Manan FF - The Possessive Brothers (note on pg 69) (Discontinued) - Page 2

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Posted: 9 years ago
#11
hehe...its cute...please continue baby...possessive manik and cabir...it will be a treat to read... looking forward to read the ff... please update soon and pm me...


keep writing <3
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Sounds super interssting
Do pm me
Lol first I was like possessive brothers ok nice n then started reading n I was like possessive boyfriend toh nahi ahah
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Posted: 9 years ago
#13
Awesome and intersting
Possessive manik
Plz continu soon
Take care
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Posted: 9 years ago
#14
Very interesting story
Possessive brothers ..Manik and Cabir
Update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#15
nice cs
plz continu soon
take care
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Posted: 9 years ago
#16
Malhotra mansion hai ki Dharamshala... All stay there only
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey...very interesting story.
Nd monster possessive Manik is my all time favourite. :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Monstuholic4evr

Malhotra mansion hai ki Dharamshala... All stay there only

True 🤣🤪
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Chapter 1:



Nandini Pov: samajta kya hai khud ko..jo kahe ga main wo karun gi...like seriously...ayiappa ...wo kon sa manhoos din tha...jab main ne is ki shakal dekhi thi...aap ne meri kismat main ise hi likha tha...why???...nahi aaj aap bata hi do why???😡

I was going towards canteen when I bumped into aryaman

Nandini:oh sorry!!

Aryaman:it's ok..bdw where is ur other half?

Nandini:ooh..navya...wo aaj nahi ayi!

Aryaman:kyun?

Nandini murmurs:pagal us ke peeche jo parh Gaya...Zara si chot ayi pair main and she is not even allowed to put her foot down from the bed...

Aryaman:kya?

Nandini:she is not well..that's why

Aryaman:hmm...

Nandini Pov:I was talking with aryaman when I saw those 2 chimpanzees standing over there and staring me like I have done some crime...of course I did...I talked to a boy!!..and now in no time...this news will be gone to their boss...urgghhh...and then their boss will come running to me...and then he will pull me in a class...scold me and then he will kiss me forcefully and then we will fight and he will take me home...and what other punishment he'll give me...only ayiappa knows!...ooh wow...I really well know him...monster kehi ka...😆

Those bodyguards of his were eyeing me...

Nandini:aryaman I have to rush home..

Aryaman:ok..come I'll drop you home!

Nandini:no..no wait!

Aryaman:ok...why are u shouting?

Nandini:sorry...I have some other work..first I will go there...it's ok..ill manage!

Aryaman:ok..bye then

Nandini:yeah bye

After bidding him bye...I went after those chimpanzees...

Nandini:meri shakal pe moti sitare lage hue hain?

Bodyguard1 confused:nahi toh!

Nandini:aise kya dekh rahe ho..chalo...aur dekho apne monster boss ko batane ki zaroorat nahi hai..ok..

Bodyguard2:we get money for doing this..we have to tell him

Nandini:oh mere pyare chimpanzees..apni behn ke saath aisa karo ge!..very bad...main ne toh aap ko apna bhai mana tha...aur aap..aap meri complaint Karo ge...pata hai wo mujh pe itna zulm karta hai...nahi..aap log nahi jaante..mera dukh koi nahi Jan sakta...😭

Those chimpanzees eyes were becoming moist..thanks to my super acting...hehe😛

Bodyguard 1:theek hai..hum sir ko nahi bataein ge..

Bodyguard2:yes

Nandini:haye..aise bhai har kisi ko milen!

Wow..nandu..u should become an actor...ab us ki punishment se toh Bach gayi...

Nandini:chalo chimpanzees..ghar chalain

Bodyguard 1:aap Hume chimpanzees kyun bulati hain?

Nandini:are yeh toh mera pyar hai apne bhai ke liye is liye bulati Hun...
Now let's go

Huh..pyar...dil toh karta hai...inhe jungle main bhej doon...sahi jaga hai in ke liye...chimpanzee ki shakal wale!😃

I was walking towards the malhotra mansion...praying that monster shouldn't be home...

Servant:hello mam!

Nandini:monster ghar per hai?

Servant:monster?

Nandini:are wo akru..tumhara boss..aur kon...aaj ke zamane main us jaisa monster kon ho sakta hai...

Servant:mam..sir is not home!

Nandini:haye shukar hai ayiappa ka...acha batao..wo dusra akru hai?

Servant:oh..cabir sir...yes he is with navya sir

Nandini:ok..jao

Servant:ok mam

Nandini:dusra akru ghar per hi hai...bichari navya..aur bichari main...kahan phas gaye hum dono...kahan hum sukoon se apni life ji rahe the...aur ab...uff...ayiappa aap ne monsters banane se pehle socha nahi...ke aap ki nandu aur navya ka kya ho ga!..nahi socha na...very bad ayiappa!

I was blabbering to myself when I saw mr.akru no 2 coming towards me

Cabir:hellooo bhabhi ji..aap padhaar ayi hain...aur enter hote hi hamari buraiyaan shuru!

Nandini:oh hello..I'm not ur bhabhi..samjhe

Cabir:abhi nahi..toh ban jayo ge...

Nandini:acha batao..meri behn kaisi hai?...use kha toh nahi Gaye na?

Cabir:ji main apni navya ko kuch hone bhi nahi de sakta!..wo bilkul theek hai

Nandini:acha..hato mere raaste se!

I pushed him and ran towards navya's room or should I say cabir and navya's room...I entered inside and saw her saying something holding some picture with a black marker...

Nandini:hello navya!

Navya:nandu..tu a gayi..

Nandini:Han..aur yeh bata..yeh kis ki photo hai?

Navya:oh yeh...yeh dekh...

I saw the photo and we both burst out laughing...she had made mustache of Manik and cabir on the photo and beard too!!👏

Nandini:hahahahah navya...good...main toh kehti Hun ise frame karwa lete hain..what say?

Navya:not a bad idea though!

Nandini:ok..batao..how's ur feet..is it paining still?

Navya:no..Zara si chot thi..hume koi dard bhi nahi hai...awaein Sara din bus bore hoti gayi..aur akru no2 hamare peeche para raha..yeh nahi karna wo nahi karna...bed se nahi utarna...yeh khao wo khao...ufff...hum toh kasam se thak Gaye hain!

Nandini:navya mere pas aik plan hai!

Navya:kya...kaisa plan!

Nandini:main kehti Hun...raat ko yeh akru soyein ge..toh hum na in ka katal kar dete hain...aur ham azaad ho jayein ge!

Navya:nandu pagal ho gayi ho...agar hum inhe mar den ge phir Hume jail jana pare ga..aur wahan pe acha Khana the bhi nahi milta..wahi sukhi daal Roti...aye haye..nahi..

Nandini:baat toh sahi hai!

We were talking when I saw that monster or should I say akru no.1 barging inside having that famous angry face of his...oh no...chimpanzee ne kuch bata toh nahi diya...ayiappa save me!!plz!!..lagta hai bomb phatne wala hai...☢️

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Hehe...I don't know what I have written..sorry if it's not up to the mark..next will be monsters entry..do hit the like button..and comment too if you want early update😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
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SERIOUSLY!!!!! LIKE SERIOUSLY!!!!!
MANBIR R BROTHERS... AUR DONO NAVNI SA PYAAR KARTA HA...AUR KITNA POSSESSIVE HA MANBIR...
THAT'S INTERESTING... NEXT PART PLZ ASAP...

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