Manan FF - The Possessive Brothers (note on pg 69) (Discontinued) - Page 3

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Chapter 2: Angry Monster!

Manik came inside in his angry face😡

Manik:Nandini murthy...in my room..right now!!..he shouted

I gulped my saliva...now what happened to him...wait why am I scared..I am Nandini murthy..I'm not scared of anyone..not even this monster..huh!😲

Nandini:and why should I come?🥱

Manik:because I said so...

Navya:eh akru...masla kya hai Han..apne kaam se kaam rakho!

I became happy navya shouted on him...I think now he won't do anything...

Cabir from behind:navya!!...shut up..un ke beech kuch na bolo

Navya:kyun na bolein hum..hamari behn hai wo..Hume poora haq hai!

Manik angrily pulled Nandini from there not caring about her protests...navya got up from the bed to run behind them but cabir pulled her and threw her back on the bed...

Cabir:agar ab bed se utri..then get ready to face the consequences!😡

Navya kept mum seeing him angry!

Manik pulled Nandini inside their room and locked the door

Nandini:tumhara masla kya hai...ab kya kar diya main ne?

Manik:what were you doing with that aryaman when I clearly told you not to go near him?

Nandini:uff..un chimpanzees ne bata diya tumhe...I knew they shouldn't be trusted!

Manik:shut up!..I appointed them to guard you..so that I know what you are up to!

Nandini:tumhe kya main jo bhi karun...jis ke saath phirun..use apna boyfriend banaon...it's my bloody life..got it!

When I said boyfriend unintentionally...I saw his face getting more redder...now I thought ab toh gayi main...uff nandu..kuch bakne se pehle hazaar baar socha kar...😕

Manik:boyfriend??...

He was coming near me and I was stepping back...I was chanting my ayiappa's name!!

Manik held her arms and pulled her with a jerk that she collided with his chest...and he shouted angrily

Manik:never ..never ever try to ditch me...u love only me...u r mine..suna tum ne...if I saw you near him again..I swear I will kill him!

Nandini:yeh kya pagalpan hai tumhara...and to clear ur misunderstanding I don't love you balke I hate you...

Manik:you love me...you have to love me..I haven't given you any option..suna tum ne!

His blood red eyes were scaring the hell out of me...I didn't say anything else..not to anger him more..ayiappa knows where it will lead us...he pushed me on the bed and went out from the room banging the door hard...

Nandini:no..yeh sab aur nahi chal sakta...main bhi dekhti Hun...wo aur us ka bhai kab tak Hume yahan rakhte hain...main..main mom dad ko call karun gi aur unhe sab bataon gi...no wait...last time main jab call karne wali thi...he..threatened me...

Flashback:

Manik:don't even think of calling your parents..or you will lose your virginity...he smirked

I got scared and threw the phone away..

Flashback ends

Nandini:yeh banda poora pagal hai..ise aur is ke bhai ko mental asylum main dalne ki zaroorat ...I remember when we first saw them...

Flashback:

We were only 6 or 7 years old...and we were in our room..my mom called us down..we quickly went and then I saw two boys around 12 to 13 years old ...they were staring us as if we were some meal...and some lady standing with them...

Nandini:ji mamma?

Mom:Nandini beta meet mrs.malhotra..my best friend

Mrs.malhotra:aww..she is so adorable

Nandini:thank you aunty

Mrs.malhotra:and who is the other girl

Nandini:she is my best friend..my sister...she stays with me..

Mrs.malhotra:aww..u both are so cute...and meet my sons...Manik and cabir

Manik:hello!..I'm manik malhotra

Nandini:hi I'm Nandini murthy

Cabir:and I am cabir malhotra

Navya:I am navya singhania!

Cabir:nice name...

Nandini's mom:Nandini and navya show ur room to them..go play..

Nandini:ok mamma...

The four went to Nandini and navya's room

Manik:nice room!

Nandini:thank you

I was showing them my room and all my toys...and navya was showing cabir her toys and things...then I also showed him my balcony...when we came out...he pulled me towards him...and kissed me on my cheeks...

Nandini:why u kissed me

Manik:because I like you and u r cute!

Nandini:dekho..main apni mamma ko bataon gi..mujh se dur raho

Manik:common nandu..I know u like me too...

I ignored him and ran inside and was shocked to see cabir sitting and navya was on his lap..she was trying to get off but cabir didn't let her go...I called navya and ran to her..I pulled her from him and was glaring at him

Navya started crying...

Nandini:main mamma ko bataon gi...I tried to run but Manik held me tight...

Manik:tum ne bataya toh bohat bura karun ga main tumhare saath..

I didn't care what he said and pushed him and ran down

Nandini:mamma...mamma ...

Mom:yes meri Jan..kya hua?

I told her everything..navya too came down crying...then aunty scolded Manik and cabir and they were glaring at us...

Mrs.malhotra:go..say sorry to them...

Me and navya were standing there quietly..and they came towards us..

Cabir:sorry navya!

Manik:sorry Nandini!

Nandini:it's ok

Navya:hmm

Mrs.malhotra:ok..Sheila..I will go then..phir Milne aon gi!

Sheila:ok nyo!

Nyonika:let's go manik and cabir

Manik and cabir were going..but turned towards us

Manik whispered to me:the game is not over...tum meri ho..remember that!

Cabir whispered to navya:and navya tum meri ho..I will come back for you

Our eyes widened and they went away smirking...😉

Flashback ends...

I sighed and laid down on the bed...soon sleep took over me and I slept...

Night (11:00pm)

Nandini's Pov: I was sleeping when I felt someone's hot breath fanning my neck...I slowly opened my eyes and saw Manik holding me tight and sleeping...this was our daily routine...Manik can't sleep without holding me and I hate it when he touches me..and if I say no to him...he gets angry..but who cares...I tried moving...and struggled to get free...looks like he was in deep sleep...I got out..but I kept my stole near him and he clutched it near his chest...I sighed in relief and went out of the room...

I came down and saw no one there..the whole mansion was dark...I slowly went out to get some fresh air...in the garden...and I was admiring the stars shining bright...I so wish that I could have them...hehe...but I can't fly..

I was thinking that it was the best time to escape from here through the back side without anyone noticing..But I can't leave navya here...I once tried to run away with her..but we were caught and then what happened after it..I don't want to remember..

I sighed and started going back inside...I was about to enter in our room when I saw navya slowly coming out of her room..she was looking scared...I ran after her...

Nandini:navya kya hua..why do you look so scared?

Navya:are hum chup ke bahar ayein hain...tumhare paas hi a rahe the...

Nandini:but why?

Navya:chalo...yahan se bhaag chalte hain..kisi ko pata nahi chale ga!

Nandini:navya pagal ho gayi ho..yaad hai last time kya hua tha..they tied us to chairs as a punishment..u want that to repeat?

Navya:toh kya poori zindagi yehi guzarne ka irada hai...is bar koi pakar nahi paye ga...hum dhyan rakhen ge..chalo chalte hain..is se pehle wo dono Uth jayein...

Nandini:navya this is totally a bad idea..I'm scared

Navya:are kuch nahi ho ga...hum dono yahan se bhaag niklen ge..aur police main un ki complaint bhi karain ge..un dono ko jail main daal kar rahein ge

Nandini:are you sure...but kisi ne pakar liya toh?..

Navya:don't worry..ab jaldi chalo...

She started dragging me from there and we came outside..

PRECAP: navni missing...manbir angry!!

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Early update...now plz hit the like button...and tell me if you are liking my ff...should I continue with it...and keep guessing If Manik and cabir will find them or not?



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Posted: 9 years ago
#22
Loved it. :)
Update soon. Waitinggg :)
AMZING concept. :*
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Posted: 9 years ago
#23
amazing update
both the chappies r amazing
manbir are hell possessive towards navni
bechari navni and they r scared of them
manbir r really monsters
I really loved the chappy
update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#24
Thanks for the PMs
Can't believe Manik and Cabir were like that even at the age of 12- 13 years...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#25
nice story concept...
manbir is so possessive...
poor navni ...hv to suffer...
bachpan se he they r like tht...
hope they naa mile...
cont. soon...
plz mention wen u update...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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awesome update ...plz continue coz i m loving ittt
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Interesting story...plz give index...n update soon..take care.. 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow...amazing concept.. Manbir vs navni..maza aayega..plz update soon...n all d bst for ur story...😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Chapter 3:


Navya dragged me outside...we saw a the guards standing outside keeping a watch...

Nandini:navya wo Hume pakar Len ge...we have to go from the back

Navya:Han nandu...jaldi chalo

We went to the back and saw guards there too...huff...I hate my fate...

Nandini:navya ab kya?..I know this is totally a bad idea..

Navya:theek hai tum jao Wapis Manik ke pas..us ke saath khushi khushi zindagi bitana..theek hai!

Nandini:ok ok..stop...ab kya karain?

Navya:hamare paas aik idea hai...

Nandini:kya?

Navya:dewar se kud jaate hain

My mouth was wide open

Nandini:dewar se?..but hum dewar se kaise kuude ge?

Navya:tum bas chalo..yehi akhri raasta hai..

Nandini:ok

We went towards the back wall...and it was like 5 feet tall...we took some pots and put them one on another..then we climbed and jumped one by one...and yay...we were out!

Nandini:thank God...navya yahan se kud toh Gaye...ab kya?

Navya:hum apne purane ghar toh ja nahi sakte...first we will have to call your mom and dad...unhe sab batain ge..aur wo hamari madad zaroor karain ge...unhe yahan bulain ge!

Nandini:lekin navya jab tak mom dad yahan ayein ge..hum tab tak rahain ge kahan..

Navya:wo toh hum ne socha nahi!

Nandini:wow...miss naveli aap ne bahar nikalne ka socha...but yeh nahi is ke baad kya!...I'm telling you wo dono monsters zameen asmaan aik kar den ge Hume dhoondne ke liye

Navya:aryaman ke ghar chalain?

Nandini:Han..but hum use kya kahein ge..wait..or agar unho ne Hume wahan bhi dhoond liya toh?

Navya:toh kya karain..hamari kuch samaj nahi a raha...lekin hum wahan Wapis nahi jayein ge..jo bhi ho jaye

Nandini:wait...hamara purana apartment...us jaga ke baare me in toh wo nahi jante hon ge..right?

Navya:wahan ki keys?

Nandini:wo toh caretaker ke pas hon gi...

Navya:Han jaldi chalo...

I nodded...and we went to find a cab...luckily we got it..and sat and I told the address and we went...thank you so much ayiappa...

Manik's Pov:I was sleeping peacefully dreaming about my lady love...we were having our romantic date and I was kissing her so passionately...I wish this dream comes true...I so wish my Nandini accepts me...girls drool over me..they die just to talk to me...but I care a damn...but this Nandini...what else does she want...I'm handsome..hot...what else does a girl wants...ok...so I was dreaming and I was about to mark her mine...when my phone rang...oh damn this phone...I slowly opened my eyes..and didn't find my Nandini...I was holding her stole..and sleeping...

First I got angry but then I thought she must be in the washroom...I walked towards it..and kicked like 5 ..6 times...but no voice came from her...

Manik:where could she go??...😡

I quickly went out to find her..I checked the whole mansion..but she was no where...I swear if she ran away this time...I will surely go mad..or do something to her when I find her...Nandini murthy u ur self called trouble...I quickly went to cabir's room...hoping that navya is also not gone...because she can't leave her here if she went..and if she is here..then Nandini will come back to me...

I knocked the door...and saw cabir opening his eyes

Cabir:yes bro?

Manik:navya kahan hai?

Cabir confused:navya is sleeping...he glanced towards the bed and had a shocked face...I knew she is also not there...damnit

Cabir:navya kahan gayi??

Manik:Nandini is also missing..I said angrily

We angrily went downstairs and I shouted to call the guards..they quickly came having scared faces...of course..they will be scared...after all I'm Manik malhotra...everyone is scared of me...

I asked sternly or rather shouted

Manik:where..is..Nandini?

Cabir:and navya?

Guard started stammering

G:I..I don't know sir!

Manik:what do u mean by u don't know..who else would know..they are missing...did they just disappear like ghosts..u didn't even notice when they went?...I shouted at him and he was scared like hell

G:I..I didn't see them sir

Manik:find them damnit..or else..I will kill you...go call everyone..and find them..and bring them to us...go quick!!

Guard ran outside...

I saw cabir angrily sitting on the couch...

Manik:Cabir don't worry...hum unhe dhoond Len ge!

Cabir:how could she go...last time ka torture shahid bhool gayi wo..is bar aisa sabak sikhaon ga...she will never ever think of running...

Manik:yes..this time..we will tell them...they have theirselves called for trouble...

We had determined faces to find them

Nandini's Pov:
We finally reached our apartment...and went inside...the house was still the same...I was happy that finally we were out from hell..but only ayiappa knows till meri khushi kab tak rahe gi...I rushed towards my bedroom and navya went to hers...I crashed on my bed to have peaceful sleep..after like ages...not caring about what the new day brings for us...

Next day the birds were chirping..sun rays were peeping inside my room...I woke up and stretched...and went to have breakfast...I saw navya sitting on the dining table...I greeted her and she too said good morning...

Nandini:I think I should call mom now

Navya:hmm..

I picke up my phone..and dialed her number...the number was going busy...

Nandini:I'll try later..the call is busy...

Navya:ok

Nandini:today we can't go to college...

Navya:yeah..kyun na hum aaj maza karain..chalo koi movie dekhte hain..ill make popcorns..

Nandini:ok!

Manik's Pov:it was soon morning...I was shouting on my bodyguards...as they didn't find her..and bring her back..I was so angry..I just wanted to kill them...cabir was also angrily barking at them...I thought it's time to call police...I have my own contacts...police will surely find them..and if they don't..hell is also waiting for them...as they don't know my power...Nandini murthy..just this once come back...and I will tell you the result of ditching me and running away...I also ordered my guards to check aryamans house..hoping to find her there...but she was not...she was lucky she wasn't there..coz if I found her there...I don't know what would I have done...and I also checked her previous house..but to my bad luck..she wasn't there also...God..Nandini where are you???

I finally called the commissioner and told him or rather ordered him to find our girls...he agreed and quickly made some calls...now I know Nandini and navya will surely come back to us..when they are found!

And this time I will surely tie her with myself...so that she doesn't runs away..hehe..😆

The police came to our mansion..and they checked the cctv footage..which was outside ..we saw navya and Nandini climbing the wall...smart girl...well she will surely pay for her smartness...soon!...then we also saw them taking a cab...luckily we saw the cabs number plate...they noted the number .. and said now it will be easy for them to find them

Cabir:quickly..go find them...and bring them..I can't wait more..

Policeman:ok sir..don't worry..we will bring them to you!

Saying this they went...and I sighed and waited to get any news...

PRECAP:navni found...
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I don't know what crap I have written...I'm very happy u all are liking my story...plz keep supporting me...I will update next part soon!
And keep guessing what will happen next..😉



Edited by LovelyKat - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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AWESOME UPDATE DEAR
LOVE IT
possessive manbir
plz continu soon
take care

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