Manan FF - The Possessive Brothers (note on pg 69) (Discontinued) - Page 10

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Amazing update
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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When will you update ???
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Sorry guys..I haven't uploaded for a while...actually I have an exam tomorrow...so I was busy studying...ill try to update soon!!..don't worry!!
Stay blessed :)😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Chapter 7:

Manik and cabir went with their dad and me and navya went to set our room...thank God..now I'll stay away from him

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Raj:what is this Manik and cabir?..you can't force them to marry you...are these your manners??...he asked angrily

Manik:but dad...I want to marry her..and she wasn't listening so...

Raj:so what...you will just order her...this is very bad...and cabir..at least I didn't expect this from you!

Cabir:sorry dad..but still I will only marry navya no matter what..aap ko jo kehna hai keh lo...

Raj:tum log aise zabardasti nahi kar sakte...if you love them..try to make your space in their hearts...dekhna unhe bhi tum Se pyar ho jaye ga...lekin tum log koshish bhi nahi kar rahe ho!!

Manik:ok..we won't force them...but will try to make our space!

Raj:good!

Cabir:lekin..

Raj:enough cabir...agar tum force Karo ge...then I'll make you marry someone else!

Cabir:no no...I will also try my best!

Manik:ab hum jayein..ya aur kuch kehna hai ap ko?

Raj:no..it's enough..and I hope you understood what I said...agar mujhe dobara complain ayi un se toh...u know me!!😡...he replied sternly!

Manik:ok

Raj:now leave!!

They both left and closed the door

Manik:I know...if I even try she will still be stubborn...

Cabir:Han...kyaa plan hai?

Manik:dad ke saamne toh we can't do anything...ab lets see!

Cabir:hmm

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Nandini's Pov: I kept my things neatly in my room...and lied down on the bed...then I thought to watch a movie...then I plucked in the CD in the dvd...

After a while...

OMG!!...I have to tell Manik!!

I quickly went to Manik's room and knocked on the door!

Manik opened the door:tum?

Nandini:yes me...

I was panting heavily as I ran all the way here...

Manik:what happened?

I pushed him inside and came in...

Nandini:I have to tell u something...and it's really important!

Manik:Han bolo?

Nandini:I ..I saw a dinasaur!

Manik confused:what?

Nandini:yes Manik..I really saw it...and I'm scared what if it comes here and eat me

Manik laughing:Nandini..dinosaurs aren't alive..their extinct...haha...😆have u gone mad?

Nandini:no..but I saw just now!

Manik:where?

Nandini:on the tv!...I saw it was eating a man...I'm horrified...what kind of animals ayiappa have made!

Manik:I think I will definitely go mad!!

Nandini:are I'm not lying...come I'll show you...I think we need to close all the doors in the mansion..what if it comes sneaking in?

Manik:really...what if it comes Nandini..what will we do...we will be eaten alive...

Nandini:yes that's what I'm saying...we will talk to him..that plz mr.dinosaur don't eat us...we are still in our jawani...and we want to die old

Manik:yep..ur right..we will talk to him..but Nandini...what if it doesn't listens...I think you should stay here with me in my room...ill talk to him to not eat you alive!

Nandini:in ur room?

I asked shocked

Manik:yes...I care for you na...and I won't let any dinosaur eat you!

Nandini:aww...ur such a sweetheart Manik...ok I'll stay here...but only for one night!

Manik:no no...what if it comes the other night..we can't risk na Baba...that's why I'm saying

He is 100% correct...I think I should say yes...I don't want to be eaten!then I saw him smirking..what if it's his plan or something...what if he has planned to eat me...what if he is a dinosaur...u never know...that humans can also turn into freaking animals!!...ayiappa...what a kind...

Manik:kya hua...yes or no?

Nandini:umm ok...

Manik:but don't tell my dad ok...he will scold me..and u know na...I'm just helping you!!😃

Nandini:ok..I won't...bye..I quickly left...

Manik's Pov:thank you so much dinosaurs...at least now my nandu will stay with me...hehe...she is a total psyco package...hahahahah...if dinosaurs were really alive na..then I would personally thank them...well I pity Cabir...he doesn't get to stay with navya...



I know it's a crappy part...but abhi yehi likh saki..hope you like it...
Now I have to revise..have an exam tomorrow...





Edited by LovelyKat - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#96
😛😆 😃 funny updates...
Good luck for your exams...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#97
Awesome update dear
Love it
Mad nandu hahahahh
Plz continu soon
Take care
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Posted: 9 years ago
#98
its too funny update...
manik dad gv them good advice...
dinosaur is alive...hahha...nandini is too funny...
manik got chance to stay with nandini...
take care...
all d best for ur exam...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#99
ha ha ha ha funny update ...n nandini ...she is so cutee ...thanx for the pm sweety...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Read all parts in a go
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Luv u sooo much yaar
Thnk u sooo much for giving us such a awsm nd fabulous updates
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Plz update the next part soon
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