubbly. they both r falling for each other. I hope they realises there love nd confessed each other. waise thanks for d pm do update asap
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Posted: 10 years ago
woww... he ate her awesful food...woww...loev is in teh air..
I am waitign for the revealation or first confession...how she will know he is a superhero..



ohh my Guess even Madhu has powers lolzz..my mind is kinda tripsy hahahhah

waitign for next sweetyšŸ‘šŸ‘
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Posted: 10 years ago
Loved the update, pl continue.
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Posted: 10 years ago
WOW!! beautiful update dear...loved it
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Posted: 10 years ago

Part 5

"Rishabh.." Madhu said to him as they sat on the balcony staring at the sky. It had been a routine since the last three months. Not staring at the sky but yes, being together..

At first it used to be because of some or the other reason but now it had become a habit for them. After returning from work either RK would go to her place or she would come to his.

"yes.." Rishabh said giving all his attention to her. He loved whenever she called him by his name. he had started to feel this strong urge to be with her all his life. He had now started to believe that it wasn't all just infatuation after all. It was really love or if not then surely it would develop in due course of time. He was ready to discover all the new feelings for her and with her.

"I was thinking why don't we go somewhere.. I mean for an outing.." she said with a nervous smile,

"hmmm like where?" he asked her thinking to himself,

"I don't know.. I have gotten so bored sitting in these rooms.. I feel like a robot.. Going to work and coming back... Shouldn't we plan some outing.." she said.

"I think you are right.. So where do you want to go?" he asked.

"Maybe for a dinner?" she said hesitantly.

"I think that would be good.." he smiled.

"okay then today... I know a banquet nearby... we would go there.." she said excitedly and RK smiled at her.

In the evening, RK was standing outside Madhu's door. He knocked the door and waited for her to come out. He was getting nervous for the first time to meet her. He had decided that today he would confess his love. He wanted to make her his. Till the end of the world. In the past few months he had felt that even when he was with her practicaly all day but he couldn't get enough of her. . But before that there was something even more important. He would have to tell her about his, His reality! That he was not a normal human. Only then would Madhu decide if she truly wants to be with him or not.

Madhu opened the door and RK fell short of words. She looked so beautiful. His breath caught up and he just coudnt even blink. She looked so beautiful in her blue knee length dress. "Hi.." Madhu said smiling nervously.

Well, that was a change. Madhu was even more nervous than he was. Does she expect that he would confess his love?

They both were quiet as they headed to the garage. RK went over to his bike when Madhu called out.

"not on your bike!" she screamed.

"why?" RK asked onfused because Madhu was the one running to his bike first but tofay she was refusing it.

"its dark and all my dress and hair would be a mess by the time we would reach there.." she stated the obvious.

"oh.. then?" he looked at her confused.

"we would go in my car.." she said smiling while RK stood there frowning at her.

"don't worry.. you drive.." she said grinning cheekily.

RK nodded his head and almost relaxed visibly.

They were driving to the banquet when RK decided to break the big news on her.

"Madhu.." he said softly.

Madhu who was way too nervous suddenly jerked out of her thoughts. "yeah..?" she said.

"I wanted to tell you something.." RK said smiling nervously. He couldn't get anymore anxious. He was very afraid of his reality to let it know to any other person.

"yes.." she said with wide eyes..

"its about me.. something very important.. Something that you need to know even before we discuss about our future.." he said.

"Rishabh! Turn left" Madhu said suddenly.

"what?" RK looked at her baffled.

"yes left..!" she said with all her attention on the road.

"Is everything all right?" he asked confused.

"yes just turn left.." she said angrily.

"but the banquet is the other way.." he was even more confused by her behavior.

"I don't care.." she said

"Okay.. as u say.." RK said as he turned the other way. He was so confused seeing her.

"Where do you want to go then?" He asked her not knowing which way he was driving now if they were not going to the banquet.

"I want to go home.." she said in a strange robotic tone. As if she meant something deeper.

"home? But it was you who wanted an outing right?" he asked her confused.

"but now I want to go home.." she said adamantly.

"okay.. Fine.." RK said almost upset at her strange behavior. He turned the car back and the both headed to their building.

They both entered the corridor and Madhu straight way went to her house as if not wanting to be there anymore. She felt so distant today that he felt it wasn't his Madhu.

RK breathed in his frustration and went to the balcony to calm his nerves at this sudden change of behavior from her. He expected her to be little nervous but she was getting way too anxious. But the reason of his frustration was that she was not telling him the matter and just taking all the burden alone.

After sometime he calmed down and decided to inquire Madhu about what was bothering her so much suddenly. He decided to go and talk to her that if she isn't ready for a relationship then he can wait further. And even he wasn't asking for a relationship but rather he wanted to tell her about himself.

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Posted: 10 years ago

First! 🤣 On all three stories!!šŸ˜†

Great update Maryam! I think Madhu drank some tea instead of coffee before their date...🤣 It made her nuts...🤣
Thanks for the update and PM...
Real sorry for the short comment!
Edited by Ni33 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
You know what saddens me yammy? Finding out that you updated and not being able to grab the first spot 🤣 I was hopeful for my ultimate victory 🤣 Comgrats Ni...congrats šŸ˜†

Now coming to the update...a date gone wrong šŸ˜†
What just happened to Madhu? Did she need some coffee before the date? 🤣 that's why she ran back home to make some 🤣 At least she didn't go with RK on the Ducati...I've got the golden opportunity šŸ˜†

RK...tell her you are a superhero and save her from falling off a tall building. Then she will have no choice but to fall for you šŸ˜† Please don't make him look like Superman 🤣 I hate those effing tights 🤣 Make him appear more like Krrish or something šŸ˜†

At least I got third place šŸ˜† that makes me happy...continue soon yammy...can't wait for the next update 😃
Edited by Abhiya4life - 10 years ago
varshajoshi17 thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
What happened to adhu suddenly?????
superb update
Jyoraj thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
Why is Madhu upset?
nice but short update.
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Posted: 10 years ago
what happened to madhu?
plz plz update soon :P

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