Manan FF - The Possessive Brothers (note on pg 69) (Discontinued) - Page 23

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Posted: 9 years ago
Amazing update
Nandini ne soha ki band baja di
Nandini's weird proposal ...haha
Manik fainted
And he saw their daughter in his dream 🤣
Update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome update... soha poha ...whatever... but amazing...nandini's confession... omg ...out of the world... so manik ko center shock toh lagna hi tha ...ha ha ha ...suoerb update ...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Amazing update...
Nandini confession was out of world...too hilarious...
Manik fainted after nandu confessions...hahaha...
Manik dream of his daughter cryg...too gud...
Soha ko tho poha bana dala...
Can't forget this update...
Thx for making us laugh so much...
Ur d best...
Take care
Waitg eagerly for ur update...
Sorry for late comment...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hello there 😊...I just read 3chapters in one go I was busy that's why I don't get the time but now I read it... It was awesome... Nandu calls soha poha 😆still laughing... Nandu love manik... Like the way nandu proposed manik... Manik fainted n he thought he was seeing a dream hehe... Jealous nandu thanks poha 😆for that...
Waiting for the next

Please pm me

Lots of love

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Posted: 9 years ago


I didn't update deliberately...looks like no one was missing my story...
Anyways...here's the next part...

Chapter 14:

Nandini's Pov: when I told Manik...he was so happy...and I also became happy seeing him happy...aww...he looks so cute...

Nandini: Manik..I want ice cream...

Manik: abhi?

Nandini: yes abhi...

Manik: Nandini it's late..main kal le aon ga...

Nandini: nahi..mujhe abhi chahiye..matlab abhi...as we r officially in a relationship...there would be some rules...

Manik: what rules?

Nandini: rule no1: you will listen to everything I say...no arguments...

Rule no2: u have to bring ice cream for me every night...

Rule no3: u will not look at any other girl...if u see..then I will kill you...

Rule no4: u will go college with me once a week...

Rule no5: if you don't follow these rules...then I will break up with you...

Manik smiles: and this is my nandu...hahah

Nandini: I'm serious...

Manik: ok...

Nandini: now go..bring me ice cream...

Manik nodded n stood up..

Manik in his mind: I'm her boyfriend or servant???

Nandini: both!!

Manik looks at her shocked

Manik: how did you know what I was thinking?

Nandini: bus..I know you...

Manik smiled n kissed her cheeks...

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Manik: Nandini...u won't feed me?

Nandini: ...no..it's my ice cream...

Manik made a sad face...

Nandini: ok..here you go..Manik's face lit up and Nandini fed him...

Nandini: Manik...I want to go to ur office tomorrow..plz plz plz...

Manik: no Nandini..u will get bored n I will be busy in my work...

Nandini made a sad face: you don't love me na...that's why ur not taking me...what if u r hiding some girl from me in ur office...who is more beautiful than me...

Manik: no baby..I only love you...ok fine..ill take you tomorrow...

Nandini hugs him: aww thanku thanku...I love you!

After a while...both slept hugging each other...

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It was soon morning..everyone were doing breakfast...

Nandini: uncle..aaj main bhi office jaon gi Manik ke saath...

Raj: ooh..that's good...u both will spend time together...

Soha was angry...

Navya: nandu..tum college nahi ao gi?

Nandini: nope...
Kal mom bhi a rahi hain...aur hum Wapis apne ghar chale jayein ge...she said sadly...

Soha smiled evilly...

Manik: no ur not going anywhere...

Nandini: kyun?

Manik: dad..aap aunty se baat kar Lena..ke Nandini nahi jaye gi...

Raj: per...

Manik: plz dad...

Cabir: aur Navya bhi...

Navya: nahi hum Wapis jayein ge..she glared at Cabir...

Nandini: Navya...tum mere baghair Reh lo gi?

Navya: nahi...

Nandini: theek hai..phir main bhi tumhare saath jaon gi...

Manik: no way Nandini...

Nandini: I can't leave Navya alone...aur hum roz milen ge na...

After a lot of arguments..Nandini made Manik say yes...

Manik: ok fine!!

Nandini smiled...

Soha: don't worry Nandini..ill be here for Manik...she smiled evilly...
Nandini glared at her...

Manik: ok Nandini lets go..

Nandini: ok

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Manik was working and Nandini was sitting on the couch..looking at him...

Nandini: Manik I'm bored!

Manik: go play out then...

Nandini: Manik I'm serious...

Manik: I told you u will get bored but tum nahi sun rahi thi...

One employee entered his cabin...to give him some file...

Nandini: hi..I'm Nandini murthy...

Vivek: hi..I'm Vivek Samthaan!

Nandini: omggg!!!!

Vivek: what?

Nandini: ur a Samthaan!!!

Vivek: yeah..so...

Manik slapped his forehead!

Nandini: I can't tell you..I'm ur biggest fan...

Vivek: wow..I have a fan..but aap mujhe kaise jaanti hain?

Nandini: are from ur surname...since ur a Samthaan...I can be ur fan...u know Parth Samthaan..right?

Vivek: yeah..use kon nahi jaanta...even I'm his biggest fan...!!

Nandini: haye...mere jaisa koi aur bhi hai...u know I just love samthaan's
N ur one of them...

Vivek blushes...

Manik: get out Vivek!!!

Vivek got scared n he literally ran out...

Manik: Nandini...he's not Parth Samthaan...

Nandini: so what...he is a Samthaan...

Manik: oh God..what will I do with you...

Nandini: Manik..I have an idea!

Manik: now what??

Nandini: let's change ur surname...how about Manik Samthaan...n then when I'll marry you...ill be a Samthaan right??

Manik: I wish I had a tape right now!!

Nandini starts crying...

Manik went to her...n cupped her face...

Manik: plz don't cry baby!

Nandini: Manik..you don't love me!

Manik: I do love you!!

Nandini: u can't change ur name for me...

Manik: Nandini..plz..u know na I can't..

Nandini: fine..if u don't want to change...then u will have to become murgha...

Manik shocked: what??

Nandini: yes...become murgha right now...

Manik: no Nandini..I'm not doing that...

Nandini: is ka matlab u don't love me...😭

Manik: ok fine...

Manik became murgha n Nandini couldn't stop laughing...

Nandini: hahahahaahha 😆
Aww Manik I love you...Manik glared at her...
Isi tarha meri baat sunte raha Karo..or I will change my boyfriend...

Another employee came in...

Nandini: hi I'm Nandini murthy...

Vihaan: hi..I'm vihaan Samthaan...viveks brother...

Nandini: omggg...really??

Manik: out!!😡
He shouted on vihaan

Vihaan: oo..ok sir...he went out

Manik: Nandini if you say another word...ill change my girlfriend...

Nandini quietly sat down...😕


To be continued...



Edited by LovelyKat - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hahahaha
It was so funny
Awww manik is
So cute
He is listing everything
What she is saying
Awesome update
Update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
it's too funny
he he he
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hey i jus read ur stry..
Itz amazing..
I luvd it..
Manik doing watever nandiniz saying..
Hehe..
Plz pm me
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Posted: 9 years ago
😃 hilarious updates...samthaan brothers..ha ha ha..
evil soha..kya karne wala in absence of nandu..
poor manik..pyaar main kya kya karna parta hain...
everyone who read your story..missed your updates dear..
don't be sad or angry plz..
it's just because of exams issues..
take care...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Amazing update...
Manik following nandini's commands...
Luved it...
Plz continue soon...
Waiting eagerly...
Take care...
Stay blessed...

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