Manan FF - The Possessive Brothers (note on pg 69) (Discontinued)

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Prologue:


Two girls were going across the corridors of the famous space academy in Mumbai...one girl was a cute and chirpy bubbly girl and also modern..and the other girl was her best friend cum sister and slim girl who wears Indian dresses...they are friends from childhood ...they were going towards their class...but suddenly both got a pull..one went in one class and the other in another...

Man:what did I tell you...not to talk to boys...what were you doing with him?

Girl rolls her eyes and says:so what..main jis ke saath bhi jaon..u can't tell me what to do or not..understood!

The man pulled her with a jerk and started digging his nails in her white milky skin...making it red

Man:yes I can and I will..u r mine...

Girl:u don't own me or something

Man:yes I do

Girl:Manik ..I'm a human for God sake..not some toy!

Man:u r mine...Nandini only mine!...meri nazre 24 ghante tumhare upar hain..tum kya karti ho kya nahi..so don't even think of ditching me..the consequences won't be good...

Nandini:Omg I am scared of The Manik Malhotra...this is the biggest joke of the 21st century!😕

Manik😡:urgghh...stop talking to me like that dammit...can't u be ever nice to me..

Nandini:let me think...No!😛...ab hato mere raaste se...

Manik pulled her with a jerk and slammed his lips on hers...nandini's eyes widened in shock...she was pushing him but all went in vain..as no one can win against this muscular monster!

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Girl:tumhara masla kya hai?

Man:are baby I was missing you...so I came

Girl:but I was not...ab hato...hamari class shuru hone wali hai..hum late ho rahe hain

Man:acha..class main jana hai ya apne kisi special se Milne? 😡

Girl:Cabir hamara us ke saath koi relation nahi hai..wo bus hamara acha dost hai...aur waise bhi hum jis ke saath bhi rahein tumhe us se kya?

Cabir:navya...i love you and I can't bare anyone close to you🥱

Navya:acha...toh hum kya achar dalain...hume tum se koi pyar vyar nahi hai...samjhe..aur Han apne us pagal bhai ko bhi samjha lo..hamari behn ke raaste main na aye..warna hum se bura koi nahi ho ga..ab dafa ho jayo yahan se..kyun hamari Jaan ke peeche pare ho?😡

Cabir:no baby...tumhari Jaan toh main nahi chorun ga..he smirked evilly...and pulled her close...

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Hello everyone...I'm new here and I hope you will like my new story...hope to see some good response...if I'll get then I'll update early...next will be the character sketch!!...




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Posted: 9 years ago
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Very nice and interesting possessive manik is always a treat to read continue waiting for next update
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow awesome start...
Possessive brothers...
Luved it...
update soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome
would love to see possessive Manik
update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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interesting plot
possessive brothers 🤣
continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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nice concept
possessive manik is treat to watch
is cabir possessive too
waise do pm me and continue soon (not able to send buddy request)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Character sketch:


Manik Malhotra: A 26 year old successful businessman...rich..hot and arrogant person..can go to any extent to get what he wants...his eyes were always on Nandini since childhood...loves her to the core...lives in malhotra mansion with Nandini...parents are not in india

Cabir Malhotra:Manik's brother..25 years old...they both are partners in malhotra industries..he is same like Manik...loves navya from childhood...

Nandini Murthy: a rich and cute bubbly girl..19 years old...studies in space academy...hates Manik a lot due to his arrogant nature...her parents and Manik's parents are best friends too..her parents are not in India...lives in malhotra mansion with Manik

Navya Singhania: nandini's childhood friend...is an orphan ..also studies in space academy..hates cabir...also lives in malhotra mansion..

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So here is the character sketch..hope all of you liked it...do give your reviews...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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nice story line
awesome prolounge
intersting
nice cs
continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Amazing CS
Loved it very much
eagerly waiting for the first part
update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Interesting prologue
Superb prologue

Waiting for the update


Update the part soon

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